Top1 ((Pembroke)) Vs Power.

[Criticize]

due thur. checks in prior.

12 bars

norm rules apply


Topic= superhuman strength.

[Kill POWER]

lets go with the menu the resturants on me
punches rattle jaws i can see that as its doin crip walks on concrete
looking through 1 foot thick metal slabs to see yall
picking up cars spinning them shits like b-balls
it takes mad amounts to get me drunk so i bring the pick up truck
crushing kegs upon my forehead with a deep grunt
a cold? its takes the whole world to sneeze on me to get sick
i got something in my teeth using a tree as a tooth pick
using baby fingers to rip a girl topless
lungs got muscles on top of muscle inhaling rusty paint off of cable boxes
when im harvesting i just swipe once and i gather all the cronic
scratch my back for me so i dont leave deep bloody bear claws on it
simply flex the ass cheeks and im busting the seat
swollowing pearly whites while im brushing my teeth
through me down the most shallow hole and i'll punch my out from the bottom
bruce lee? me? pushing enemies miles and im only a millemetre from'em
put my lips on the ground sucking leaving the trees looking like fall
for me sex is a terminator scene pounding the girl through brick walls.
dont think i'll pack your body in my fist like snow balls tempt me
breaking feet and showlaces while tying shoes up even gently
picking up homes, under the house im proping logs
power'll take on a million hulks like he did the dogs
pounding my chest causing earthquacks when they testing.
im busting skin literally showing muscle when im flexin



ok... my bad pembroke on the lack of compition...first topical battle...and second topical open mic.... dont know exactly what im doing...

[Pembroke]

You can have your verse in late if you desire.. I know you have a battle with Crit.

Good luck Power.

[Plot]

Uppiin for Pem?

[Pembroke]

I'm at an office computer right now.. when I get to the library in a few hours I'll have the verse.

VITAMIN Z..

Stuart Placenta had a knack for horse powerful pull
Stallion biceps bulging like eyeballs hanging out of his skull
A rebel of peace, unlocking inner strengths he'd never concieved
Come home to Wonder woman - The American dream..
Hero of the capitol lands, dreadlocks falling in platinum strands
With a clap of his hands, he summoned invisible forces of battering rams
But don't think he didn't use his powers for good
Developing cures for weakness, breaking the ground where he stood
And any evil man who crossed his path was smacked back to the pilgrims
He'd lift crates of relief food to all the starving African children
Galactic omega man, his abs were nicknamed the Fantastic four
Seize the moment, grab the world globe and squeeze it out the door
Steroid android, red bull energy drinks trampling the matadors
But the fun all ended on Black Friday, under the night sky
The Vitamin Z wore off..
And Stuart Placenta transformed back into a scrawny white guy

[Plot]

uppin for votes

[S.Caugh]

lets go with the menu the resturants on me
punches rattle jaws i can see that as its doin crip walks on concrete
looking through 1 foot thick metal slabs to see yall
picking up cars spinning them shits like b-balls-Good Beggining
it takes mad amounts to get me drunk so i bring the pick up truck
crushing kegs upon my forehead with a deep grunt-nah
a cold? its takes the whole world to sneeze on me to get sick
i got something in my teeth using a tree as a tooth pick-ok
using baby fingers to rip a girl topless
lungs got muscles on top of muscle inhaling rusty paint off of cable boxes
when im harvesting i just swipe once and i gather all the cronic
scratch my back for me so i dont leave deep bloody bear claws on it-nice
simply flex the ass cheeks and im busting the seat
swollowing pearly whites while im brushing my teeth
through me down the most shallow hole and i'll punch my out from the bottom
bruce lee? me? pushing enemies miles and im only a millemetre from'em-nice
put my lips on the ground sucking leaving the trees looking like fall
for me sex is a terminator scene pounding the girl through brick walls.
dont think i'll pack your body in my fist like snow balls tempt me
breaking feet and showlaces while tying shoes up even gently-nice
picking up homes, under the house im proping logs
power'll take on a million hulks like he did the dogs-nice
pounding my chest causing earthquacks when they testing.
im busting skin literally showing muscle when im flexin-ehh

Well as you can see i didn't break it down bar for bar.That was because i broke it down in parts.this verse was nice.flow and imagenation was good.only fell off on the toothpick line was lil off wid the set up.everything else was decent of good.The beggining was my fav part.ithink it was like the first 2 bars.the grunt line wasn't only bad line i seen.Otherthen that shit was a impressive drop



Stuart Placenta had a knack for horse powerful pull
Stallion biceps bulging like eyeballs hanging out of his skull-dope
A rebel of peace, unlocking inner strengths he'd never concieved
Come home to Wonder woman - The American dream..
Hero of the capitol lands, dreadlocks falling in platinum strands
With a clap of his hands, he summoned invisible forces of battering rams-nice
But don't think he didn't use his powers for good
Developing cures for weakness, breaking the ground where he stood
And any evil man who crossed his path was smacked back to the pilgrims
He'd lift crates of relief food to all the starving African children-nice
Galactic omega man, his abs were nicknamed the Fantastic four
Seize the moment, grab the world globe and squeeze it out the door
Steroid android, red bull energy drinks trampling the matadors-nice
But the fun all ended on Black Friday, under the night sky
The Vitamin Z wore off..
And Stuart Placenta transformed back into a scrawny white guy-nice ending

Pem this was nice.flow was great and the twist at the end was sick

this is kinda hard to vote on.you both brought your imagenations on this 1.only the ending to pems was better.his flow was alil better cas more multis as well

id say pem by a hair and because his ending...

vote Pem

This should be the battle of the week

[Criticize]

more./

[Kill POWER]

i was expecting newbie comments on my verse...since this was my first topical drop...2nd ever...

1-0 pem

good stuff pem

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