{Week 6} Retail(1500)(Win) Vs. Journey Mics(1502)

[SpiT DaRtZ]

Hold The Throne 100 Point Battle

1. Each Audio will consist of 1:00-2:00 minutes. No more no less.(Enforced STRICTLY!)

2. Must mention opponents name atleast twice.

3. Verse’s are due this Sunday, September 26th @ Midnight Eastern Time.

4. K.O. Rule in affect. This being 6-0 in the vote tally. (10 Point Bonus)

5. You must Vote on at least 2 other battles or you will be deducted 3 votes.

6. If you post your verse after the midnight deadline you will be deducted –3 votes. After that your you have until that Monday @ Midnight to get it up. After that your DQ’d.

7. Voting will be held for 2 days after the deadline. The voting process will be closed Tuesday night sometime.

*Rules subject to change.
*Mc’s can contest to any rules above if you do violate them. You will be DQ’d if valid.
*Remember Voting on all battles will get you a 20 Point Bonus for that week.

Any Questions direct them to the "Week 6 Thread"...and PLEASE CHECK IN!!!!

[Retail]

Retail...Checkin in!!!

G'luck my nig's.

~Out~

[Journey Mics]

fa sho. good luck.

[Retail]

My verse is in yall....

Lo Fi- http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...D=1640576&q=Lo
Hi-Fi- http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...D=1640576&q=Hi

or this shit

http://www.soundclick.com/boyboy55
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/boyboy55.htm
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/boyboy55music.htm

uppin on journey's verse!

~1~

[Journey Mics]

fifteen minutes late, because my cool edit pro was acting gay. i dont think i should be penalized, but we'll see what happens.

www.soundclick.com/journeymics

its the first track, good luck retail.

[Criticize]

retail.....beats cool...lyrics i duno if there too loud or the beat seems like its playing in the backgroud or not but production could be a bit better flow and emotion is cool
fav lines-
comedy central
slapped roun the ice like a hockey puck
10 yr old white chick
pray 5 times a day
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journey-- beats average u always choose weird beats lol...flow and emotion is coool
fav lines-
drop retail like a walmart price
see retail like signing a cheq
get the point playing chinese checkers
spitting joe budden
cheaply made....

aiight this is a close ass battle shit i duno ...journeys production was better flows even, retails emotion better

but umm im a have to give it to journey coz he had better punches
shits close like i said
vote>journey mics
Pze

[Will E. Maze]

Retail - wtf@ the loud noise at the start...lol...hmmm...swear Ive heard a few of these lines before..."hockey puck" line in particular and "comin up short like cig butts"...anyways no big deal...flow is straight... beat is cool...BEANIE!! lol...pretty good closer...overall pretty nice...

Journey - J you better come with somethin pretty nice...oh no...EMOTION AGAIN...whew..drop retail/walmart...damn you had me sold til the H.O.V. line..you lost the flow right there...hmm brought it back though.. nice closer too...good beat too..damn

break down:

Flow - Retail
Delivery - Retail
Punches - I think journ edged him out a bit
beat - hmm...Im givin this a tie
quality - journ got this barely...

so its still a tie...hmm...basically when it comes down to it...journey had the harder punches...for some reason retail ya shit sounded mad familiar..where as journey's sounded pretty original for the most part...sooo...

Vote - Journey Mics

but...Ill leave this...retail you did ya thing...thats for sure..buuut..like I said before..his shit sounded more original...you had a few good lines..he just had more..and as for journey...GET MORE EMOTION HOMIE!! Im tellin you once you get that emotion level up...you will be pretty dope...your words are actually more believable when you some energy behind em...but you had a pretty nice track...just the emotion needs to be upped..pz

[Fuck u up!]

retail...

flow smooth...ideas rugged ur a bully...lay outs good...
"when he grabs da mic dat shyt turn to comedy central"
there was others the were up wit dis but yea kooo
overal - ur like sum bully onda mic, a mean! guy haha,..shyt was put 2 gether well,, raw!
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J'mics...

flow soso...ideas good!...lay outs soso...
"im droppin retail like wall mart price"
koo n more other lines..
overal - ya shyt was held up by ya ideas....chillin. n ya last line ha
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ideas - J'mics
personals - J'mics
punches - J'mics

overal - Journey Mics got this wit the punches n shyt...pz

[Retail]

lol @ typhris bout dat bully shit....

im down, 0-3 journey's ahead...

[Kill POWER]

retail...-aint feeling the beat... and ya flow was't really to the beat except when you said pumpkin pie... nice punches chalk line... cigarette butts cigarette does... emotion and delivery was nice....

journy...-aint feeling this beat either... ya flow is aite then at o9ne part it was crazy then it stopped... and ya emotion started off not good but built up...

vote-retail... better punches and delivery...

[Retail]

U ain feelin this beat?? lol, u wild duke.................1-3 journey's up

holla!!

[Psyence Phixion]

retail - ur beat is nice, quality can be upped, i liked ur emotion the most, the white chick/and hockey puck lines stood out the must, probably the emphasis.overall nice track, ur flow was on mostly, i liked this track, props

journey mics - ur beat is worse, i think it shold be upped, i cant hear if ur flowin or not yo, you sound like you just woke up too - at first then u kicked in, nice, ur emotion still needs uppin tho, whack lyrics/watch his mouth is best line i think. overall its pretty good but...

i think retail got this

v-retail.

[Journey Mics]

3-2, myself. how can you not hear me?

and retail's beat was hot, just to let yall know.

[Retail]

i kno tha beat is hott that fool (power) hardkore as hell.....lol!!!!!!

3-2, hott battle yall.....journey's up!!

[kleptik]

aight journey first

production crap can hear static, beat eh not likin, flow on point, delivery n shit aight but needa be upped, u soundin monotone again, get more feeling man i know u can i heard non battle shit and u show more emotion in ya tracks than battles, some aight lines nuttin too too impressive

retail up next

production eh, could be betta not as bad as jm, beats aight, flow on point, delivery n shit nice, some nice lines man, to be quite honest i think retail took this by a good margin

vote = Retail