Week 7 LW no.2: ((Mr. DS)) vs. Co2

[Plot]

6-10 bars due Tuesday, please match yur opponent.
Remember to check & vote so the league stays poppin.

[Co2]

checkin into this

[Mr. DS]

checkin in

[Mr. DS]

i only did 6 tell me if you wanna do more
ok lets get started...


Im Sicker Than Small Pox But You Ass Like Skunk
Watch Me Treat Dis Cat Like Drugs N Throw O In Tha Back Of Tha Trunk
I Slice And I Cut, Dogs Like Philipino Food
But Its Funny How Everybody Tryna Pump C-O-2
Watch Me Slice O N Half, Its Practicaly There Givin
N Make You C-2 Of O Like Impared Vision
See I Cant Waste Bullets, Cuz This Chumps Nuthin But Done
Cause C-O-2 Is Always Known To Get Tha Butt Of Tha Gun
Nuthin But Fun, Cause C-O-2 Is Nuthin But Air Soft
So Let Me Shoot C-O-2 So I Can Let Air Off
Never Again, I Can Let This Can Air Wit Tha Wind
N Ima C-2 This That O Will Never Win

[Co2]

fuck yo i thought this site went down dude, my bad, ill key somethin up real quick

Learn wut ya fuckin wit before you doubt somethin
cuz i leave pussies hurtin like vibrator malfunctions
And ill knock you out cousin, now im knockin on ya door
Tryna help you be 'verse-a-tile' got u 'droppin on the floor'
Makin knife threats to my life yet ya fuckin wit nothin
If I cry its cuz the only thing you cut is an onion
I leave you walkin wit a Cane cuz u aint Abel
Ima leave wit more chambers spinnin than a Wu Tang dreidel


if yal lwanna DQ me, dq me, but at least i got a verse up

[Noggah]

props on showing fellas

hmmm... this was pretty close...

Mr. DS - came out strong... but then overused the CO2 throughout ya whole verse... usin 1 or 2 is cool... but a whole verse on it makes the punches old fast...

CO2 - had some pretty nice punches...maybe coulda wrote a longer verse...but i still think you might of got this one... the vibrator malfunction line made me laugh...verseatile one was nice... and the rest were ok...

overall - it was more about quality than quantity and tho CO2 dropped less bars... i think he got this... DS used too many name flips, and a couple of them werent that hard hitting or directed properly...

vote = CO2...

[Beyond²]

Mr. DS

Im Sicker Than Small Pox But You Ass Like Skunk
Watch Me Treat Dis Cat Like Drugs N Throw O In Tha Back Of Tha Trunk
Ok nameplay opener.
I Slice And I Cut, Dogs Like Philipino Food
But Its Funny How Everybody Tryna Pump C-O-2
lol, decent nameplay.
Watch Me Slice O N Half, Its Practicaly There Givin
N Make You C-2 Of O Like Impared Vision
Decent.
See I Cant Waste Bullets, Cuz This Chumps Nuthin But Done
Cause C-O-2 Is Always Known To Get Tha Butt Of Tha Gun
Not really feeling.
Nuthin But Fun, Cause C-O-2 Is Nuthin But Air Soft
So Let Me Shoot C-O-2 So I Can Let Air Off
Eh, nameplays got old.
Never Again, I Can Let This Can Air Wit Tha Wind
N Ima C-2 This That O Will Never Win
Decent closer.


Co2

Learn wut ya fuckin wit before you doubt somethin
cuz i leave pussies hurtin like vibrator malfunctions
Decent opener.
And ill knock you out cousin, now im knockin on ya door
Tryna help you be 'verse-a-tile' got u 'droppin on the floor'
Played, seen the wordplay a million times.
Makin knife threats to my life yet ya fuckin wit nothin
If I cry its cuz the only thing you cut is an onion
This is semi cool.
I leave you walkin wit a Cane cuz u aint Abel
Ima leave wit more chambers spinnin than a Wu Tang dreidel
First line is played, second doesn't really attack your opponent.


Vote: Mr. DS - May have had all nameplay which brought down his verse greatly, but overall he came more consistent and relentless in the dissing of his opponent. Co2's last line didn't really attack and he had some played concepts. Mr. DS didn't really have any standouts, but his consistency won it for him.

[Byrdie]

See I Cant Waste Bullets, Cuz This Chumps Nuthin But Done
Cause C-O-2 Is Always Known To Get Tha Butt Of Tha Gun
best line from Mr.DS

Makin knife threats to my life yet ya fuckin wit nothin
If I cry its cuz the only thing you cut is an onion
best line from C02

All in all this was an ok battle coulda been way better....but at least yall showed
Mr.DS like Nog said u used dukes name way 2 much towards the end and that took away from ur verse alot.........
CO2....ur verse was ok nothing special nothing pitiful....an ok battle verse

Vote-Co2 simply becuz he came wit it....punches/wordplay/and etc
while Mr.Ds simply tried personals and used the same one alil 2 much......

[Co2]

2-1

props on the battle to DS
props on the votes to Byrdie, Beyond, and Nogguh
and i thought we were goin 8 for some reason my bad for not droppin more

2-1 uppin for more

[7th Crescent]

well this was a close battle to me...my opinion swayed a few times..but i after reading a few more times and analyzing it.ive come to a decision..heres the break down:

Mr DS:

Im Sicker Than Small Pox But You Ass Like Skunk
Watch Me Treat Dis Cat Like Drugs N Throw O In Tha Back Of Tha Trunk

not really feeling it...

I Slice And I Cut, Dogs Like Philipino Food
But Its Funny How Everybody Tryna Pump C-O-2

nice flip...

Watch Me Slice O N Half, Its Practicaly There Givin
N Make You C-2 Of O Like Impared Vision

decent wordplay..

See I Cant Waste Bullets, Cuz This Chumps Nuthin But Done
Cause C-O-2 Is Always Known To Get Tha Butt Of Tha Gun

kind of a dud...

Nuthin But Fun, Cause C-O-2 Is Nuthin But Air Soft
So Let Me Shoot C-O-2 So I Can Let Air Off

kind of over did it but still a hit

Never Again, I Can Let This Can Air Wit Tha Wind
N Ima C-2 This That O Will Never Win

nice.....


CO2

Learn wut ya fuckin wit before you doubt somethin
cuz i leave pussies hurtin like vibrator malfunctions

nice...

And ill knock you out cousin, now im knockin on ya door
Tryna help you be 'verse-a-tile' got u 'droppin on the floor'

very played concept

Makin knife threats to my life yet ya fuckin wit nothin
If I cry its cuz the only thing you cut is an onion

didnt like this for two reasons, feeding number..even though thats allowed i not a fan of reading a verse and responding directly from that..two the cryin cuz of cuttin a onion..not really hard or creative...

I leave you walkin wit a Cane cuz u aint Abel
Ima leave wit more chambers spinnin than a Wu Tang dreidel


Cane and Abel played in battles..last line not really a diss...



over all this was a close battle...i feel like concept wise DS has a better handle of battle approach just use more creative ish and ur good...
so with a better over all verse..more battle type verse...I got to go with DS..period

Vote=Mr. DS

YO PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR AND VOTE ON TOPICALS.. WE OUT HERE TOOO

[DAM]

Im Sicker Than Small Pox But You Ass Like Skunk
Watch Me Treat Dis Cat Like Drugs N Throw O In Tha Back Of Tha Trunk
Blah, 6/10
I Slice And I Cut, Dogs Like Philipino Food
But Its Funny How Everybody Tryna Pump C-O-2
this was good, a good setup would be nicer, 8/10
Watch Me Slice O N Half, Its Practicaly There Givin
N Make You C-2 Of O Like Impared Vision
blah, 6/10
See I Cant Waste Bullets, Cuz This Chumps Nuthin But Done
Cause C-O-2 Is Always Known To Get Tha Butt Of Tha Gun
blah, 6/10
Nuthin But Fun, Cause C-O-2 Is Nuthin But Air Soft
So Let Me Shoot C-O-2 So I Can Let Air Off
overusing the nameplay, 6/10
Never Again, I Can Let This Can Air Wit Tha Wind
N Ima C-2 This That O Will Never Win
u luv his name, 6/10


Co2

Learn wut ya fuckin wit before you doubt somethin
cuz i leave pussies hurtin like vibrator malfunctions
no, 6/10
And ill knock you out cousin, now im knockin on ya door
Tryna help you be 'verse-a-tile' got u 'droppin on the floor'
Quite played, 6/10
Makin knife threats to my life yet ya fuckin wit nothin
If I cry its cuz the only thing you cut is an onion
blah, 6/10
I leave you walkin wit a Cane cuz u aint Abel
Ima leave wit more chambers spinnin than a Wu Tang dreidel
No, no, 6/10


DS -40/60 = 66%
Co2 - 24/40 =60%

DS edged it out. Although he overabused the nameplay, he had the best line of the battle I think & thats what gave him the slight edge. It was very close & it usually comes down to the best line at that point. If CO2 matched him in lines, he may have had a much better chance. But, very blah battle.

[Mr. DS]

3-2 me uppin

[Pembroke]

DS

Im Sicker Than Small Pox But You Ass Like Skunk
Watch Me Treat Dis Cat Like Drugs N Throw O In Tha Back Of Tha Trunk

K

I Slice And I Cut, Dogs Like Philipino Food
But Its Funny How Everybody Tryna Pump C-O-2

Liked this.

Watch Me Slice O N Half, Its Practicaly There Givin
N Make You C-2 Of O Like Impared Vision

Nah

See I Cant Waste Bullets, Cuz This Chumps Nuthin But Done
Cause C-O-2 Is Always Known To Get Tha Butt Of Tha Gun

Okay

Nuthin But Fun, Cause C-O-2 Is Nuthin But Air Soft
So Let Me Shoot C-O-2 So I Can Let Air Off

Saying his name too much

Never Again, I Can Let This Can Air Wit Tha Wind
N Ima C-2 This That O Will Never Win

Eh

Co2

Learn wut ya fuckin wit before you doubt somethin
cuz i leave pussies hurtin like vibrator malfunctions

Alright

And ill knock you out cousin, now im knockin on ya door
Tryna help you be 'verse-a-tile' got u 'droppin on the floor'

Seen it.

Makin knife threats to my life yet ya fuckin wit nothin
If I cry its cuz the only thing you cut is an onion

Seen it.

I leave you walkin wit a Cane cuz u aint Abel
Ima leave wit more chambers spinnin than a Wu Tang dreidel

Not bad.

v/ Mr. DS

Though he overused his user name to death, he came more direct and original.
Keep battling..

Stay up, both.