Week 7 LW contender: Willard vs. ((Byrd))

[Plot]

6-10 bars due Tuesday, please match yur opponent.
Remember to check & vote so the league stays poppin.

[Byrdie]

check
who the fuck is willard?
and i always vote

[willard]

before your time, check.

first battle in years, keying off the rust.


Lets face facts, you got single syllable rhymes yet i drop
‘terms-of-endearment’.
byrd has no-perseverance, when willard rolls on a byrd just to catch
‘first appearance’.

everyone one of my lines is quotable, your not even notable.. my words is pure energy.
and your punches are just ‘atoms on my totem-poll’.
willard is never overthrown, so hold your jokes,
save it for an equal-opponent.
you're not able, your lines aren't flowin, punches with no motion, when your verses aren't even on
the ‘periodical-table’.
You need to expand your lines, before willard puts a
‘hex on your verse’
later he'll google my terms, to understand my lines to
‘recycle my words’.
but thats ok! cause i dont have to use arm & hammer to
‘step-on-this-bird!’.
I wield creativity with no bounds, byrd is a simpleton.
ending this, cause this kid cant even put an end to his own sentences, period.

[Byrdie]

i will edit this wit 6

I Outrank this Private Battlaion bars that Bunker Hills
He'll Breakfast, I serve Soldiers, call me General Mills
Willing to spill his thrill all over,.....................aint no flawless victory
Mortal combat style, so i'm exposing ya female insides like a hysterectomy
You lack the capacity for diameter ya wheel wells wont fit it
So face the inability to stunt me like................20's on a civic
Rf should make a Temple of the weak a throne kid that u can truly master
I'm schooling Willard faster then people got killed in the USA's flood disaster
Hooked up wit phonics he learned how to spell so he think he'll battle me
I'll rip ya ass so bad The whole site will question my own sexuality
Cats'll never warm up to u stick wit the rats........Nigga i been loved!
I got duke shooked more then Michale J Fox tippin hoes at a strip club

[Byrdie]

vote or die

[7th Crescent]

Willard:

"Lets face facts, you got single syllable rhymes yet i drop
‘terms-of-endearment’.
byrd has no-perseverance, when willard rolls on a byrd just to catch
‘first appearance’."

to me this was ok..it seemed more cosmetic to me..meaing it was catchy but kinda lacked substance..had me like..ok..

"everyone one of my lines is quotable, your not even notable.. my words is pure energy.
and your punches are just ‘atoms on my totem-poll’."

..hmm not sure about that..didnt hit well for me..rhyme scheme is off and structure needs work...

"willard is never overthrown, so hold your jokes,
save it for an equal-opponent.
you're not able, your lines aren't flowin, punches with no motion, when your verses aren't even on
the ‘periodical-table’.
You need to expand your lines, before willard puts a
‘hex on your verse’
later he'll google my terms, to understand my lines to
‘recycle my words’.
but thats ok! cause i dont have to use arm & hammer to
‘step-on-this-bird!’.
I wield creativity with no bounds, byrd is a simpleton.
ending this, cause this kid cant even put an end to his own sentences, period"

ok only line might have felt was arm ad hammer..but the structure just thru it all off for me...
nothing really stood out...too much toook away from your verse...this was average at best


Byrd:

"I Outrank this Private Battlaion bars that Bunker Hills
He'll Breakfast, I serve Soldiers, call me General Mills"

ok i see u the whole break fast is a kinda played but never the less wen with the first line nice..

Willing to spill his thrill all over,.....................aint no flawless victory
Mortal combat style, so i'm exposing ya female insides like a hysterectomy

personally tired of MK lines in battles..ending line was decent...

"You lack the capacity for diameter ya wheel wells wont fit it
So face the inability to stunt me like................20's on a civic"

LMAO>>LMAO..creative shit right there..damn those civic wheel wells...


"Rf should make a Temple of the weak a throne kid that u can truly master
I'm schooling Willard faster then people got killed in the USA's flood disaster"..

that was off for me but the flow save it a lil..nuthing really stood out

Hooked up wit phonics he learned how to spell so he think he'll battle me
I'll rip ya ass so bad The whole site will question my own sexuality

..rip ya ass line seen it flipped every way..still hit tho...`


Cats'll never warm up to u stick wit the rats........Nigga i been loved!
I got duke shooked more then Michale J Fox tippin hoes at a strip club

lol..visual is fufunny as helll


overall this was aight...Byrd just came with better flow ..better structure.. all the key ingredients to snatch the win..

Vote=Byrd

[sycknin thaught]

Lets face facts, you got single syllable rhymes yet i drop
‘terms-of-endearment’.
byrd has no-perseverance, when willard rolls on a byrd just to catch
‘first appearance’.
nah... no homo?
everyone one of my lines is quotable, your not even notable.. my words is pure energy.
and your punches are just ‘atoms on my totem-poll’.
meh
willard is never overthrown, so hold your jokes,
save it for an equal-opponent.
you're not able, your lines aren't flowin, punches with no motion, when your verses aren't even on
mad stretch, punch meh
the ‘periodical-table’.
You need to expand your lines, before willard puts a
‘hex on your verse’
later he'll google my terms, to understand my lines to
‘recycle my words’.
played concept
but thats ok! cause i dont have to use arm & hammer to
‘step-on-this-bird!’.
I wield creativity with no bounds, byrd is a simpleton.
ending this, cause this kid cant even put an end to his own sentences, period.
decent closer


vs

I Outrank this Private Battlaion bars that Bunker Hills
He'll Breakfast, I serve Soldiers, call me General Mills
meh
Willing to spill his thrill all over,.....................aint no flawless victory
Mortal combat style, so i'm exposing ya female insides like a hysterectomy
decent
You lack the capacity for diameter ya wheel wells wont fit it
So face the inability to stunt me like................20's on a civic
nah
Rf should make a Temple of the weak a throne kid that u can truly master
I'm schooling Willard faster then people got killed in the USA's flood disaster
meh
Hooked up wit phonics he learned how to spell so he think he'll battle me
I'll rip ya ass so bad The whole site will question my own sexuality
homo? lol punch decent
Cats'll never warm up to u stick wit the rats........Nigga i been loved!
I got duke shooked more then Michale J Fox tippin hoes at a strip club
lol nice closer

overalll one sided battl;e vote Byrdie

[Byrdie]

2-0 me
damn not again wit the no votes

[Noggah]

willard - you didnt really have any stand out lines or any hard hitters in there... had a nice flow... but might wanna work on better/harder/more creative flips... i mean u had some creative ideas... but none of em really followed through with the UMPH to make it a hard punch...

byrd - i think u can come better than this... had a couple good lines.... i liked the civic line and the first bar was pretty creative n nicely flipped... overall you had better and harder punches with more quantity...


vote = byrd...

simple as that

[willard]

"Cats'll never warm up to u stick wit the rats........Nigga i been loved!
I got duke shooked more then Michale J Fox tippin hoes at a strip club"

nuff said.. anyway good-battle

[Byrdie]

yea same here

[DAM]

Very blah battle. I didn't feel either of you at all & this is another close vote for me & I would have to agree with the rest and say byrd edged it out. I like the general mills line, not bad. Nothing real big here.