Topical Belt: Kaeo.Seru vs. R.D. Famous KS wins

[HellRazor]

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Topic:

[Kaeo.Seru]

could this be anymore...blah?

[R.D.]

^agreed.

in.

in the belly of the beast, bein' that population will increase..
sinners have been beached, and well purgatory is beseached..
we see the light, reaction? not sure if we see the true attraction..
with true requirements absent what is it we should be askin'..
popes draped in robes and the priests in an apologetic pose..
all of which sin has chose but were forgave when he rose..
angels who perch above with singed wings they will judge..
only because they masterminded the gates knowing its unjust..
now only male can be seen and evil has an envious dream..
to toss these fathers of families into beliefs and so seems..
the teeth that curtain hell will not harm the average demon..
fire will burn well these fertilizers of eggs and releasin semen..
i do pray the children of innocence depicted will be forgiven..
so i can envision a merciful God worth faith minus pretendin'..
worth prayer and tithes rather an evil that stays in demise..
boiling of vengeance wishing for a second chance of existance..
the spirits listen and process the souls that are Godless..
ye have little faith with apocolypse and then God left..
yet the sum would prophetize every angel's soft cries..
leading crowds of eyes to believe these sacrilegious lies..
fiery passion surrounds the cross when hope is lost..
God give mercy ask him when his only son was the cost..
last step to be judged at the gate yes they're debating..
but in this crowd i refuse to continue needless waiting..

if sometyhings all fucked up in sorry i tried to goit back and pilish it but im drunk andb i didbnt want to no show.. holla good luck legedn.. enjoy battling peeps like you

[Kaeo.Seru]

ok cool... me verse will be up early saturday morning b4 noon... if it isnt up tonite that is

come bare witness... angels and demons alike
come sinnner come saint to the glorious light
surely you'll cite the reasons warriors fight
the most climatic sight since the story of Christ
this is bigger than Goliath brought down by a stone
bigger than Jericho reduced to rubble n bones
larger than Jonah's Ark and the story it told
casting shadows on the crusaders struggling woes
this is for all eyes and ears all calssification of man
peasant and clergy, dwellers in the cave of the damned
even the those in the Whale's belly should know who i am
or at least know they're a part of the plan
a part of grand design, a scheme that has worked
that'll flip you're whole beliefe and faith in the church
more important than the Genesis, I insist that this
is worth the waiting controversy more than Jena 6
"I am the light of knowledge listen to get the jist
you all are painted on canvas You do not exist"

[Jay-Rede]

RD

Nice Aproach To The Topic, I Did'nt Really Feel The Topic, But Felt As Though You Handled It Well And Put In A Nice Effort, The Start Saw Some Really Nice Double Syllable Multies.. A Very Nice Flow, And Some Great Element Of Complexity, The First Bars Defined Your Verse IMO, It Kept Me Interested And I Felt You Put In A Great Effort

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the spirits listen and process the souls that are Godless..
ye have little faith with apocolypse and then God left..

Cool Bar Bro

Kaeo.Seru

Also Another Nice Aproach To The Topic With Limited Resources.. I Personally Preffered Your Structure And Scheme, You Also Used Some Complex Multies And Had A Very Impressive Flow, I Read Rees's Verse And Thought He Had It In The Bag, I Should Have Known Better! Good Stuff Fam..

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this is bigger than Goliath brought down by a stone
bigger than Jericho reduced to rubble n bones


Niceeee!!

Vote - Kaeo.. Very Impressive Battle, Proves That You Both Worked With What Was Given Very Well. Two Impressive Flow's And Great Verses.. Great Battle Guys, This Is The Type Of Battle That Makes The League Interesting!

[Don Dotta]

R dizzle:
Nice mutli usage definetly, format was nice and you definetly went with what you got topic wise. I felt that you handled it very well..

i do pray the children of innocence depicted will be forgiven..
so i can envision a merciful God worth faith minus pretendin'..
worth prayer and tithes rather an evil that stays in demise..
boiling of vengeance wishing for a second chance of existence

Feelin these bars here, nice approach once again I was rappin this shit and it rolled right off my toungue..



K.S: you brought fire as usual, I feel like the format of your verse’s and rhymes are just so smooth.. every bar kind of slides into the next one almost as if I wrote the shit myself.. Lol..fa real though I felt you followed along topic and ran with what you had as well..definetly had some quotable and the multi flips were just ridiculous..

come bare witness... angels and demons alike
come sinnner come saint to the glorious light
surely you'll cite the reasons warriors fight
the most climatic sight since the story of Christ
this is bigger than Goliath brought down by a stone
bigger than Jericho reduced to rubble n bones
larger than Jonah's Ark and the story it told
casting shadows on the crusaders struggling woes

Straight fire!!



Good battle all in all but I think kaeo took this, both came with a real nice approach but I felt like seru’s verse was just smoother.. His multi usage was a bit better then r.d and his flow and structure edged out rd as well..



Vote:Kaeo


Nice battle fellas…holllaaaaaa

[STRONGARM]

Yeah.. I actually feel bad for R.D. because imo that's the best verse I've ever seen from him on here. Considering both of y'all hated the Topic I was surprised how well you both wrote for it. I think both verses had flow and Multis galore but KO had better lyricism overall. His verse was just too smooth, every thing rolled off the tongue and every bar connected with the next. The only real negative thing I could say about R.D. and his verse was iffy wording that didn't work for me, like:

now only male can be seen and evil has an envious dream..
to toss these fathers of families into beliefs and so seems..

How do you toss someone INTO beliefs.!? The fuck.!?

fire will burn well these fertilizers of eggs and releasin semen..

Same.. I think the wording could've been a lot better. "and releasin semen" doesn't sound right.


So props to both, you worked well with what you were given. Didn't think either of you half-assed it. Enjoyed both verses..!



MY VOTE = Kaeo.Seru

[R.D.]

^word preciate it.. twas a little intoxicy type so it worked well