[Undercard] Criticize(1500)(Win's) Vs. Ecliptik(1419)

[SpiT DaRtZ]

Hold The Throne Battle

1. Each Audio will consist of 1:00-1:30 minutes. No more no less.(Enforced STRICTLY!)

2. Must mention opponents name atleast twice.

3. Verse’s are due this Sunday, September 5th @ Midnight Eastern Time.

4. K.O. Rule in affect. This being 6-0 in the vote tally.

5. If you post your verse after the midnight deadline you will be deducted –3 votes. After that your you have until that Monday @ Midnight to get it up. After that your DQ’d.

6. Voting will be held for 2 days after the deadline. The voting process will be closed Tuesday night sometime.

*Rules subject to change.
*Mc’s can contest to any rules above if you do violate them. You will be DQ’d if valid.

Any Questions direct them to the "Week 3 Thread"...and PLEASE CHECK IN!!!!

[Criticize]

umm good luck


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/criticizemusic.htm

called eclips..

fuk this shit let me advance now!

[Ecliptik]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/ecliptikmusic.htm

^ Sorry for last week. It's uploading now. Good luck.

[Criticize]

Wakkkkkkkkke Up!

[SpiT DaRtZ]

word battle time..

uping for some votes here...

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[Lay Low]

Criticize...i hate that beat....you rockin it pretty good though......some slips here andthere...like you was backin up from the mic....emotion had some dope points.....lyrics were ptetty tight nice multies in there.....overall it was pretty good....a little more emotion and a more solid flow woulda made it dope cuz there wasnt really much slippin but when it was it was pretty noticable....


Ecliptik......beat is aight....lets see what you do with it.....flow is way choppy.....emotion is corny in a way tryin to hard....i heard a couple aight lines..... cut it too short it felt incomplete....overall....wasnt really feelin it flow was off and your delivery couldnt really make out a lot of what you was sayin......

Vote-Criticize...plain and simple had a better verse....

props to both for showing.

[The Apocalypse]

critisize nice verse 8/10


ecpletik intro i saw this episode of family guy ill
straight verse but not strong enough6/10


vote criticize

[Ecliptik]

Damn, my flow is hittin' the snares. How is it choppy? Not swaying votes. I just need help with it.

[kleptik]

make yours flow on point eclip, make your bars pretty much same length to make good flow, if ya have em all outa wack like 1 long 2 short 3 long etc, thats gonna mess it up

dunno why but i read ya post after i listened lol and went to top to give u exp


crit: good verse flow a lil choppy, better than yours against me though lmao, delivery is alright, some nice punches in there all and all its str8 verse now to clip

eclip: flow choppyish, some decent punches, not really hard though, delivery is off, all in all decent

vote = crit jus due to better harder punches, and tighter verse

[SoundSilence]

crit....
beat works, it iigh... its old...tried tested an true tho...
flow is nice on this, i dont hear a whole lot of slipups, vocals could be upped a lil bit (this could be lo fi's fault) i like the lyrics u got some nice punches in this bitch... emotion is straight.. delivery and mic presence ... is there... but just standing around a lil bit.. more experience an ull be fine.. im seeing some potential in u Mr. Hunter :)



ahhhhhhhhh ecliptik.... nice beat.. nice nice beat damn.. jin learn chinee haha, imma have to use that shit for my next battle.. imma rip that... oh.. shit.. sorry ahha onto ur verse

im not sure why u got 20 some seconds left on this track when u could have spit a few more bars to fill it up... flow is ..weird... quality is ass.. sounds like u were too close to your mic and thus distortion occured..emotion... ass... voice seems like u spittin shit so monotone, delivery and presence .. aint really seein it.... lyrics couldnt make out alot.. nothing really jumped out at me.. but anyways ive heard much worse from you before.. so this aint actually that bad for u.. but.. not enough..

good battle boys,
Vote: Crit

[SpiT DaRtZ]

Cri...nice verses....flow is nice for the most part..delivery still could use some work..but nice lyrics...overall nice verse man....

ecliptik...lol@family guy...damn..ah..i heard some cool lines no doubt..but man..mad too short..haha...i guess time issues?..but ah flow and confidence needs some work..i mean yea you were hitting the snares for the most part...but mubbling words in between and not coming out CLEAR is what hurt you..ya know...but no i hear potental...clean it up..and you should be straight...

pretty cool batte guys..but cri..gets the W..in my eyes..just a better overall more hard hitting audio...cool shit..sign up for week 4 if you know your going to show 100%..iight..and DROP THEM VOTESSSSSSSS..for that bonus...one luv..

Vote=criticize

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[Ecliptik]

Yeah, good battle Crit. Congrats. But seriously, I have gotten a lot better than I used to be. Time issues? Nah.

[SpiT DaRtZ]

iighttttttt...

critcize wins....

ecliptik..loses..

pretty nice battle here...hope to see the both next week...and remeber..

even if you dont sign up..you could alwayz vote for the week if your not in..and get that bonus...dont forget that...show that support..it PAYS..haha...one luv..

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