09-08-2004, 07:32 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: NY
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Hold The Throne Battle
1. Each Audio will consist of 1:00-1:30 minutes. No more no less.(Enforced STRICTLY!)
2. Must mention opponents name atleast twice.
3. Verse’s are due this Sunday, September 12th @ Midnight Eastern Time.
4. K.O. Rule in affect. This being 6-0 in the vote tally.
5. If you post your verse after the midnight deadline you will be deducted –3 votes. After that your you have until that Monday @ Midnight to get it up. After that your DQ’d.
6. Voting will be held for 2 days after the deadline. The voting process will be closed Tuesday night sometime.
*Rules subject to change.
*Mc’s can contest to any rules above if you do violate them. You will be DQ’d if valid.
Any Questions direct them to the "Week 4 Thread"...and PLEASE CHECK IN!!!!
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09-09-2004, 09:36 AM
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| | The Windy Blowin Cess
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I wont loose again in this tourney , juss thought I'd scare you a bit
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09-09-2004, 10:29 PM
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| | This Is Africa
Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: I Turn U To a Failure,Now How You Gonna Explain U got Ko'd By A Mc In Australia
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Shit, i just got my net back on
Good Luck Kid ill get shit up on time no worries
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09-12-2004, 03:11 AM
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| | This Is Africa
Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: I Turn U To a Failure,Now How You Gonna Explain U got Ko'd By A Mc In Australia
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chea, my verse is primmed polished and perfected :) but soundclick is down
so ill try again later tonight and if not wen i get home from school 2moro
which is in about 24 hoursss so yea ill be here...
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09-12-2004, 05:06 AM
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| | This Is Africa
Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: I Turn U To a Failure,Now How You Gonna Explain U got Ko'd By A Mc In Australia
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just playin round wit voice and lines and few things its...aiight...
top trak http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/criticizemusic.htm
called i punch precise
X whut :)
g/l!
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09-13-2004, 12:24 AM
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| | Banned
Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: NC's Real MC and Chicago's IllaNoizEr
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here his verse ...
called precise v. criticize
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09-13-2004, 12:14 PM
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| | Slaughter Game
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Criticize..::.. beat a lil played but still a good one mixed the beat way too low... had punches but none too suprising nuttin too creative flow alright delivery lacked no real harsh emotion didnt sound like you were confident that you were dope which took away everything could use some work but mixing should be first for you
flow.. 3/5
delivery.. 2/5
emotion.. 2/5
lyrics.. 4/5
11/20
precise..::.. first off nice beat selection mixing was ok but quality was really below average flow was nice emotion and delivery was on point and lyrics were there better punches all around dont feel like goin to in depth
flow.. 3.5/5
delivery.. 4/5
emotion.. 3.5/5
lyrics.. 4/5
15/20
V..:::..Precise
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09-13-2004, 02:59 PM
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Criticize............Lotta talkin at tha beginning....cant really hear it........beat is cool.....flow is cool but real monotone....not catchin any emotion from this......delivery was blah.........lyrics were good from what I heard but really got hurt cause of tha delivery and emotion....u gotta make us feel those punches nah mean......production was blah....tha beat sounded like background music....it wasnt blended at all.
Precise..........Nice beat but weird........flow is good but I've heard alot better from u.....i think tha weirdness of tha beat had sumtin to do wit it...emotion was nice....delivery was cool........lyrics was nice some pretty nice punches......seemed a lil short.........production was uhh but better than it usually is.
I think precise came wit in this wit his punches really had that extra kick cause he had tha emotion and delivery to back them up.......also had a slightly better flow.......Crit I'm not sure what u were doing here cause I've heard better from u especially on tha produciton tip....that monotone emotion killed u in this
Vote=Precise
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09-13-2004, 05:08 PM
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| | what?! didnt think so!!!!
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crit, beat way low, flow aight, no emotion nor delivery, wasnt that great
precise, flow on point most part, delivery emotion shit good, lyrics nice
overall gotta give to precise jus all out betta verse | |
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09-13-2004, 09:29 PM
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| | Rapflava in the Flesh
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criticize...
intro. beat is hard. flow is cool. delivery and emotion are cool. lyrics are cool, punchlines are cool. offensive to bitches line was nice. overall cool track.
precise...
beat is cool. flow is nice. delivery and emotion were also there. punchlines were there, they were cool. overall cool track.
vote - precise. nobody really had dope punchlines, they were about equal. though precise had the better flow and delivery, so he took it. good battle. | |
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09-13-2004, 10:04 PM
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| | I Define What Better is
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crit- Beat was ok, flow is decent, delivery is good,to monotone though man up that emotion,lyrics are ok but would been better with emotion pushing them
precise-i like this beat alot,flow is pretty raw.Some nice punches, good delivery,emotion nice.
VOTE-Precise
Really self explainitory FLOW EMOTION AND PUNCHES win this for p
good battle though keep elevatin yall pieces
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09-14-2004, 01:35 AM
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short on time...but ah.
cri...damn man wtf happed here..looked like you ran out of time...up late..didnt want ya parents to hear you rappin and shit..and snuck some shit in..haha...lyrics were good..but the beat was like playing in the background..and ah...it was stale..dull really..that being your you vocals...you just werent HYPED enough...lyrics you got it in that category..but the others..you got beat bad...
precise...nice shit man...everything on point...lyrics cool...emotion/delivery/flow..all of that..real nice...thats what got this for ya...good shit man...
good battle guys..thanks for showing...VOTE ON ALL BATTLES TO GET THAT BONUS...we need those votes...iigt..vote on the finals if you havent yet either...show support people...
vote=precise...
good shit..one luv to the both of you and good luck...sign ups for week 5 are now up too..
ONE...
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09-14-2004, 01:46 AM
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uppppppppppppp
ONE.
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09-14-2004, 04:25 PM
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| | Mos Def.
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Criticize....beat is pretty good...your flow is best i've heard from you in a min. but still some slips....lyrics are pretty nice...emotion is weird but ya gotta experiment......overall not bad but not great.....
Precise....beat is nice...flow is dope....emotion is nice......lyrics are aight....overall nothing i can really say was off.....nice shit,......
Precise took this just came more solid in all areas.
Vote-Precise.....
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09-15-2004, 12:03 AM
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| | Real Talk
Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: E.Dot
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well..
crit.. beat is dopeness.. one of my favs.. i wanna rock it again lol.. flow is pretty good.. still kinda shaky.. not really but u doing well wit the accent.. lyrics are pretty nice.. emotion and delivery still needs work homie.. but ur gettin better..
terrance!.. eerr no this is precise battling.. beat is pretty dope.. flow is ncie on it.. kinda suits your style and voice.. quality is hurting but its still udnerstandable so i wont hold your shitty computer against you.. lol.. lyrics were pretty good.. a few lines i heard i liked.. overall a solid verse..
ummm aside from the quaity issue i think precise had an overall better verse.. lyrics were slightly close but precise's experiance just gives him the edge in this.. better emotion and delivery.. better battle verse..
vote - precise..
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