[Undercard] Criticize(1500)(Win's) Vs. Kleptik(1473)

[SpiT DaRtZ]

Hold The Throne Battle

1. Each Audio will consist of 1:00-1:30 minutes. No more no less.(Enforced STRICTLY!)

2. Must mention opponents name atleast twice.

3. Verse’s are due this Sunday, September 5th @ Midnight Eastern Time.

4. K.O. Rule in affect. This being 6-0 in the vote tally.

5. If you post your verse after the midnight deadline you will be deducted –3 votes. After that your you have until that Monday @ Midnight to get it up. After that your DQ’d.

6. Voting will be held for 2 days after the deadline. The voting process will be closed Tuesday night sometime.

*Rules subject to change.
*Mc’s can contest to any rules above if you do violate them. You will be DQ’d if valid.

Any Questions direct them to the "Week 3 Thread"...and PLEASE CHECK IN!!!!

[kleptik]

chin check, gl buddy!

[Criticize]

sweet as,
my verse wont be up to the final minute
im gon be away for a few dayz
Pze
gl

[kleptik]

aight sonny i done i9 post when u do

[Criticize]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/criticizemusic.htm


wrote and recorded in about 15 minz
so yer

Pz

[kleptik]

http://www.soundclick.com/kleptik chop this kid is name of track

[Reed Richards]

Criticize:

flow is ight your delivery is ight which lowered
the effectiveness of your lines your quality is...
not good something keeps popping in it nothin
was really good about your punches either they
were played or didnt make sense, n dont even
say if you dont understand dont vote cause any
time you in a real battle you can sit there n try
to explain punches they either hit or dont so yea

Kleptik:

ight lets see flow is not good delivery is worse
presence is not good either you punches is not
good at all sorry but text punches dont work in
audio nothing hit hard and they were pretty wack

punches - Criticize
flow - Criticize
Delivery - Criticize
creativity - Criticize

vote - Criticize

Reason: Pretty weak battle but Criticize
was still better at fasit of the battle to me

[Lay Low]

Criticize...lol at cut off intro thing.....flow is on...but weird in a way....lyrics are pretty nice.....emotion is dope in a way lets say ...its different......delivery slips towards end a little......overall it was pretty good a few slips in a few spots.........

Kleptik....
beat is played....but a good battle beat nonetheless......flow is off....it's like kinda on beat but has no real flow going.....dont like the echo on the voice kinda makes the flow and delivery weaker......emotion is weak monotone type shit......turn the double track down a little bit.....overall it didnt really do nothing for me.....

Vote-Criticize for the simple fact he had better delivery in all aspects..and lyrics hit harder...and it was just more enjoyable......

[Skeez]

Man this was disappointing......not much of a battle here.


Criticize.......man I used that beat like 2 years ago in a battle lol........flow is choppy in a few parts....like u get on then u get off...weird.....delivery is not there at all...nothin was really hittin to me....emotion was half hearted...like u had a lil but it didnt make much of a difference......punches were taps.....I think I heard 1 nice punch I liked but tha rest were blah plus coupled with weak delivery they really not there at least tha prouduction was cool, your best assest......not a good track to me.

Kleptic.......lmao @ this beat...hahahahaha!!! Flow is blah.....not really sure where alot of ya bars are ending....it has no form....some lines are like 1 1/2 bars long and others are 1 in tha same bar which kills tha flow.....delivery was so-so.....mostly not there but a couple lines did semi stand out.....emotion was low.....not monotone but definetly not alive....lyrics ok for what I heard but alot of that shit I couldnt understand cause of all tha effects on ya voice and u not pronouncing words, I dont know shit I couldnt get alot of words....production is still poop....u really need help there.



Overall............this was a weak battle on both sides.....I would say u both lose but Crit had tha least weakest track.

[kleptik]

yeah got otha shit goin on jus didnt wanna noshow heh

[Criticize]

chea,i didnt even really write to the beat
i fucked up words even in a few places thats how fast i rushed this shit
good shit
upping

[Ecliptik]

Klep - Beat was weak as shit. Flow was off a lot. Emotion was weak. Punches were weak. Presence and delivery were weak. Nothing good at all on this track. Lose the echos or at least turn 'em down.

Crit - Beat was nice. Flow was good, but came off a few times. Emotion was good. Punches were a little weak, but better than Klep. Presence was ok. Delivery was ok. A few good things on the track. Not bad.

Vote - Crit. Better in everything x 2.

[SoundSilence]

wow, fucking gay ass computer i had a whole typed up shit on this battle.. and it didnt post? omg blah..

well.. gayness. let me break it down quick..

crits flow was meh... it was off an on.. delivery presence an emotion is just like a flat note... its like there.. but its not being utilized... yet? quality wise.. vocals could be upped ( this may be lofi's fault) this track was iigh.. i liked the lyrics some nice lines.. but u need to write to a beat cant jus pick one afterwards..

ecliptik...quality sucks ass... lot of distortion an shit hard to make out most of ya lyrics..... flow.. wow.. sorry dude.. but its non existant... emotion is getting better, seems like u jus kinda yellin into the mic.. delivety and presence maybe a tad better then crit jus cuz u were able to make a couple of ya bars stand out... but.. yea... not quite there overall.. and u really do need that balance


Vote Crit (once again)

[SpiT DaRtZ]

criticize...

iight beat is cool..a bit played...lyrics there...flow and on and off..deilvery and all of that could be stronger..but ah...cool shit...'

kleptik...its week 3..lol..not round 3...lol..not in the tourney no more..but word...

quality aint that bad..not that good..but not as bad as stated....ah..really no standout lines in this..delivery is there...but ah..yea..overall a iight verse no doubt...keep on elevating man..

ah..close..kinda of..but ah crit..got him...better overall audio..i would say..both of you stay up..and sign up for week 4..if your know for fact you can make it....

Vote=cri

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[SpiT DaRtZ]

criticize wins the battle........
Kleptik loses....

thanks for showing guys....good luck next week.....

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