Topical Plotta(1-0) vs Simplistic(7-0)

[Con]

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Sign ins due on Thursday, if u dont, we'll take it as a noshow.

DUE SATURDAY at 11:59 pm, CENTRAL..lets see if this changes anything.
if u vote fast, then we can begin earlier.. unless im at work so it'll
take longer sometimes.

excuses we wont accept anymore:

'i got fucked up!', 'i wasnt on a computer!', 'he didnt sign in!',
'i forgot', 'thought i was ontime!'.thats why u read the rules on the top page.

if ya opponent noshows u need to post SOMETHING, a bar will
do or both of u r dq'd BUT! u better have a verse ready incase ya opponent does show!!!
those single bars r only da guarantee that yall showing up..COME READY EVERYTIME.


vote on at least TWO battles in the league afterwards. but it'd b nice if u do
more.
if u dont want to wait..pm or aim us ur verses and we'll gladly post it for u
right on the deadline hour.
u may get an extension only if its an emergency and u aint got shit done.
and it better be good.





read the fukin rules.








topic: Waking up in a bath tub with no kidneys

[DaVe E BuRnOuT]

seriously....this topic is fuckn retarded

[Kaeo.Seru]

arent they always?

[DaVe E BuRnOuT]

Yeah But This 1 is A bit Outta The Way..Now Who Honestly wakes Up Ina bath Tub missing 2 kidneys And Starts Rhymen About it....lol Fuck it....I Got This Regardless

[Con]

this was yall ideas, blame da one who suggested it.

[DaVe E BuRnOuT]

No That shit was Plotters Suggestion..how the fuck u gonna have us write about a topic on the same shit the challenger suggested?...Booooooooo Prolly on some wac ass crew type shit

[Plot]

in.

[Plot]

I vaguely recall that fateful business trip to Vegas,
A one-night stop-over that wasted a weeks wages.
Wasnt with the high-rollers but felt safe from the dangers,
Dog Ive fbeen gambling for ages in the strangest of places.
Watchin strinppers in cages over Bacardis on ice,
Wineing & dining with strangers, living larger than life.
Bells & lights, hands fulla aces playing cards & dice.
A heavy night seducing lady-luck & I paid the price.
Cigars & Coronas, I was flying the kite down a chimney,
Suddenly my vision got all wriggly & nobody was with me.
Woke to foul aromas, sposed to be flying to Sydney,
But while I was high some bastard rolled me for kidneys.
Came outta the coma, whining & dying in a tub fulla ice,
With a mark on my side that said Id sparred with a knife.
Could still taste the chemical traces of alcohols laces,
My torso torn so, by the blades of those filthy organ-traders.
Dodgy cunts stole my bodily part & it wasnt a loner,
Coulda helped themselves to my rheumatisms & tumors.
Jarred for prizes, trying to fly home just an innocent stoner..
That Became scarrded for life & an involunatry organ donor.


..man I hope Daves computers broken.

[Hooligan]

hahaha plot is funny

[DaVe E BuRnOuT]

ayo plot..nice drop famo..I Know its over cas i wasn't here(At my ribbo yesterday).....But have no fear..Couple weeks ill be back for my belt......N i am keep'n the belt in my sig..the Reason is Cas people use runs shit..n i really am the topical Champ...u might have taken it today..but ill be back for it tomarrow..lol..word..goodshit

[Plot]

Get fucked Dave.

I wasted words, U aint the champo no more.

That belt is mine, stop rockin it.

[DaVe E BuRnOuT]

ayo plot i tryed changen my writng to..PLOT GOTS MY BELT.....I ONLY HAVE THIS PICTURE....But i can't Get Into my sig shit

[Criticize]

plots verse was pretty nice, the imagery at the start was cool, it driften of in the later half didnt really keep grabbing me so to speak.

you two can fight this shit out in the future.