[Undercard] Apoc(1500)(win's) Vs. J-Keith(1500)

[SpiT DaRtZ]

Hold The Throne Battle

1. Each Audio will consist of 1:00-1:30 minutes. No more no less.

2. Must mention opponents name atleast twice.

3. Verse’s are due this Sunday, August 29th @ Midnight.

4. If you post your verse after the midnight deadline you will be deducted –3 votes. If your over a day late another –3. After that your DQ’d.

5. Voting will be held for 2 days after the deadline. The voting process will be closed Tuesday night sometime.

*Rules subject to change.

Any Questions direct them to the "Week 2 Thread"...and PLEASE CHECK IN!!!!

[The Apocalypse]

damn easy.,.... good luckj keith

[J-Keith]

check....

[The Apocalypse]

click the link in my sig fuck waitin till sunday

[J-Keith]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/jkeith21music.htm
uppin

[Pretty Fresh]

yo J..yo got murked..but i kno that was ya first audio battle..did pretty good fo ya first...but you stepin aginst apoc..(shuld explain it all)..apoc came harder wid da punches..much bedda flow and quality..yo j u need to do sometthin bout ya quality...hurts my ears man..apoc gets tha delivery and emoitoin...yo J i wsnt feelin how u was tlkin fo 40 seconds in the begginin...so apoc gets this..but the only thing i dint like in apocs verse was that wil smith shit..lol wtf??...ahaha

[SpiT DaRtZ]

iight..apoc came nice..no doubt...flow and delivery were good...beat real nice...and some nice hard hitting lines...overall good shit...

j-keith...ah...beat not so battle oriented..but thats cool...all this talking..not so cool..lol...ok spitting...sounds ok...quality and vocals could be upped a tad...some OK lines at best..dick/throat/horse...coo...ah..mad short verse..haha...more talking..really didnt come with enough content in your OVERALL battle verse to really compete here...but pretty cool attemept here...

overall pretty straight battle here...apoc shined...j keith for you first battle audio(if thats true)...you got potential...nice showing by both...but i gotta go with apoc for a overall better audio...

Vote:Apoc....

thanks for showing guys...hoping to see you guys next week...stay up....and much love...

ONE...

[The Apocalypse]

onmce again j keith good homie u got alot of potential

[Journey Mics]

apoc...

verse was nice, your flow was nice as well. the beat choice was good, came with some nice punchlines, nice lyrics. emotion was on point, you came at him nicely.

j-keith...

i liked how you used the sample in the beat for your audio, but that made your flow choppier than it already was, which took away from you. you didnt sound very enthused to do the battle, get your emotion up. didnt hear many nice punchlines either, couple cool lines but thats it.

vote - apoc...just came harder, better flow and punches.

[Criticize]

J Keith-intro's decent...maybe a too long
emotion needs to be upped its aiight..flow is preety decent..dont like how u keep using the sample 'say it again' its aiight the 1st time but used it to much beats cool...ya voice is cook
fav lines-
avy nelly b4 pic
im the reason ur a victim of child support

u didnt spit for very long like 30 secs or sumthin avg verses keep up
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Apoc> i dun like the intro lol
beats cool
emotion and flow are preety good ive heard better from u, there better than keith's tho
lyrics are preety good some nice multis in parts
fav lines-
try to outshine me
layin flat like a star fish
kik this kid around like soccer practice


apoc jus had the better verse
punchlines etc

Vote>Apoc
nice battle
Pz

[The Apocalypse]

i just threw somthing together but yea thankx peeps

[Lay Low]

cant explain a lot really dont need to...

apoc...aint nuttin wrong with will smith!!!..ha.....nice lyrics...flow is on ponint no doubt.....emotion is dope..nice shit all around.....

J keith....never ever take that long to start spittin ever!..your flow was pretty good.....weird bar structure kinda messes it up......lyrics were aight not as strong as apocs......potential i see it.....but right now not strong enuff to put up a fight for this one....

Vote-Apoc...took this easily with better flow lyrics and all aspects....
props to both for showing.

[The Apocalypse]

5-0 upps upps thanx l;ay low for the vote bruh

[J-Keith]

slotter rule? lol

[Skeez]

Yeah this was a no brainer............


Apoc - shitty intro, I hated it....lol. Nice flow, cool delivery and some good emotion.....lyrically there a couple nice punches and disses. Overall a very decent battle track but nothin amazing. Production on this was clean.


J Keith - even shittier intro....lol. Surprised me with a decent flow but ya choppy style isnt good for a battle to me.....emotion was non existant which totally killed it to me cause it killed tha delivery. Lyrics were soso....this was way too short....shouldve used more time to spit than talk.....production was decent.



Apoc easily took this.