{Week 1} Lay Low(Win's) vs. Fresh aka Pi

[SpiT DaRtZ]

Hold The Throne Battle Royal

1. Each Audio will consist of 1:00-1:30 minutes. No more no less.

2. Must mention opponents name atleast twice.

3. Verse’s are due Next Sunday, August 22nd @ Midnight.

4. If you post your verse after the midnight deadline you will be deducted –3 votes. If your over a day late another –3. After that your DQ’d.

5. Voting will be held for 2 days after the deadline. The voting process will be closed Tuesday night sometime.

*Rules subject to change.

Any Questions direct them to the "bullshit thread"...and PLEASE CHECK IN!!!!

[Pretty Fresh]

Layin' ya low

top track

[Lay Low]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/la...racksmusic.htm

[Psyence Phixion]

i dont know if my vote will count but i think we're supposed to vote on 2 battles, and i saw this one up soooo....

fresh - you sound really monotone, your double ups are over used, and i think ur flow was shaky at points, your punches were ehhhhhh. overall decent

Lay Low - damn, very nice LL, that beat was wierd as fuck, ur emotion, flow, and punches made you edge fresh, props holmes dope track.

v- Lay Low

[Farmer Joe]

fresh- i agree with meta4 on what he said about fresh's verse, except about the double ups being overused, i think they were used fine, they quality just didn't sound too good..

laylow- beat is weird, not bad tho... flow is nice on it... the overall quality sounds a bit weird, maybe its an effect you used on your voice, i didn't like it too much... delivery and emotion are good too... punches aren't great, but beter than fresh's

overall: laylow had a better all around audio in every aspect, in my opinion... keep at it fresh

vote:laylow

[kleptik]

actually i think fresh got this betta punches, low's punches was way weak, freshes werent either but i think he got it not explaining they both 1 min long lol anyway this was very weak i hope this aint how hold the throne gonna be in future


vote = fresh by a hair

[Lay Low]

Originally Posted by Farmer Joe

the overall quality sounds a bit weird, maybe its an effect you used on your voice, i didn't like it too much

yea...its like two-three diferrent tracks of vocals cuz my computer is only recordin the right side so i gotta do it a few times and pan it to right and left....i dont know what the hell is wrong

[Journey Mics]

fresh-

beat is nice, i mean its jadakiss. well at least your flow is getting better, you need to work on emotion, thats the same problem i have. flow is getting off, lyrics werent much in my opinion. you had some cool disses, not really quality punchlines though. overall it was alright, flow was cool, though off like once or twice, and lyrics were alright but you didnt throw hard enough punches.

lay low-

beat is wild. what the fuck is that in the beginning? flow is cool, kinda weird. really hard to hear you, gotta listen carefully. lyrics were cool, you had some alright punchlines that your flow and emotion aided. overall alright, but quality sucked.

lay low took this battle, just had better flow and punches. neither had any "oh shit!" punches, but lay low's were the better of the two. both qualities werent very good, so that also took away from the audios. but good shit to both anyway. and ima say thanks for showing, i hope everybody does.

[kallywood]

Fresh-Your flow is Okay A little of at points. Good punches for the most part you had some weak parts tho. Good battle beat
Rating-6.7

Lay-good Flow. Punches some were played but none were really Eye opener. NO real personals. Hook was garbage...LOL... Punches were pretty good tho for the most part and ya Delivery is good.
rating-6.5

Fresh For his punches

[SoundSilence]

hmmm... this is sort of close, becuz of the different aspect each emcee succeed's and fail at

ima say, laylow beat fresh in emotion flow delivery and presence...
quality was EH...and this sumwut sounded more of a song then a battle... personally homie.. i think u were more concerned abotu the flow then you were the punches

with that said, fresh... i couldnt really make out alot of laylows shit.. so i dont nkow if these lyrics beat his... but imma have to say yes becuz i can hear these...

Audio is not just about lyrics tho, this is not text. you need to be well rounded to stand any chance in tourny's... fresh your verse was not the best, not great, but average... (the quality was fine, jus the emotion was ass)

V- laylow

[T1TheMC]

Fresh: Nice punches...delivery is blah....beats ok....emotion isn't 2 good...
it was an aight drop...

Laylow: PLAYYYYYYED Punches dawg...you need to step ya game up in that department. It was tough to hear you as well... fix the quality in it. Flow was ok from what i could hear.
just don't think u came hard enough to advance (in all aspects)

vote fresh...

[Lay Low]

yea....i worried about the flow and shit more than the punches becuz its audio if it was text then i would think more about lyrics....but in my opinion any audio with better flow emotion and shit beats a verse with mediocre flow and emotion and ill pucnhes

[Criticize]

Lay Low..ur intro/hook is ehhh
emotion is straight..flow is dope
beats cool
fav lines--give me a bye
mic cannibals whack!
slap with a mic
bite my rhymes u gon taste the best...


Fresh>
quality is better, flows decent..
beats average,emotions cool..

fav lines..
pop chris so much ud think i own rapflava


uhmm im a have to vote lay low
reason i think hes flow was better, everything else is close but lay lows got better punches a few personal hits, while fresh lines are just general hits..

Vote>LayLow

Pze

[eL²]

no.. voting continues untill tuesday.. now stop posting in your thread! delete your god damn uppings..

[Retail]

THIS a hot battle goin on


fresh- your track was pretty tight
i like your rap style, tha shit is
cool. beat was nice, it gave u a
boost in tha battle. quality was
descent...good voice...flow was
on point, though at times u got
off track
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lay low- track was kool, your style
remind me of some outkast shit
(at the beginning) didnt really seem
like some battle shit.i din't like the beat neither
your punches were hard to make out, u need
to turn ya voice up or sumthin.your qualty
wasn't the best (better than mine).......

vote - hard decision, i had 2 go w/
FRESH. i picked homeboy cuz i liked
his style and his track had some kool
disses.