[Undercard] Cynic(1500)(Win's) Vs. S-tron(1477)

[SpiT DaRtZ]

Hold The Throne Battle

1. Each Audio will consist of 1:00-1:30 minutes. No more no less.(Enforced STRICTLY!)

2. Must mention opponents name atleast twice.

3. Verse’s are due this Sunday, September 5th @ Midnight Eastern Time.

4. K.O. Rule in affect. This being 6-0 in the vote tally.

5. If you post your verse after the midnight deadline you will be deducted –3 votes. After that your you have until that Monday @ Midnight to get it up. After that your DQ’d.

6. Voting will be held for 2 days after the deadline. The voting process will be closed Tuesday night sometime.

*Rules subject to change.
*Mc’s can contest to any rules above if you do violate them. You will be DQ’d if valid.

Any Questions direct them to the "Week 3 Thread"...and PLEASE CHECK IN!!!!

[S-Tron]

check

[Cynic]

check.

[S-Tron]

umm i couldnt upload to soundclick for some reason so uneek did,i did it real early cause this hurricane is coming threw.Lol anyways pieces
Top one "CYNIC DIES"
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/gr...cordzmusic.htm

[Cynic]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/cy...kordzmusic.htm

quick. "Hold this bitch"


piece.

[LORD HAVE MERCY]

cynic....all i can say is nice shit dog..damn..real nice..you elevating..

[The Apocalypse]

s tron got into it really quick nice punches delivery is nice emotion is average 7/10

damn cynic came punches were nice delivery n emotion were nice too damn the k swiss line i liked that shit lol .....8/10


vote cynic

[AbstraX]

stron ur shit wasnt bad sum nice punches sum alright 1s but it soundslike u rushed sum of ur bars


cynic sum nice punches i heard, u came better in my eyes except at the end off the beat u came kinda weak but not bad

overall vote goes to cynic

[S-Tron]

k 0-2 thanks for votes

[Criticize]

S Tron- beats avg yer, flow is decent, emotion needs a bit of work a bit monotone in parts ya know
fav lines-
chinese contortionist
some nice multis not many hard hitting lines..
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Cynic- beats cool!...flow is cool, emotions preety good better than last time i heard ya fa sure, voice is getting better
Fav Lines-

dude stays soft like clean fabric
more spine in invertebras kid
mic cannibals line
give up force like retired police


Vote>cyn

better beat, emotion, punches
Pz

[Ecliptik]

S - emotion was nice on this one, but could be worked on a little. Punches were ok, flow was weak. Not bad though.

Cyn - LOVED THE BEAT. Punches were nice. Flow was awesome. Emotion was good. Real good job.

Vote - Cynic.

[Cynic]

4-0 upp

[kleptik]

s man good shit kid, shits gettin nicer every week for u, came really nice some nice punches, flow was eh up n down shaky sounded rushed or some shit

Cynic aka oxy, nice shit man thought it was gonna be really tight, but u jus came wit tha heat, nice punches nice hits goin through delivery was nice, flow on point

Alltogatha vote goes to cynic due to deadly punches jus harder hitting, but good goin for both

[Cynic]

5-0 uppin

[SoundSilence]

cynic....
haha dope beat.. ive always wanted to use it but never found the opportunity ....neways..
the flow is good... it becomes a little outa line as the treack progresses here an there.. mostly near the end so its overal good.... last battle i heard from u was with me.. so this is a step up .. emotion is not quite there yet.. i understand your a laid back kinda rapper but it needs more definition.... presence is gettin up there delivery aint nuttin unique but its straight... its overall a good audio, couple coo lines.. nothing really stood out.. the biggy line was god... overall..its good.... jeah

ok

S Tron

quick quick.... ok....beats good.. new lloyd banks beat.. koo koo...
emotion is better then cynics .. even ya mic presence sounds more experienced.. the flow is the worst thing about that track, although its not THAT BAD.. it sticks out.. an unlike a few slipups from cynics i cant ignore the flow issues.. maybe im jus being specific but there are alot of punchin parts and flow jus seems off.. like u were rushing the lyrics.. i dont think this was the right beat for ya...lyrics generally stuck out for me more then cynic in the sense that with ur emotion and delivery they had a better punch to em tho maybe not as strong lyricaly..... hmmm let me take one more listen to both of yall and vote accordingly..

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ok!
basicly...i think u had more emotion and presence and better delivery on the ya track s tron.. but cynic had a bit better/creative lyrics then u... hmmm ... damn this is close ppl.. but cynics emotion and delivery etc equipped wit better lyrics took this audio by a hair...

Vote cynic