Topical 2: Elushun vs. 7th Cresent vs. ((HalfWitIt)) - Hip Hop/Rap Music and Urban Social Network Community

**Plot** · 03-06-2007, 07:16 PM

10-15 bars due MONDAY
check-ins due Friday, please match & vote on ALL battles.
Topic: I'm in love with my teacher

**iLLushun** · 03-06-2007, 10:07 PM

check...i'll probably be going 12...and it'll be up friday night or saturday..

**1/2 Wit It** · 03-06-2007, 10:13 PM

I'm wit it.

**7th Crescent** · 03-06-2007, 10:36 PM

sounds cool..checkin in

**1/2 Wit It** · 03-06-2007, 11:13 PM

I ruled her, wit my ruler - the measurements in
She was a devil in a skirt - such a blessin of sin
Many days I fantasized about caressin her skin
But all of my damaged lies left me stressin within
See I was a shell of a man, and she was the teach
Feelin like a shell in the sand - and she was the beach
Cause I was thinkin I would slay, and she was the weak
But in the end I was the prey, and she was the beast
Its somethin I never mentioned - I was afraid of the speach
Cause she gave me after school detention every day of the week
She created the best sex; she would play wit my worm
But on all of my text tests - she gave me the greatest grades in return
She was obsessed wit my cum - she was cravin my sperm
I decided to stay dumb - I never waited to learn
I felt like a dumber fool - and what appeared was despair
Cause she was givin me summer school, every year I was there
So what was a guy to do - consider droppin the class?
And then experience withdrawal, from not coppin the ass?
Should I forget about the future - and stop it at last?
And take a break from my life - enjoy watchin it pass?
But its not as easy at it seems, by all means - I'm no fool
But you see my only problem is the fact that I'm homeschooled

A little rust is there..just tryin to get into the swing of things again

**iLLushun** · 03-08-2007, 11:45 AM

well here it is...

as the days ago by...
my sighs grow to heaves...
cuz as that rbell sounds...
i never say a word as she leaves...
my heart is obsessed, yet my body's weak...
just a few feet way in a front row seat..
I dazed off and day dream at a nifty time...
dreamin of an affair...
just as she asks the answer of mine...
snapped back to reality and blurt out 69...
as laughter exploded, i slumped back...
numbed at - tha fact that i had said that...
she merely looked and smiled...
tippin her glasses, sexy and seductive...
like she was beggin to be reproductive...
so, the red cheek left, as they turn peacher...
My obsessive was true, im in love wit my teacher...
so
as the class continued to crack up
its was back to dreams
that black skirt, with the blue button up...
need to be button down, and bottom up...
showing her teachers weren't the only one wit rulers...
that it was my time to school her...
moaning and slappin at her ass...(laghter)
when i realized i had stood up in class...
my teacher asked what the hell i was doing...
i was about to tell...
When RING...
i was saved by the bell...

good luck....

**7th Crescent** · 03-08-2007, 09:30 PM

seriously..not my kinda of topic...not to mention...Half Wit..just murdered it...HOME SCHOOLED...that is just ill...no better way to flip that topic...im not one to throw in the towel but on some real shit..my verse would just be garbage next to that...so i gracefully bow out in this one...VERY NICE verse Half Wit...

**iLLushun** · 03-08-2007, 09:46 PM

ha yeah i know...i didnt know how to even come close to something has nice and funny as that...so i keyed

~~Hoodini~~ · 03-09-2007, 08:32 PM

Now in my younger days I used to sport a shag
When I went to school I carried lunch in a bag
With an apple for my teacher 'cause I knew I'd get a kiss
Always got mad when the class was dismissed
But when it was in session, I always had a question
I would raise my hand to make her stagger to my desk and
help me with my problem, it was never much
Just a trick, to smell her scent and try to sneak a touch
Oh, how I wish I could hold her hand and give her a hug
She was married to the man, he was a thug,
His name was Lee, he drove a Z,
he'd pick her up from school promptly at three o'clock
I was on her jock, yes indeedy I wrote graffiti on the bus
First I'd write her name then carve a plus,
with my name last, on the looking glass,
I seen her yesterday but still I had to let her pass

W00T

**Aztek** · 03-09-2007, 09:33 PM

Cause I was thinkin I would slay, and she was the weak
But in the end I was the prey, and she was the beast
(ahahahaha)
But its not as easy at it seems, by all means - I'm no fool
But you see my only problem is the fact that I'm homeschooled
(wtf....haha)

vs

elusion didnt really have any quotables.....half had a dope verse with great flow...twists...and some meta's.....and elusion automatically loses for saying "saved by the bell".....

v/ half

**iLLushun** · 03-10-2007, 09:05 PM

haha oh well...its straight tho..cuz half came wit a nasty verse...no matter what i could have said haha he had tha shit beat...

**Mc Free** · 03-12-2007, 04:09 PM

vote - half
reason - better verse..el came arlight just nothing stood out that much

With an apple for my teacher 'cause I knew I'd get a kiss
Always got mad when the class was dismissed
But when it was in session, I always had a question
I would raise my hand to make her stagger to my desk and
help me with my problem, it was never much
Just a trick, to smell her scent and try to sneak a touch

**iLLushun** · 03-13-2007, 06:09 PM

0-2 one more lol...

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