W9 HW Belt: ((Noggah)) vs. Veracious

[Plot]

10-15 bars due on Monday,
deadline for check-ins in Friday.
Please show, match & vote.

[Noggah]

chickety check....

how many lines u wantin to go... i been stickin with 12... if u want more or less just say so...

[Mc Free]

12 it is then

[Plot]

Rhymes people!

[Noggah]

wassup... ima try to drop late tonight... but i might need until tomorrow.... from the looks of it your about the same...

had a long week, weekend, and mondays suck....

[Mc Free]

quick here

Frees above hellfish, everyone knows gods walk the water
in fights u cudnt pulloff magic doin arguements from harry potter
you cudnt even score a hooker, so nogs game got minimized
now this fag takes 4 cups of nuts like getting Reese king sized
check the rep, my verses turn hater forums to loved sites
you cudnt get a Oh factor doing algerbra with blood types
LOEG's a myth, even noggs shit, so everyone'll gore-his
its easy to put a hole-in-one like pros on mini golf courses
ill spark this machine till it bleeds and only reds in sight
so nog wont cross my line like waiting at faulty traffic lights
an overhyped person, nog's yet to live up to the words
see you couldnt step up a thread riding a bike on the curb
you as champ thats absurd, nog holding hw lowered its worth
you cudnt even geta leg ahead on a bitch emerging backwards at birth
take your radio and badge from ya, now you aint in-secruity
frees needed while your like a shack in new york city, just an obscurity
your lines are all jokes, your verse’s a comedy pilot aired
so ill put this clown to rest like elminating circuses and fairs
im fresh, your flavas junk so it gets thrown to the pits being old spice
ur lines hit? No, we’ll time travel 40 years leaving you with no rights


eh.

[Noggah]

when i was squadin up... you shoulda seen how veracious was makin the offers...
but hows Terra Firma then ever... when i refused to strengthen ya roster...
when it comes to battle shit or just writing, your dumb n helpless...
cause ive heard to each his own...but shit...u need to steal someone elses...
u cant hold it together son... someone needs to crazy glue you...
plus im makin this dude lose his edge...like a baby proofed room...
Free couldnt spit amped shit if i plugged his vocal chord into an outlet...
but at least he'll be able to start a buzz with his sound check...
this dude aint garbage... he's a discarded dead litter of cats...
handlin this kid so bad... ill show up on "When baby sitters attack"...
you better hope you can smell danger... cause im 'reekin' havoc...
see i smash wit women... u just smash the porno mag between ya mattress...
cause this dude bumpin uglies?? maybe accidentally runnin into his sister...
choppin up ya body wit blenders the only time id be caught dead with dude at a mixer...
look at it like this...im the waterboy... n u gettin captain insano'd...
leavin this dude a vegetable... after i made him go down like a sack of potatoes...
Nog fills the air like stanky bitches sprayin perfume...
but im sorry to say im makin ya girl late dog...n i aint talkin breakin curfew...
Veracious is angrily sayin " YOU CANT HANDLE THE TRUTH"... but bitch im Tom Cruise...
leavin you bouncin around on stage like Sanjiya's Mohawk do...


explanation - basically just the opener... when i was lookin for crews.. veracious sent me a number of PMs tryin to get me to join TF....

Veracious - def = the truth... the line you cant handle the truth was delivered to tom cruise in a movie i cant remember the name of...

[Plot]

uppin for votes

[Byrdie]

Well this was an "OK" battle nothing special

Best lines from MC
ill spark this machine till it bleeds and only reds in sight
so nog wont cross my line like waiting at faulty traffic lights
take your radio and badge from ya, now you aint in-secruity
frees needed while your like a shack in new york city, just an obscurity


Best lines from NOG
cause this dude bumpin uglies?? maybe accidentally runnin into his sister...
choppin up ya body wit blenders the only time id be caught dead with dude at a mixer...
look at it like this...im the waterboy... n u gettin captain insano'd...
leavin this dude a vegetable... after i made him go down like a sack of potatoes...


all in all this was a below average battle.......
MC u really didnt have nething hard hittin or special just a couple of decent lines

Nog same for u nothing special....just a few decent lines but u started off slow before ur really warmed up.....

Punches-MC
Personals-Nog
Flow-MC
Wordplay-MC
Opener-Nog
Closer-MC

Overall vote-MC simply becuz he came nicer

[7th Crescent]

well i couldnt disagree more with that vote for multiple reasons..the most important for me was the was MC Free kept using "u cudnt"...it just bored me to death..the punches were decent at bestfrom him..the creativty was absent..i mean to me this wasnt even close...Noggah had more creative punches, closer was hilarious..personals..he just came much harder...this is text you have time to look at ur verse and notice if you repeated ish too much come on..lets step it up..easy vote..

Vote=NOGGAH

[Fluent]

Mc Free

Frees above hellfish, everyone knows gods walk the water
in fights u cudnt pulloff magic doin arguements from harry potter
Wack
you cudnt even score a hooker, so nogs game got minimized
now this fag takes 4 cups of nuts like getting Reese king sized
Corny
check the rep, my verses turn hater forums to loved sites
you cudnt get a Oh factor doing algerbra with blood types
How do you do algebra with blood types?
LOEG's a myth, even noggs shit, so everyone'll gore-his
its easy to put a hole-in-one like pros on mini golf courses
Simple
ill spark this machine till it bleeds and only reds in sight
so nog wont cross my line like waiting at faulty traffic lights
Weak
an overhyped person, nog's yet to live up to the words
see you couldnt step up a thread riding a bike on the curb
Forced
you as champ thats absurd, nog holding hw lowered its worth
you cudnt even geta leg ahead on a bitch emerging backwards at birth
Weak
take your radio and badge from ya, now you aint in-secruity
frees needed while your like a shack in new york city, just an obscurity
Weak
your lines are all jokes, your verse’s a comedy pilot aired
so ill put this clown to rest like elminating circuses and fairs
Simple
im fresh, your flavas junk so it gets thrown to the pits being old spice
ur lines hit? No, we’ll time travel 40 years leaving you with no rights
Why would he have no rights? He could be a Wasp for all you know.

Noggah

when i was squadin up... you shoulda seen how veracious was makin the offers...
but hows Terra Firma then ever... when i refused to strengthen ya roster...
Decent
when it comes to battle shit or just writing, your dumb n helpless...
cause ive heard to each his own...but shit...u need to steal someone elses...
Decent
u cant hold it together son... someone needs to crazy glue you...
plus im makin this dude lose his edge...like a baby proofed room...
Kinda corny really
Free couldnt spit amped shit if i plugged his vocal chord into an outlet...
but at least he'll be able to start a buzz with his sound check...
Not bad
this dude aint garbage... he's a discarded dead litter of cats...
handlin this kid so bad... ill show up on "When baby sitters attack"...
Weak
you better hope you can smell danger... cause im 'reekin' havoc...
see i smash wit women... u just smash the porno mag between ya mattress...
Weak
cause this dude bumpin uglies?? maybe accidentally runnin into his sister...
choppin up ya body wit blenders the only time id be caught dead with dude at a mixer...
Good
look at it like this...im the waterboy... n u gettin captain insano'd...
leavin this dude a vegetable... after i made him go down like a sack of potatoes...
No
Nog fills the air like stanky bitches sprayin perfume...
but im sorry to say im makin ya girl late dog...n i aint talkin breakin curfew...
Decent
Veracious is angrily sayin " YOU CANT HANDLE THE TRUTH"... but bitch im Tom Cruise...
leavin you bouncin around on stage like Sanjiya's Mohawk do...
Didn't like it

Vote: Noggah

Reason: Obvious blowout. Mc Free's was atrocious, said you couldn't in 4 out of 10 bars, rarely rhymed more than a syllable, and the disses themselves were terrible. Noggah had a few decent hits here and there, nothing too special, but this was over quickly and convincingly.

[Pembroke]

MC Free

Frees above hellfish, everyone knows gods walk the water
in fights u cudnt pulloff magic doin arguements from harry potter

First line was cool, 2nd was bad..

you cudnt even score a hooker, so nogs game got minimized
now this fag takes 4 cups of nuts like getting Reese king sized

Eh.

check the rep, my verses turn hater forums to loved sites
you cudnt get a Oh factor doing algerbra with blood types

Decent attempt, no validity.

LOEG's a myth, even noggs shit, so everyone'll gore-his
its easy to put a hole-in-one like pros on mini golf courses

Okay.

ill spark this machine till it bleeds and only reds in sight
so nog wont cross my line like waiting at faulty traffic lights

K.

an overhyped person, nog's yet to live up to the words
see you couldnt step up a thread riding a bike on the curb

No.

you as champ thats absurd, nog holding hw lowered its worth
you cudnt even geta leg ahead on a bitch emerging backwards at birth

Hahah.

take your radio and badge from ya, now you aint in-secruity
frees needed while your like a shack in new york city, just an obscurity

Nah.

your lines are all jokes, your verse’s a comedy pilot aired
so ill put this clown to rest like elminating circuses and fairs

Terrible bar.

im fresh, your flavas junk so it gets thrown to the pits being old spice
ur lines hit? No, we’ll time travel 40 years leaving you with no rights

No relation to slavery, so this failed.

Noggah

when i was squadin up... you shoulda seen how veracious was makin the offers...
but hows Terra Firma then ever... when i refused to strengthen ya roster...

Okay.

when it comes to battle shit or just writing, your dumb n helpless...
cause ive heard to each his own...but shit...u need to steal someone elses...

Hah.

u cant hold it together son... someone needs to crazy glue you...
plus im makin this dude lose his edge...like a baby proofed room...

Not for a HW battle..

Free couldnt spit amped shit if i plugged his vocal chord into an outlet...
but at least he'll be able to start a buzz with his sound check...

Cool.. like the rhythm.

this dude aint garbage... he's a discarded dead litter of cats...
handlin this kid so bad... ill show up on "When baby sitters attack"...

Hahahah, this is not for a HW battle, but still funny.

you better hope you can smell danger... cause im 'reekin' havoc...
see i smash wit women... u just smash the porno mag between ya mattress...

Eh.

cause this dude bumpin uglies?? maybe accidentally runnin into his sister...
choppin up ya body wit blenders the only time id be caught dead with dude at a mixer...

Didn't like this.

look at it like this...im the waterboy... n u gettin captain insano'd...
leavin this dude a vegetable... after i made him go down like a sack of potatoes...

Awkward.

Nog fills the air like stanky bitches sprayin perfume...
but im sorry to say im makin ya girl late dog...n i aint talkin breakin curfew...

Grime..

Veracious is angrily sayin " YOU CANT HANDLE THE TRUTH"... but bitch im Tom Cruise...
leavin you bouncin around on stage like Sanjiya's Mohawk do...

Almost

v/ Noggah

Easily. MC Free, I'd suggest moving down a level in the RFBL.. this makes me want to join up with the HW's again. Fluent, Plot, Con, Crit, and Phonix could all join back again and make it something worthwhile..

Keep battling.

Stay up

[Beyond]

Mc Free

Frees above hellfish, everyone knows gods walk the water
in fights u cudnt pulloff magic doin arguements from harry potter
This is an ok opener, only thing that connected was magic and Harry Potter though.
you cudnt even score a hooker, so nogs game got minimized
now this fag takes 4 cups of nuts like getting Reese king sized
lol, this isn't too bad.
check the rep, my verses turn hater forums to loved sites
you cudnt get a Oh factor doing algerbra with blood types
Some what feeling this.
LOEG's a myth, even noggs shit, so everyone'll gore-his
its easy to put a hole-in-one like pros on mini golf courses
This is played.
ill spark this machine till it bleeds and only reds in sight
so nog wont cross my line like waiting at faulty traffic lights
This isn't that eye-catching.
an overhyped person, nog's yet to live up to the words
see you couldnt step up a thread riding a bike on the curb
? A thread isn't a curb, connect everything together.
you as champ thats absurd, nog holding hw lowered its worth
you cudnt even geta leg ahead on a bitch emerging backwards at birth
This was kinda cool.
take your radio and badge from ya, now you aint in-secruity
frees needed while your like a shack in new york city, just an obscurity
Nah, this isn't working.
your lines are all jokes, your verse’s a comedy pilot aired
so ill put this clown to rest like elminating circuses and fairs
Played, clown/circus comparison? Put to rest? Eh.
im fresh, your flavas junk so it gets thrown to the pits being old spice
ur lines hit? No, we’ll time travel 40 years leaving you with no rights
What? lol, what the hell? I think you mean into the past, but you needed to mention that.


Noggah

when i was squadin up... you shoulda seen how veracious was makin the offers...
but hows Terra Firma then ever... when i refused to strengthen ya roster...
This is a cool personal.
when it comes to battle shit or just writing, your dumb n helpless...
cause ive heard to each his own...but shit...u need to steal someone elses...
lol, idiom punch, cool.
u cant hold it together son... someone needs to crazy glue you...
plus im makin this dude lose his edge...like a baby proofed room...
This is kinda nice.
Free couldnt spit amped shit if i plugged his vocal chord into an outlet...
but at least he'll be able to start a buzz with his sound check...
Hmm, liked the first line?
this dude aint garbage... he's a discarded dead litter of cats...
handlin this kid so bad... ill show up on "When baby sitters attack"...
lol.
you better hope you can smell danger... cause im 'reekin' havoc...
see i smash wit women... u just smash the porno mag between ya mattress...
This is alright.
cause this dude bumpin uglies?? maybe accidentally runnin into his sister...
choppin up ya body wit blenders the only time id be caught dead with dude at a mixer...
This is almost clever, but the wording seems off a little.
look at it like this...im the waterboy... n u gettin captain insano'd...
leavin this dude a vegetable... after i made him go down like a sack of potatoes...
lmao, this is dope.
Nog fills the air like stanky bitches sprayin perfume...
but im sorry to say im makin ya girl late dog...n i aint talkin breakin curfew...
Word.
Veracious is angrily sayin " YOU CANT HANDLE THE TRUTH"... but bitch im Tom Cruise...
leavin you bouncin around on stage like Sanjiya's Mohawk do...
Not feeling.


Vote: Noggah - Mc Free, you really need to work on your connections, they let you down here man. You also had some unoriginal concepts, but you should improve on that with experience. Overall, this was a decent battle. Both keep at it.

[Noggah]

^^glad to see you back in the league... i got a little payback waitin for ya...

4-1 me appreciatin the votes...

Originally Posted by Mc Free

im fresh, your flavas junk so it gets thrown to the pits being old spice
ur lines hit? No, we’ll time travel 40 years leaving you with no rights

lol.. now that it wont sway votes... im a white male... lol... so i woulda had rights...


why does everyone think im black???

[sycknin thaught]

well i was jus about to vote when i noticed you won