Wrong Kind Of Love - Hip Hop/Rap Music and Urban Social Network Community

**AngelikWispurz** · 08-13-2005, 01:53 AM

**..ROb HuRRy..** · 08-16-2005, 02:10 PM

nice. this critique is soley based on your piece and your vocal presentation not your quality, which sucks, 1st time though..! you'll get better at cleaning up your vocals..! I like your voice... i also love your delivery..! i like how you dip into whispers when mentioning "silence" and i like how you get that sassy voice when you say.."and now it's alright?"... lol. overall nice piece, I'm still unsure if this is about 1)rape 2)rape/incest or 3)extra-marriatal affairs/rape..!? regardless above decent effort. -out-

**avenger hope** · 08-21-2005, 11:08 PM

i remember this poem.

i'm glad you took this step.

i like how you sound confident.

the delivery is really weird. like..

how you portrayed it, especially with the content and seriousness of this peice didn't really fit.

i agree though, decent effort.

**ACcentuous** · 08-24-2005, 01:56 PM

First off major props on taking this step and also for being among the few who have something posted in this section. Please continue to do so.

I have the same sentiments as ayan. The poem itsel was good but the delivery didnt really fit. You had some nice influctuations and tone changes but your voice didnt really match the seriousness that i envisioned. Props on your first attempt though. I hope to be as good on my first audio :)
Keep doing you

**AngelikWispurz** · 08-25-2005, 12:45 AM

good lookin yall. word..it was a first try...hehe.

**Don Dotta** · 03-17-2007, 01:57 PM

that was pretty ill...it could have been better but you'll get better with time..keep workin hard on shit and you got the potential to be real good...eZ

**bloodntears** · 03-22-2007, 11:20 PM

ya just need to feel it a little more when you record ..like acting
and also get a mic filter there not verey much and it will stop the wind noise
and save the mics life, ya can even make one outta a clothes hanger and some panty hoze
if ya know what im talking about great job and great wrighting...keep up the goog work

**D-Profit** · 05-27-2007, 07:32 PM

nice , i like how u did some emotion with it also instead of it bein dead all da tha time like i heard otha's .. good work , keep it up mite see u on Def Poetry jam =] lol

**quiqui112** · 06-20-2008, 11:29 AM

ok is that ..it..lol

audio tear ...lol yea right

**7th Crescent** · 06-21-2008, 04:16 PM

I was feeling this for the most part..the content was decent..not much more to say fam..keeping doing you

**AcRoMeGaly** · 06-23-2008, 01:03 AM

I elt it but soe parts i thought ya delivery was a little too!!! acted out but all round your content was very good, an i love your voice sound like a little cutie pie

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