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Old 04-25-2007, 11:33 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Exclamation Ty Bru's Untitled Poem

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okay, the introduction was rather unneccesary....
anyway, i really dig the delivery and emotion that he has on this track. i have to admit there's certain lines that are too corny/predictable for me but right after that there's a whole assortment of fresh original lines that make up for the previous. as far as the words themselves, they are above average but definitely nothing awe inspiring but the delivery of them are what really makes this piece very enjoyable. i dig it man. good work.
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