Xylo vs. ((Noggah)) - Punches

[Noggah]

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[Xylo]

check!

[Noggah]

anyone there???
i cant see clear...
anyone there???
i cant see clear...
anyone there???
i cant see clear...
anyone there???
i cant see clear...
anyone there???
i cant see clear...
anyone there???
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anyone there???
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anyone there???
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anyone there???
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anyone there???
i cant see clear...

[Xylo]

If your avy depicts ya looks no wonder you hide behind it
yellow stripe where your spine sits aunt esther Ugliness contributes to your demise quick!
Pound you literally with bars till you`re soft like hair Gell
Acustomed to gettin ya ass handed to you in visits to jail cells!
keepin your jaws locked around cocks wearin ya boston red socks
Every click of the clock you ridin balognie ponies like kentucky derb Jocks!
Fuck the limp wrist talk cuz this beat down aint usual
Moms almost aborted this y-chromo fag so your un-existance wouldve been crucial!
Hmp!being butchered in Topicals before the coming of "08"
Ko`d by LEGEND 3-0 tripped an Fell because you couldnt elavate!
Approach me with hate Ethiopians pose no weight to do battle friend
contests between Lions and Men leave an L on ya record FASTER than "Half wit it" did!
Spittin straight heat was what you really aimed to do
But you missed an couldnt spit heat if breathin through a molten lava tube!
How you claimin beast status but your lost list shows the contrary
you gettin Quaked like aftershocks and rocked like cedementary!
Drop these clues on you like Nancy drew mysteries
leave your carcass bloated stinkin like boston cod fisheries.
It aint the holidays but i`ll comet cupid, donner and i`ll blitzen thee
AT the count of three your reign will be over like the holocaust history.
Niggas 0n Gays Greatly Act Hard fam !
Zylos words dont lie its what ya screen name implies man!

Xylophone!

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[Noggah]

ah, nice verse... here we go...

my punches will put Xylo in a spin cycle... then take em to the cleaners...
He wont even have his own 2 cents to add and rub between his fingers....
this dudes tryna buy a cow... i just sneak in n get the milk for free...
so Xy "Rookie of the Year"??...i'll break his arm n send him back to little league...
this dudes so stupid he thought committin a cardinal sin was killin birds...
so its a must i leave his brains all over the screen like films with nerds...
Xylophone was made to be beat on... i guess that means I'm a rubber mallet..
so this dude a flavor enhancer?? for that RF'd have to change our fuckin palate...
you think you have what it takes to write for the mag cause u did a sports column???
thats like making a Roman Catholic Priest out of the comedian George Carlin...
this dude ballin...nonsense...he dont even got a two year plan...
n only time hes had "buck fever" was gettin "cant shoot deer" hands...
I dont think ladies follow the gospel, i had to tell girls he existed...
cause this dudes ugly as sin... he could turn the whole world into christians!!!
Plot's matchin a legend in the game with someone who hasnt played the sport yet....
thats like comparing 90 year old double D's to young ones placed in a corset...
im crematin this dude, with his ashes swept up under the carpet and left...
cause, armed to the teeth, i'll missile zylo like places where rockets are kept!!
hows ya shit bangin... when its only played through computer speakers...
so i welcome you to stare in awe at what u cant have... like a Hooters greeter...

[Xylo]

Man i`m sorry but your verse made me laugh at myself LOL!!!

"you think you have what it takes to write for the mag cause u did a sports column???
thats like making a Roman Catholic Priest out of the comedian George Carlin..."


That was bananas ha!haa!!

[7th Crescent]

Xylo:
If your avy depicts ya looks no wonder you hide behind it
yellow stripe where your spine sits aunt esther Ugliness contributes to your demise quick!
--decent..kinda forced last line
Pound you literally with bars till you`re soft like hair Gell
Acustomed to gettin ya ass handed to you in visits to jail cells!
--kinda played ass and jails...
keepin your jaws locked around cocks wearin ya boston red socks
Every click of the clock you ridin balognie ponies like kentucky derb Jocks!
--nice flow but not effective..and leave the Red Soxs alone!!
Fuck the limp wrist talk cuz this beat down aint usual
Moms almost aborted this y-chromo fag so your un-existance wouldve been crucial!
--ok
Hmp!being butchered in Topicals before the coming of "08"
Ko`d by LEGEND 3-0 tripped an Fell because you couldnt elavate!
-not feeling it..
Approach me with hate Ethiopians pose no weight to do battle friend
contests between Lions and Men leave an L on ya record FASTER than "Half wit it" did!
--im feeling this..
Spittin straight heat was what you really aimed to do
But you missed an couldnt spit heat if breathin through a molten lava tube!
--decent flip on other wise played concept..
How you claimin beast status but your lost list shows the contrary
you gettin Quaked like aftershocks and rocked like cedementary!
---ehhh
Drop these clues on you like Nancy drew mysteries
leave your carcass bloated stinkin like boston cod fisheries.
--like the last line...what the hell you got against Boston lol..leave my 617 out of it
It aint the holidays but i`ll comet cupid, donner and i`ll blitzen thee
AT the count of three your reign will be over like the holocaust history.
---um no..the reindeer shit was corny..lmao..your a funny dude tho
Niggas 0n Gays Greatly Act Hard fam !
Zylos words dont lie its what ya screen name implies man!
--weak closer

you have the concept down just need some fresh and maybe more effective material...


Nog:

my punches will put Xylo in a spin cycle... then take em to the cleaners...
He wont even have his own 2 cents to add and rub between his fingers....
--lol..last line was ok..decent opener
this dudes tryna buy a cow... i just sneak in n get the milk for free...
so Xy "Rookie of the Year"??...i'll break his arm n send him back to little league...
-lol..
this dudes so stupid he thought committin a cardinal sin was killin birds...
so its a must i leave his brains all over the screen like films with nerds...
---ehhh
Xylophone was made to be beat on... i guess that means I'm a rubber mallet..
so this dude a flavor enhancer?? for that RF'd have to change our fuckin palate...
--nice personal..effective
you think you have what it takes to write for the mag cause u did a sports column???
thats like making a Roman Catholic Priest out of the comedian George Carlin...
--LMAO!!!!thats fucking hilarious....
this dude ballin...nonsense...he dont even got a two year plan...
n only time hes had "buck fever" was gettin "cant shoot deer" hands...
--ehh
I dont think ladies follow the gospel, i had to tell girls he existed...
cause this dudes ugly as sin... he could turn the whole world into christians!!!
--lol...
Plot's matchin a legend in the game with someone who hasnt played the sport yet....
thats like comparing 90 year old double D's to young ones placed in a corset...
--very ugly visual..now that is horror core..lol
im crematin this dude, with his ashes swept up under the carpet and left...
cause, armed to the teeth, i'll missile zylo like places where rockets are kept!!
--not feelin it
hows ya shit bangin... when its only played through computer speakers...
so i welcome you to stare in awe at what u cant have... like a Hooters greeter
--nice closer

nice verse Nog..had me rollin over here...


Over all this was pretty one sided..Xylo seemed to force a few punche IMO...Nog just clowned him the pretty much the whole way thru...

Vote: Nog

he just had more effective verse IMO...

[TeNdEnCiEz]

Nice battle! Good personals coming from Xy, nice shots. Nog, had some funny shots in his verse as well. It was pretty even match from where i sit. Carlin line was hot, Nice nameplay as well. it was hard to call, but in the end i had to give to Nog. I liked his verse just a touch better than Xy's,but nice show out by you Xy. Keep dropping...

Vote: Nog

[Schematic]

If your avy depicts ya looks no wonder you hide behind it
yellow stripe where your spine sits aunt esther Ugliness contributes to your demise quick!
^ nah..
Pound you literally with bars till you`re soft like hair Gell
Acustomed to gettin ya ass handed to you in visits to jail cells!
^ used up
keepin your jaws locked around cocks wearin ya boston red socks
Every click of the clock you ridin balognie ponies like kentucky derb Jocks!
^ lol
Fuck the limp wrist talk cuz this beat down aint usual
Moms almost aborted this y-chromo fag so your un-existance wouldve been crucial!
^ k
Hmp!being butchered in Topicals before the coming of "08"
Ko`d by LEGEND 3-0 tripped an Fell because you couldnt elavate!
^ aight
Approach me with hate Ethiopians pose no weight to do battle friend
contests between Lions and Men leave an L on ya record FASTER than "Half wit it" did!
^ aight
Spittin straight heat was what you really aimed to do
But you missed an couldnt spit heat if breathin through a molten lava tube!
^ cool.. lil played
How you claimin beast status but your lost list shows the contrary
you gettin Quaked like aftershocks and rocked like cedementary!
^ ehh
Drop these clues on you like Nancy drew mysteries
leave your carcass bloated stinkin like boston cod fisheries.
^ alright.. not much sting tho
It aint the holidays but i`ll comet cupid, donner and i`ll blitzen thee
AT the count of three your reign will be over like the holocaust history.
^ used up
Niggas 0n Gays Greatly Act Hard fam !
Zylos words dont lie its what ya screen name implies man!
^ heh, couldve ended harder tho

Decent verse, some parts flowed together really well. You gotta think about what people havent already used up, thats whats makes battling these days tough. Nice work tho Xy


Nog-
my punches will put Xylo in a spin cycle... then take em to the cleaners...
He wont even have his own 2 cents to add and rub between his fingers....
^ eh
this dudes tryna buy a cow... i just sneak in n get the milk for free...
so Xy "Rookie of the Year"??...i'll break his arm n send him back to little league...
^ lol!
this dudes so stupid he thought committin a cardinal sin was killin birds...
so its a must i leave his brains all over the screen like films with nerds...
^ hmm alright
Xylophone was made to be beat on... i guess that means I'm a rubber mallet..
so this dude a flavor enhancer?? for that RF'd have to change our fuckin palate...
^ lollll
you think you have what it takes to write for the mag cause u did a sports column???
thats like making a Roman Catholic Priest out of the comedian George Carlin...
^ lol...
this dude ballin...nonsense...he dont even got a two year plan...
n only time hes had "buck fever" was gettin "cant shoot deer" hands...
^ shit.. i dont get the personal
I dont think ladies follow the gospel, i had to tell girls he existed...
cause this dudes ugly as sin... he could turn the whole world into christians!!!
^ heh
Plot's matchin a legend in the game with someone who hasnt played the sport yet....
thats like comparing 90 year old double D's to young ones placed in a corset...
^ nah
im crematin this dude, with his ashes swept up under the carpet and left...
cause, armed to the teeth, i'll missile zylo like places where rockets are kept!!
^ fuck ya lol
hows ya shit bangin... when its only played through computer speakers...
so i welcome you to stare in awe at what u cant have... like a Hooters greeter...
^ ehh alright.

Nice verse, funny stuff.

Vote- Nog

Good battle, Nog definetly appealed with that verse.

[Ruck]

nog got the KO, i wont vote.

[Jay-Rede]

ok xylo your flow came across as being a bit boring.. and like someone said above some lines seemed pushed and forced.. decent drop though...

Nog, flow seemed pretty decent to me, content was funny had me laughing with most the bars.. cool shit man

heres my breakdown...

Xylophone
If your avy depicts ya looks no wonder you hide behind it
yellow stripe where your spine sits aunt esther Ugliness contributes to your demise quick!

i was kind of waiting for a big laugh, which never came, IMO not funny but decent

Pound you literally with bars till you`re soft like hair Gell
Acustomed to gettin ya ass handed to you in visits to jail cells!

lol not bad

keepin your jaws locked around cocks wearin ya boston red socks
Every click of the clock you ridin balognie ponies like kentucky derb Jocks!

1st bar i thought you tried to force the multie, but 2nd i was pretty stunned, props

Fuck the limp wrist talk cuz this beat down aint usual
Moms almost aborted this y-chromo fag so your un-existance wouldve been crucial!

nice!

Hmp!being butchered in Topicals before the coming of "08"
Ko`d by LEGEND 3-0 tripped an Fell because you couldnt elavate!

ehhh??

Approach me with hate Ethiopians pose no weight to do battle friend
contests between Lions and Men leave an L on ya record FASTER than "Half wit it" did!

not feeling, but not bad

Spittin straight heat was what you really aimed to do
But you missed an couldnt spit heat if breathin through a molten lava tube!

played

How you claimin beast status but your lost list shows the contrary
you gettin Quaked like aftershocks and rocked like cedementary!

how does contrary rhyme with cedementary??

Drop these clues on you like Nancy drew mysteries
leave your carcass bloated stinkin like boston cod fisheries.

decent

It aint the holidays but i`ll comet cupid, donner and i`ll blitzen thee
AT the count of three your reign will be over like the holocaust history.

lmao decent

Niggas 0n Gays Greatly Act Hard fam !
Zylos words dont lie its what ya screen name implies man!
weak closer

all in all it wasnt a bad drop, not great, room to improve, but decent man... some lines had me laughing some, but others were like ehhh?? keep doing you, your elevating fast, try and stay away from the words that dont rhyme, like contrary and cedementary i was like wtf? if it was worded better it would have been alot better.. well done bro, keep it up

Noggah
my punches will put Xylo in a spin cycle... then take em to the cleaners...
He wont even have his own 2 cents to add and rub between his fingers....

not feeling, but decent

this dudes tryna buy a cow... i just sneak in n get the milk for free...
so Xy "Rookie of the Year"??...i'll break his arm n send him back to little league...

lol nicee

this dudes so stupid he thought committin a cardinal sin was killin birds...
so its a must i leave his brains all over the screen like films with nerds...

omg hahahahaha

Xylophone was made to be beat on... i guess that means I'm a rubber mallet..
so this dude a flavor enhancer?? for that RF'd have to change our fuckin palate...

haha nice

you think you have what it takes to write for the mag cause u did a sports column???
thats like making a Roman Catholic Priest out of the comedian George Carlin...

omfgggg hahahahahahaaha

this dude ballin...nonsense...he dont even got a two year plan...
n only time hes had "buck fever" was gettin "cant shoot deer" hands...

hahaha decent man, laughing haha

I dont think ladies follow the gospel, i had to tell girls he existed...
cause this dudes ugly as sin... he could turn the whole world into christians!!!

not feeling

Plot's matchin a legend in the game with someone who hasnt played the sport yet....
thats like comparing 90 year old double D's to young ones placed in a corset...

hahahahaha

im crematin this dude, with his ashes swept up under the carpet and left...
cause, armed to the teeth, i'll missile zylo like places where rockets are kept!!

decent

hows ya shit bangin... when its only played through computer speakers...
so i welcome you to stare in awe at what u cant have... like a Hooters greeter...
lmfao dope finisher

ok nog i was pissing myself through every aspect of your verse, your punches were LOL, flow was flawless, and your whole approach was dope.. that corset line killed me haha, keep it up bro

after a long discussion with me, myself and I we have come up with a conclusion that although this battle was pretty one sided, we are going to props the other dude for his effort, elevation and continuous dope verses and constructiveness throughout the league... so

V// Noggah but much props to Xylo

dope battle kids

[JohanSantana]

Xylo: thought you came rather soft... not really feelin ya verse. Didn't have any hard hitting punches... No quotables from ya... all ya punches were rather simple. Not a bad verse persay, but not a good one either. Keep at it.


Noggah: cool verse. Had some lines that I thought were pretty hard hitting and rather creative. I believe George Carlin was a Roman Catholic Priest in Dogma, ha. Not a dope verse, but definitely had the quotables and enough creativity to take this battle.

Xylophone was made to be beat on... i guess that means I'm a rubber mallet..
so this dude a flavor enhancer?? for that RF'd have to change our fuckin palate...

Liked that.

I dont think ladies follow the gospel, i had to tell girls he existed...
cause this dudes ugly as sin... he could turn the whole world into christians!!!

That got me giggling.



Vote: Noggah. Had a couple hitting punches... creativity was definitely better.

[Don Dotta]

Xylo:
If your avy depicts ya looks no wonder you hide behind it
yellow stripe where your spine sits aunt esther Ugliness contributes to your demise quick!
Kinda blah,2 line is stretched.
Pound you literally with bars till you`re soft like hair Gell
Acustomed to gettin ya ass handed to you in visits to jail cells!
Lol,nice flip..at first i thought it was gonna be wack..but not bad
keepin your jaws locked around cocks wearin ya boston red socks
Every click of the clock you ridin balognie ponies like kentucky derb Jocks!
Lol..but nah not workin
Fuck the limp wrist talk cuz this beat down aint usual
Moms almost aborted this y-chromo fag so your un-existance wouldve been crucial!
Ehh,same as first bar,2n line too long
Hmp!being butchered in Topicals before the coming of "08"
Ko`d by LEGEND 3-0 tripped an Fell because you couldnt elavate!
Nice!
Approach me with hate Ethiopians pose no weight to do battle friend
contests between Lions and Men leave an L on ya record FASTER than "Half wit it" did!
LoL..hey where is that guy half?
Spittin straight heat was what you really aimed to do
But you missed an couldnt spit heat if breathin through a molten lava tube!
ehh..not to creative
How you claimin beast status but your lost list shows the contrary
you gettin Quaked like aftershocks and rocked like cedementary!
Ok..decent
Drop these clues on you like Nancy drew mysteries
leave your carcass bloated stinkin like boston cod fisheries.
Ha
It aint the holidays but i`ll comet cupid, donner and i`ll blitzen thee
AT the count of three your reign will be over like the holocaust history.
Nice
Niggas 0n Gays Greatly Act Hard fam !
Zylos words dont lie its what ya screen name implies man!
You spelled ya name wrong son..lol

Overall verse was decent,couple lines i was feelin in there alot but you were more on an in an out typa deal..some ones i liked and then some i didnt.Flow wasnt too consistant,not horible but a few lines were stretched.I liked that legend line and the half wit it line and you reminded about that dude..where the fuck is he?..anyways..outta 10 son ill give you............................................... .................................................. ............6.5


Nog's:
my punches will put Xylo in a spin cycle... then take em to the cleaners...
He wont even have his own 2 cents to add and rub between his fingers....
Lol
this dudes tryna buy a cow... i just sneak in n get the milk for free...
so Xy "Rookie of the Year"??...i'll break his arm n send him back to little league...
Lmao..hahaha
this dudes so stupid he thought committin a cardinal sin was killin birds...
so its a must i leave his brains all over the screen like films with nerds...
decent
Xylophone was made to be beat on... i guess that means I'm a rubber mallet..
so this dude a flavor enhancer?? for that RF'd have to change our fuckin palate...
ehh
you think you have what it takes to write for the mag cause u did a sports column???
thats like making a Roman Catholic Priest out of the comedian George Carlin...
Lol
this dude ballin...nonsense...he dont even got a two year plan...
n only time hes had "buck fever" was gettin "cant shoot deer" hands...
Not feelin it
I dont think ladies follow the gospel, i had to tell girls he existed...
cause this dudes ugly as sin... he could turn the whole world into christians!!!
Ehh,coulda been flipped nicer
Plot's matchin a legend in the game with someone who hasnt played the sport yet....
thats like comparing 90 year old double D's to young ones placed in a corset...
Lmao
im crematin this dude, with his ashes swept up under the carpet and left...
cause, armed to the teeth, i'll missile zylo like places where rockets are kept!!
Nice
hows ya shit bangin... when its only played through computer speakers...
so i welcome you to stare in awe at what u cant have... like a Hooters greeter...
Ehh


Verse was decent,deff far from the strongest piece iv seen you drop but still good..couple of real funny bars in there..ya had a good approach..flow was consistant and only like 2 bars i wasnt feelin....outta 10................................................ ..............................8.0





Vote:Nogs

[Xylo]

Thanks for all the Feed both POS-NEG i`m tryin fellas.

And Johanna SANTANA or what ever your name is ive seen much more stretched lines in verses than mines!

And you comment on some of my lines not being hard. look hard lines are only a facet of punch battles! shucks funny lines are a part of it too and so are personalsand metaphors and such, my verse included all. Now were they as good as Noggs Nah! but against some others i may have pulled it off . Noggahs A vet! shit everyone Knows that i`m basically new to this game of text.

Except you! maybe you should do like some do and check out peoples history first.


Good one Noggs :)

[JohanSantana]

Originally Posted by Xylo

And Johanna SANTANA or what ever your name is ive seen much more stretched lines in verses than mines!

And you comment on some of my lines not being hard. look hard lines are only a facet of punch battles! shucks funny lines are a part of it too and so are personalsand metaphors and such, my verse included all. Now were they as good as Noggs Nah! but against some others i may have pulled it off . Noggahs A vet! shit everyone Knows that i`m basically new to this game of text.

Except you! maybe you should do like some do and check out peoples history first.

Haha... I dont even diss the dude in my vote and he gets all defensive? The fuck wrong with you...


First... maybe you should check out my vote a tad better... because I NEVER stated your lines were stretched.

Second... hard punches = good punches. Good punches = GOOD metas, GOOD wit, and GOOD humor. If they are also personals, then great.

But wait wait... timeout. Lemme look up at all the other voters................
.......... EVERYONE except TeNdEnCiEz seems to be in line with me in saying you didnt have any creative/clever/funny punches. Therefore, you didn't have any hard punches. You had a couple decent ones... and that's it.

AND the fuck does you being new and Nog being a vet have to do with anything I said in my vote?

EDIT: Oh and check peoples' history first? The fuck? So you're saying... I gotta find out everything about everybody... before I can reply and vote on a battle?

You may be new to text battles... but I had NO IDEA you were new to sense and logic.


Haha... everyone says almost the same shit I do, and you only call me out?

I can ONLY assume it's cuz you're on the dicks of these other 'vets' while I'm still a newbie here =).