<<Un.Yoke>> vs Prestige

[Con]

5-8 bars
both sign in and due Monday the 26th..
g luck

[Malone]

Day after christmas damn.. I got this tho' good luck pres.

[Prestige]

we here.

[Prestige]

*user title- off the hook
**stockton is banned

pres will take everything but the loss, you know the rest is mine
crack yoke and let him meet the burner like a sunnyside breakfast time
i'll scramble his brains, just cause his lame gun talk's missing crime
face it mal, you couldn't be off the hook even spittin' fishing lines*
your hits are weak and whack, even though ya flow is landin'
punches couldn't strike if they were employed by the new york city transit
damnit, mal's jealous of my diamonds, i can't stand it lil' bitty
so i'mma ice ya body up right next to ted williams and walt disney
you could walk with me, but this kid will probably flock home
cause malone's shelf has nothing to offer now that stock's gone!**
i'm hot holmes, twist my wrist and it look like a glowing object
connected to the fist that will leave mal pinned like a sewing project

[Malone]

*Moderater, But No-One Knows Where
**Used To Do An RFBL Magazine - NRA, National Rifle Assosiation


check it,


...This One Trip To The Guillotine And Believe, I'll Get Ahead For Sure,
Medias Got Points? Then ‘Press On Nails´ Lyk A ‘Fuckin Wemons Pedicure´..
...Truth Is Your A Mod, But For What? You Aint Shit In Your Station,
So Dont Think ‘Probation'd Pool Players´ As I Point Out Ya ‘Que'd Moderation´..
...You Were That Weekly Paper, Top Punches, Battles, Stats Ect.
Had A Grasp! But You ‘Just Can't Handle The Mag´ Lyk ‘NRA Protestors´..
...Cuz If Thats Low, Your Lesser.. Un Bang Thru Ya Mental Sector,
With All Flesh Missin, ‘Identify'd For Your Death´ Lyk A ‘Dental Record´..
...So, I'll Put Every Comedian On Hold.. Then With All Jokes Aside,
Tell You To ‘Run That Back´, When I ‘Stab Ya Legs With Your Spine´..
...Battled So Many Times, ..But Still The Nameplays Dont Lack,
To The Stage! ‘Steppin On, press toe(presto!)´ Lyk ‘A Magician's Act´..


Un.Yoke

[Phonix]

Presidentill

pres will take everything but the loss, you know the rest is mine
crack yoke and let him meet the burner like a sunnyside breakfast time

Played

i'll scramble his brains, just cause his lame gun talk's missing crime
face it mal, you couldn't be off the hook even spittin' fishing lines*

Played

your hits are weak and whack, even though ya flow is landin'
punches couldn't strike if they were employed by the new york city transit

Dope

damnit, mal's jealous of my diamonds, i can't stand it lil' bitty
so i'mma ice ya body up right next to ted williams and walt disney

HAHA

you could walk with me, but this kid will probably flock home
cause malone's shelf has nothing to offer now that stock's gone!**

Needs a hot flip imo

i'm hot holmes, twist my wrist and it look like a glowing object
connected to the fist that will leave mal pinned like a sewing project

Coool
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VS


Copywhite:

...This One Trip To The Guillotine And Believe, I'll Get Ahead For Sure,
Medias Got Points? Then ‘Press On Nails´ Lyk A ‘Fuckin Wemons Pedicure´..

Sick

...Truth Is Your A Mod, But For What? You Aint Shit In Your Station,
So Dont Think ‘Probation'd Pool Players´ As I Point Out Ya ‘Que'd Moderation´..

HAHAA

...You Were That Weekly Paper, Top Punches, Battles, Stats Ect.
Had A Grasp! But You ‘Just Can't Handle The Mag´ Lyk ‘NRA Protestors´..

FUck WANCK

...Cuz If Thats Low, Your Lesser.. Un Bang Thru Ya Mental Sector,
With All Flesh Missin, ‘Identify'd For Your Death´ Lyk A ‘Dental Record´..

DOPE

...So, I'll Put Every Comedian On Hold.. Then With All Jokes Aside,
Tell You To ‘Run That Back´, When I ‘Stab Ya Legs With Your Spine´..

Nice WP

...Battled So Many Times, ..But Still The Nameplays Dont Lack,
To The Stage! ‘Steppin On, press toe(presto!)´ Lyk ‘A Magician's Act´..

FUCK U I USED THIS BEtta

[Phonix]

Vote - Malone

[Nitrogen]

Originally Posted by Prestige

your hits are weak and whack, even though ya flow is landin'
punches couldn't strike if they were employed by the new york city transit
damnit, mal's jealous of my diamonds, i can't stand it lil' bitty
so i'mma ice ya body up right next to ted williams and walt disney

^Overall - those were your only good lines in my opinion, you need to be more consistent..

Originally Posted by Un.Yoke

...This One Trip To The Guillotine And Believe, I'll Get Ahead For Sure,
Medias Got Points? Then ‘Press On Nails´ Lyk A ‘Fuckin Wemons Pedicure´..
...Truth Is Your A Mod, But For What? You Aint Shit In Your Station,
So Dont Think ‘Probation'd Pool Players´ As I Point Out Ya ‘Que'd Moderation´..
...Cuz If Thats Low, Your Lesser.. Un Bang Thru Ya Mental Sector,
With All Flesh Missin, ‘Identify'd For Your Death´ Lyk A ‘Dental Record´..
...Battled So Many Times, ..But Still The Nameplays Dont Lack,
To The Stage! ‘Steppin On, press toe(presto!)´ Lyk ‘A Magician's Act´..

^Overall- real solid verse, very consisten with some fresh concepts, well done..
V- Un.Yoke

[Con]

pres will take everything but the loss, you know the rest is mine
crack yoke and let him meet the burner like a sunnyside breakfast time

^ok

i'll scramble his brains, just cause his lame gun talk's missing crime
face it mal, you couldn't be off the hook even spittin' fishing lines*

^too basic press.

your hits are weak and whack, even though ya flow is landin'
punches couldn't strike if they were employed by the new york city transit

^nice

damnit, mal's jealous of my diamonds, i can't stand it lil' bitty
so i'mma ice ya body up right next to ted williams and walt disney

^nice

you could walk with me, but this kid will probably flock home
cause malone's shelf has nothing to offer now that stock's gone!**

^ehh

i'm hot holmes, twist my wrist and it look like a glowing object
connected to the fist that will leave mal pinned like a sewing project

^ok too basic again



...This One Trip To The Guillotine And Believe, I'll Get Ahead For Sure,
Medias Got Points? Then ‘Press On Nails´ Lyk A ‘Fuckin Wemons Pedicure´..

^nice

...Truth Is Your A Mod, But For What? You Aint Shit In Your Station,
So Dont Think ‘Probation'd Pool Players´ As I Point Out Ya ‘Que'd Moderation´..

^nice

...You Were That Weekly Paper, Top Punches, Battles, Stats Ect.
Had A Grasp! But You ‘Just Can't Handle The Mag´ Lyk ‘NRA Protestors´..

^ehh

...Cuz If Thats Low, Your Lesser.. Un Bang Thru Ya Mental Sector,
With All Flesh Missin, ‘Identify'd For Your Death´ Lyk A ‘Dental Record´..

^nice

...So, I'll Put Every Comedian On Hold.. Then With All Jokes Aside,
Tell You To ‘Run That Back´, When I ‘Stab Ya Legs With Your Spine´..

^ok

...Battled So Many Times, ..But Still The Nameplays Dont Lack,
To The Stage! ‘Steppin On, press toe(presto!)´ Lyk ‘A Magician's Act´..

^played


v=mal, came more consistent..good job to both, press shouldve just waited to post his verse than leavin it out there.