Week 11 LW Con: Don Dotta vs. ((Think Loud))

[Plot]

6-10 bars due Friday.
Please check, match & vote.

[Don Dotta]

yes sir..goin full

[Think Loud]

Smash this gays chin, I’ll stomp your knees and face in
Igniting a small horse is the only time don-keys are blazing
I’ll slay him, stamp on your tongue then slam on your lungs
Reading your verse and sleeping go together like ammo and guns
Handle this scum, plus my verbals will smash this dude
Get you in a choke hold till your purple like passion fruit
I’ll blast and shoot then I’ll carve your quad, heart and veins
Only time he can really act like a don is playing the godfather games
I’ll char your frame, and then I’m imploding both your arms
Like assassinating a mafia boss, I’m disposing of the don

[Don Dotta]

Ya not a g!, he try mackin ta chick's but he'll neva get there digit's......Im winnin!,ill make this battle short n sweet.....like homosexual midgets....This faggot shoulda known,it's obvious already that this dike-hoe lost..Don's a syco boss while bill gates couldnt help u.....cuz ya Mic-ro-Soft..You cant spit fa nuthin!, fa real, how could ne1 even feel ya shit?...Cuz Ya flow's are a Ac Tl like them cars @ the dealership....N honestly you gassed up!,man get blast up by this text soulja..N ya plans ta win against Dotta will just get foiled like left overs..This dude cant rap,when he drops it's annoyin like bitchin granny's..Cuz he's wack n just cant get his ass in gear like slippin tranny's..hiyah...judo chopp... =)..my bad about the format for some reason everything is coming together automatically...o well...uppin fa vote's..

[DAM]

Think Loud

Smash this gays chin, I’ll stomp your knees and face in
Igniting a small horse is the only time don-keys are blazing
---Is a donkey a small horse? In any even, didn't feel, 6/10
I’ll slay him, stamp on your tongue then slam on your lungs
Reading your verse and sleeping go together like ammo and guns
--very simple, 6/10
Handle this scum, plus my verbals will smash this dude
Get you in a choke hold till your purple like passion fruit
--boring, 6/10
I’ll blast and shoot then I’ll carve your quad, heart and veins
Only time he can really act like a don is playing the godfather games
--Even tho this was kinda blah, give you an extra point, 7/10
I’ll char your frame, and then I’m imploding both your arms
Like assassinating a mafia boss, I’m disposing of the don
--AGain, kinda blah, predictable name plays, 6/10

Don Dotta

Ya not a g!, he try mackin ta chick's but he'll neva get there digit's......
Im winnin!,ill make this battle short n sweet.....like homosexual midgets....
--Well, not really that great, but kinda witty, 7/10
This faggot shoulda known,it's obvious already that this dike-hoe lost..
Don's a syco boss while bill gates couldnt help u.....cuz ya Mic-ro-Soft..
--Played, very very played, 6/10
You cant spit fa nuthin!, fa real, how could ne1 even feel ya shit?...
Cuz Ya flow's are a Ac Tl like them cars @ the dealership....
--Nah, honestly, nah, 6/10
N honestly you gassed up!,man get blast up by this text soulja..
N ya plans ta win against Dotta will just get foiled like left overs.
--This is kind of plain to me, but Im inclined to give u a 7/10
.This dude cant rap,when he drops it's annoyin like bitchin granny's..
Cuz he's wack n just cant get his ass in gear like slippin tranny's..
--The wordplay could use some work, but not bad 7/10

Think Loud - 31/40

Don Dotta - 33/40

Adjustments - Both of them get a -1 for having a tie for worst line of the battle.

Final Vote - Don Dotta wins by 2 points.

[Don Dotta]

1-0 me uppin fa them vote's boyy..

http://www.rapflava.com/forums/week-...nt-123934.html (Week 11 Topical Belt: ((xDAMx)) vs. 7th Cresent)

[Beyond]

Think Loud

Smash this gays chin, I’ll stomp your knees and face in
Igniting a small horse is the only time don-keys are blazing
A donkey isn't a small horse, but this was good nameplay.
I’ll slay him, stamp on your tongue then slam on your lungs
Reading your verse and sleeping go together like ammo and guns
Cool, not my style of punchlines.
Handle this scum, plus my verbals will smash this dude
Get you in a choke hold till your purple like passion fruit
Basic connection, could have used anything that's purple.
I’ll blast and shoot then I’ll carve your quad, heart and veins
Only time he can really act like a don is playing the godfather games
Pretty expected nameplay.
I’ll char your frame, and then I’m imploding both your arms
Like assassinating a mafia boss, I’m disposing of the don
Eh, you just used a nameplay and your opener was one.


Don Dotta

Ya not a g!, he try mackin ta chick's but he'll neva get there digit's......
Im winnin!,ill make this battle short n sweet.....like homosexual midgets....
This is extremely played.
This faggot shoulda known,it's obvious already that this dike-hoe lost..
Don's a syco boss while bill gates couldnt help u.....cuz ya Mic-ro-Soft..
Extremely played again, not to mention the way you have the dashes is annoying.
You cant spit fa nuthin!, fa real, how could ne1 even feel ya shit?...
Cuz Ya flow's are a Ac Tl like them cars @ the dealership....
This is just forced.
N honestly you gassed up!,man get blast up by this text soulja..
N ya plans ta win against Dotta will just get foiled like left overs..
Basic, but your best bar yet.
This dude cant rap,when he drops it's annoyin like bitchin granny's..
Cuz he's wack n just cant get his ass in gear like slippin tranny's..
Cool closer, your best bar probably.


Vote: Think Loud - He took this battle off of consistency. Don Dotta started out horribly and had only 2 acceptable bars in his verse. He suffered from some unoriginality early on that costed him the battle.

[Don Dotta]

grr^^...1-1...uppin

[Jay-Rede]

Smash this gays chin, I’ll stomp your knees and face in
Igniting a small horse is the only time don-keys are blazing

ok not bad, feeling it

I’ll slay him, stamp on your tongue then slam on your lungs
Reading your verse and sleeping go together like ammo and guns

nice multie

Handle this scum, plus my verbals will smash this dude
Get you in a choke hold till your purple like passion fruit

not bad

I’ll blast and shoot then I’ll carve your quad, heart and veins
Only time he can really act like a don is playing the godfather games

haha nice nameplay and decent punch

I’ll char your frame, and then I’m imploding both your arms
Like assassinating a mafia boss, I’m disposing of the don

nice finisher

don dotta

Ya not a g!, he try mackin ta chick's but he'll neva get there digit's......
Im winnin!,ill make this battle short n sweet.....like homosexual midgets....

hmm, not bad, not really feeling tha flow though

This faggot shoulda known,it's obvious already that this dike-hoe lost..
Don's a syco boss while bill gates couldnt help u.....cuz ya Mic-ro-Soft..

lol nice

You cant spit fa nuthin!, fa real, how could ne1 even feel ya shit?...
Cuz Ya flow's are a Ac Tl like them cars @ the dealership....

nah, not bad but not hard hitting

N honestly you gassed up!,man get blast up by this text soulja..
N ya plans ta win against Dotta will just get foiled like left overs.

ok

.This dude cant rap,when he drops it's annoyin like bitchin granny's..
Cuz he's wack n just cant get his ass in gear like slippin tranny's..

weak finisher

decent battle guys

vote - Think Loud
Reason - i felt his punches and flow more than DD's, felt he had decent nameplay... don dotta had a cool verse aswell, i just felt TL's more

[Don Dotta]

2-1 u uppin this..

[Pembroke]

v/ Think Loud

Think had the basics of nameplay down while Don Dotta started with a played bar and added to that with the microsoft line.. which I've heard more than I can count. Think wins for a stronger verse with attempted user name concepts. Keep battling..

Stay up

[Don Dotta]

3-1 u..obvious u got this one i guess...fuckin bullshit..uppin