W5 LightWeight Con: Da Clicksta vs. Sycknin Thaught

[Plot]

6-10 bars, please match yur opponent.
Check due by Thurs, Verses by Friday

[DA CLICKSTA]

Czechin...
I'mma go 6 Sycknin...

[sycknin thaught]

in
6 is fine

[sycknin thaught]

imma school ya on punches, so your style no longer buckles
get left with blueprints for success, with ya face engraved with knuckles
im known to weave through traffic, and son herbs like no other
so if this battles rush hour, then u better off with chris tucker
naw, u not a thug, u never robbed or had to hustle
u couldnt strong army if ya camo was built with muscles
get pound with a pipe, and beaten bloody to shreds
when I point out cow licks I mean the one on ya head
not the ones that heffer left its obvious shes a big one
dont tell his ass to break a leg, especially when u cant lift em
im finished with ya state of mind, how ya think ya gonna win?
cuz im burnin ya verse quick, cuz it deserves to be in the fire bin

uppin fa click

[DA CLICKSTA]

Catchin an infection's the only way he gangrene/gain green
His delivery is tainted, confessing to the cops the only time he came clean

The way I Rex tracts will have em shittin uncontrollably like ex-lax
Throw uppa case lettaz @ ya have ya catch caps leave ya head w/ mo holes den mesh hats

Like a rugby/rug-be, leave em layin on the floor flat
Welcome him with swipes from my feet as though he were a doormat

Tried to fight back but like intravenous addicts it was all in vain
So I dropped em at his final destination just like a fallen plane

Just cause hes from the south doesn't mean this chump's crunk
Not talkin bout spiked kool aid when sayin I'll leave em punch drunk

Him thinkin he's iller than me now that's a Sycknin Thaught
Made a grave mistake sew I had to barium/bury-em and pick his plot

[Noggah]

sycknin thaught

imma school ya on punches, so your style no longer buckles
get left with blueprints for success, with ya face engraved with knuckles

second line started off good, but didnt end it off with the creativity you started...

im known to weave through traffic, and son herbs like no other
so if this battles rush hour, then u better off with chris tucker

this was iight...

naw, u not a thug, u never robbed or had to hustle
u couldnt strong army if ya camo was built with muscles

creative...

get pound with a pipe, and beaten bloody to shreds
when I point out cow licks I mean the one on ya head

weak...

not the ones that heffer left its obvious shes a big one
dont tell his ass to break a leg, especially when u cant lift em

didnt finish off on the creativity in the second line again...

im finished with ya state of mind, how ya think ya gonna win?
cuz im burnin ya verse quick, cuz it deserves to be in the fire bin

eh...not really a hard closer...





DA CLICKSTA

Catchin an infection's the only way he gangrene/gain green
His delivery is tainted, confessing to the cops the only time he came clean

nice opener... second line really hot...

The way I Rex tracts will have em shittin uncontrollably like ex-lax
Throw uppa case lettaz @ ya have ya catch caps leave ya head w/ mo holes den mesh hats

eh...this was iight...

Like a rugby/rug-be, leave em layin on the floor flat
Welcome him with swipes from my feet as though he were a doormat

doesnt pertain to rugby, so the rugby/rug-be is unneccessary... second line wasnt hard...

Tried to fight back but like intravenous addicts it was all in vain
So I dropped em at his final destination just like a fallen plane

first line forced...second was coo...

Just cause hes from the south doesn't mean this chump's crunk
Not talkin bout spiked kool aid when sayin I'll leave em punch drunk

seen the concept...

Him thinkin he's iller than me now that's a Sycknin Thaught
Made a grave mistake sew I had to barium/bury-em and pick his plot

again barium is unnecessary because you had nothing to do with elements... nameplay is old...


overall = Da Clicksta had the best punch with his opening bar... he came a little more consistant as well... thaught you had a couple creative concepts but didnt really cash in on them like i thought you were going to when i read the beginning of a couple of your second liners... anyways... i gotta give this one to da clicksta... for having the harder punch...

vote = Da Clicksta...

[sycknin thaught]

uppppppp

[DA CLICKSTA]

@Noggah about the rugby and barium references I was talkin about thew sport rugby nor was i referring 2 the element barium I was using wordplay an 2 make sure what my intent was
i put the rug be and bury em afterwards to clarify my intentions...
thanks 4 the vote tho my Noggah...

[Plot]

I agree with Nogg.

1-0 Clicksta, uppin for votes

[Maestro]

Punches; Click
Personals: Tie
Flow: Syck
Creativity: Click

Overall Close Battle Not Great
Kinda Seemed You Were Trying 2 Hard 2 Be Creative Click
And Syck Needs 2 Word His Stuff Better To Make It Come Stronger


Vote: Da Clicksta.

[Fluent]

Sycknin Thought

imma school ya on punches, so your style no longer buckles
get left with blueprints for success, with ya face engraved with knuckles
Not bad
im known to weave through traffic, and son herbs like no other
so if this battles rush hour, then u better off with chris tucker
Ehh, didn't go anywhere
naw, u not a thug, u never robbed or had to hustle
u couldnt strong army if ya camo was built with muscles
You couldn't strong army isn't competent grammar so this is forced
get pound with a pipe, and beaten bloody to shreds
when I point out cow licks I mean the one on ya head
No
not the ones that heffer left its obvious shes a big one
dont tell his ass to break a leg, especially when u cant lift em
Not bad
im finished with ya state of mind, how ya think ya gonna win?
cuz im burnin ya verse quick, cuz it deserves to be in the fire bin
Weak

Da Clicksta

Catchin an infection's the only way he gangrene/gain green
His delivery is tainted, confessing to the cops the only time he came clean
Decent
The way I Rex tracts will have em shittin uncontrollably like ex-lax
Throw uppa case lettaz @ ya have ya catch caps leave ya head w/ mo holes den mesh hats
Too long without a real payoff
Like a rugby/rug-be, leave em layin on the floor flat
Welcome him with swipes from my feet as though he were a doormat
Not bad
Tried to fight back but like intravenous addicts it was all in vain
So I dropped em at his final destination just like a fallen plane
Weak
Just cause hes from the south doesn't mean this chump's crunk
Not talkin bout spiked kool aid when sayin I'll leave em punch drunk
Not bad
Him thinkin he's iller than me now that's a Sycknin Thaught
Made a grave mistake sew I had to barium/bury-em and pick his plot
Ehh

Vote: Da Clicksta

He has a better grasp of what makes a good battle verse.

[DA CLICKSTA]

Thanks 4 da votes Fluent, Noggah, & Maestro...
Will take comments n2 consideration accordingly...
Stay up Sucknin...