Title Rihvers Vs Con

[Criticize]

12 bars, vote on 3 battles or get docked, no show and get booted, you know the rules dont freepost,

[Malone]

Good luck con!

[~Streetpoet~]

u too Kap!

[Malone]

im only goin eight cuz i wont have time later...



*johnson was a track star that tested positive in court for steroid use

stop screamin, ill have ya mouth bleedin like agressive dentists
that'll bring your 'run to a hault' like micheal johnsons sentence*
bombs are endless, so im blowin up on street like terrorist acts
n' this beam will have dots over ü like usin the charecter's map
ock we dont need doc. cuz the truth is, he's never the Ill mate
con the 'type to hope for a hot one' like shallows on blind dates
your fate? it's locked up in a box, n mal has the key to yur soul
so low blows when i 'kick your balls thru the net' like soccer goals
you cocky so? stock just beat u, con aint touchin the tag team
cuz to peers, ur whole apperance is bitch like highshool drag queens
yea im that mean, cuz mal stay above pool like blow up floaties
cuz plots hot, your just 'carryin his equipment' like rock band roadies
known to son your alias's, 4 at one time, i can take the rushes
and these punches, 'your catchin every angle' like boxing judges
you hot man? i doubt it, one punch would show you im brutal
cuz im known to 'ex-spo's trash weekly' like 'garbage removal'

[Con]

hes= Rhi-verse, Lil-Rill, Malone, Capshun, Serner
x-plane=Hard Rock Cafe occationally has events where Sly(stallone) shows up.


tryina brute me? u aint penetrating, blades givin ya back vents
makin sure Mal get da 'Sly's on appearance' like hard rock events(slice)
lol, if skill category reflected stones u'd b da cheapest mineral
n heavy? more of a 'dead weight/wait' like overcrowded funerals
so after these bootings, ya nasal walls will kno wat my feet meant
from kicks to 'break-in ya bridge' witout a new billiard equipment
none best in, skills on and off, he must be into audiotory testing
coz when it comes to consistency, 'Rill'-lacks easy like resting(relax)
and authority figure? undeserving..u cant even handle snow plows
similar to chronic alkoholiks, u dont have da 'moderate know-hows'
hey fags, its no schematics with petty quarrels-lovers get dramatic
coz we kno u'd never leave da 'Stock world' like Gordon fanatics
bye Mal! ur jus walking thru death in a story witout mystery narrators
toture acts'll 'make ya thumbnail a sure smash' like expert image creators
fact that u cant hack, all previous work gained shit but pure slack
so know, only way u can 'depend on Rhi-verse' is if u turn ur back!

[iLLushun]

Mal...

stop screamin, ill have ya mouth bleedin like agressive dentists
that'll bring your 'run to a hault' like micheal johnsons sentence*
--*Nice strong punch/opener*--
bombs are endless, so im blowin up on street like terrorist acts
n' this beam will have dots over ü like usin the charecter's map
--*Safe Punch*--
ock we dont need doc. cuz the truth is, he's never the Ill mate
con the 'type to hope for a hot one' like shallows on blind dates
--*Ehh decent...wording is off*--
your fate? it's locked up in a box, n mal has the key to yur soul
so low blows when i 'kick your balls thru the net' like soccer goals
--*nice*--
you cocky so? stock just beat u, con aint touchin the tag team
cuz to peers, ur whole apperance is bitch like highshool drag queens
--*decent...first line was nice second fell out*--
yea im that mean, cuz mal stay above pool like blow up floaties
cuz plots hot, your just 'carryin his equipment' like rock band roadies
--*nice*--
known to son your alias's, 4 at one time, i can take the rushes
and these punches, 'your catchin every angle' like boxing judges
--*decent*--
you hot man? i doubt it, one punch would show you im brutal
cuz im known to 'ex-spo's trash weekly' like 'garbage removal'
--*Safe closer*--

overalll nice concepts...safe punches as well as some pretty decent hard hitting ones...good verse



Con...

tryina brute me? u aint penetrating, blades givin ya back vents
makin sure Mal get da 'Sly's on appearance' like hard rock events(slice)
--*decent, like the concept needs a lil work*--
lol, if skill category reflected stones u'd b da cheapest mineral
n heavy? more of a 'dead weight/wait' like overcrowded funerals
--*NICE*--
so after these bootings, ya nasal walls will kno wat my feet meant
from kicks to 'break-in ya bridge' witout a new billiard equipment
--*that was fuckin NICE*--
none best in, skills on and off, he must be into audiotory testing
coz when it comes to consistency, 'Rill'-lacks easy like resting(relax)
--*nice wordplay...*--
and authority figure? undeserving..u cant even handle snow plows
similar to chronic alkoholiks, u dont have da 'moderate know-hows'
--*haha nice personal*--
hey fags, its no schematics with petty quarrels-lovers get dramatic
coz we kno u'd never leave da 'Stock world' like Gordon fanatics
--*nice*--
bye Mal! ur jus walking thru death in a story witout mystery narrators
toture acts'll 'make ya thumbnail a sure smash' like expert image creators
--*Nice*--
fact that u cant hack, all previous work gained shit but pure slack
so know, only way u can 'depend on Rhi-verse' is if u turn ur back!
--*Nice nameplay, strong closer...*--

overall nice verse..first bar was the only down fall..needed to be reworded...but its very consistent..

This was a close battle...but i'ma have to give it to....

VOTE: con...for the more consistent verse..both came hard and nice....he was just a lil more hard hitting with his punches....
good battle

[Malone]

Upp

[4got10]

Ya dont have to accept since its crew Mal. But hopefully you and con will trust my vote (I haven't read either verse yet BTW)

stop screamin, ill have ya mouth bleedin like agressive dentists
that'll bring your 'run to a hault' like micheal johnsons sentence*
^ROFL nice man, fiya 5/5

bombs are endless, so im blowin up on street like terrorist acts
n' this beam will have dots over ü like usin the charecter's map
^First line, Street plays are played, second is dope tho. 3/5

ock we dont need doc. cuz the truth is, he's never the Ill mate
con the 'type to hope for a hot one' like shallows on blind dates
^Lol, good personal attempt but con pretty hot lately... might not apply 4/5

your fate? it's locked up in a box, n mal has the key to yur soul
so low blows when i 'kick your balls thru the net' like soccer goals
^'through'.. the net... woulda made better sense somethin like fire hot soccer goals 3/5

you cocky so? stock just beat u, con aint touchin the tag team
cuz to peers, ur whole apperance is bitch like highshool drag queens
^Eh, he's not battling the tag team... and the second line is str8 3/5

yea im that mean, cuz mal stay above pool like blow up floaties
cuz plots hot, your just 'carryin his equipment' like rock band roadies
^LOL nice 4/5

known to son your alias's, 4 at one time, i can take the rushes
and these punches, 'your catchin every angle' like boxing judges
^Eh, wording could have been better 3/5

you hot man? i doubt it, one punch would show you im brutal
cuz im known to 'ex-spo's trash weekly' like 'garbage removal'
^Rofl nice shit loved this line... prolly best in ur verse.... 5/5

Total: 30/41

Con

tryina brute me? u aint penetrating, blades givin ya back vents
makin sure Mal get da 'Sly's on appearance' like hard rock events(slice)
^Eh, its 'Syl' btw and blade would have been better in the second line.... 3/5

lol, if skill category reflected stones u'd b da cheapest mineral
n heavy? more of a 'dead weight/wait' like overcrowded funerals
^LOL nice shit 5/5

so after these bootings, ya nasal walls will kno wat my feet meant
from kicks to 'break-in ya bridge' witout a new billiard equipment
^Nice, wording is a little wierd 4/5

none best in, skills on and off, he must be into audiotory testing
coz when it comes to consistency, 'Rill'-lacks easy like resting(relax)
^LOL nice wordplay 4/5

and authority figure? undeserving..u cant even handle snow plows
similar to chronic alkoholiks, u dont have da 'moderate know-hows'
^ROFL LMFAO DOPE 5/5

hey fags, its no schematics with petty quarrels-lovers get dramatic
coz we kno u'd never leave da 'Stock world' like Gordon fanatics
^Nice, took me a minute to referance Stock Car(s) though LOL... 4/5

bye Mal! ur jus walking thru death in a story witout mystery narrators
toture acts'll 'make ya thumbnail a sure smash' like expert image creators
^LOL nice 4/5

fact that u cant hack, all previous work gained shit but pure slack
so know, only way u can 'depend on Rhi-verse' is if u turn ur back!
^ROFL nice, 4/5

Total: 33/40
V-Con

Reason: Mal came with a few played lines, really hurt this since it was only two points differance in the vote. Con Man the Thumbnail line and moderate one was FiYa son keep doin that fo real...

Mal buddy on a diff note Holla at TF fam im sure we'd accept u :)

[Malone]

the played lines were in the setup.. its better than putting bullshit filler in the setup..


1-0 crew vote

[4got10]

^Eh its all good, i figured you'd say so... But this still counts as one of my votes :o)

[Lyfe]

Mal...

stop screamin, ill have ya mouth bleedin like agressive dentists
that'll bring your 'run to a hault' like micheal johnsons sentence*

strong open

bombs are endless, so im blowin up on street like terrorist acts
n' this beam will have dots over ü like usin the charecter's map

lol nice

ock we dont need doc. cuz the truth is, he's never the Ill mate
con the 'type to hope for a hot one' like shallows on blind dates

lol nice worded wierd but nice non the less

your fate? it's locked up in a box, n mal has the key to yur soul
so low blows when i 'kick your balls thru the net' like soccer goals

lol nice

you cocky so? stock just beat u, con aint touchin the tag team
cuz to peers, ur whole apperance is bitch like highshool drag queens

first lines ehh seonds decent

yea im that mean, cuz mal stay above pool like blow up floaties
cuz plots hot, your just 'carryin his equipment' like rock band roadies

lol nice personal

known to son your alias's, 4 at one time, i can take the rushes
and these punches, 'your catchin every angle' like boxing judges

decent

you hot man? i doubt it, one punch would show you im brutal
cuz im known to 'ex-spo's trash weekly' like 'garbage removal'

nice closer

overall sic verse but i expect as much from mal not the best ive seen from you but sic non the less


Con...

tryina brute me? u aint penetrating, blades givin ya back vents
makin sure Mal get da 'Sly's on appearance' like hard rock events(slice)

nice first ones worded wierd but straight

lol, if skill category reflected stones u'd b da cheapest mineral
n heavy? more of a 'dead weight/wait' like overcrowded funerals

nice

so after these bootings, ya nasal walls will kno wat my feet meant
from kicks to 'break-in ya bridge' witout a new billiard equipment

Sic...

none best in, skills on and off, he must be into audiotory testing
coz when it comes to consistency, 'Rill'-lacks easy like resting(relax)

sic

and authority figure? undeserving..u cant even handle snow plows
similar to chronic alkoholiks, u dont have da 'moderate know-hows'

lol sic

hey fags, its no schematics with petty quarrels-lovers get dramatic
coz we kno u'd never leave da 'Stock world' like Gordon fanatics

lol ova...

bye Mal! ur jus walking thru death in a story witout mystery narrators
toture acts'll 'make ya thumbnail a sure smash' like expert image creators

nice

fact that u cant hack, all previous work gained shit but pure slack
so know, only way u can 'depend on Rhi-verse' is if u turn ur back!

nice closer

this is gonna be close

this was a touph decision but..

Vote-Con

his verse just edged with stronger hitting punches and more personals

great job on both parts

good battle fam

[Phonix]

Dope battle guys
Here we go for the breakdown:

Malone:

stop screamin, ill have ya mouth bleedin like agressive dentists
that'll bring your 'run to a hault' like micheal johnsons sentence*

Strong way to open up

bombs are endless, so im blowin up on street like terrorist acts
n' this beam will have dots over ü like usin the charecter's map

Ehh this concept kinda played out now

ock we dont need doc. cuz the truth is, he's never the Ill mate
con the 'type to hope for a hot one' like shallows on blind dates

Like the creativity punch was Ok

your fate? it's locked up in a box, n mal has the key to yur soul
so low blows when i 'kick your balls thru the net' like soccer goals

Not feeling this what so over, concept seems kinda homo'ish and the simile then was too basic

you cocky so? stock just beat u, con aint touchin the tag team
cuz to peers, ur whole apperance is bitch like highshool drag queens

Not feeling this

yea im that mean, cuz mal stay above pool like blow up floaties
cuz plots hot, your just 'carryin his equipment' like rock band roadies

Dope

known to son your alias's, 4 at one time, i can take the rushes
and these punches, 'your catchin every angle' like boxing judges

Cool

you hot man? i doubt it, one punch would show you im brutal
cuz im known to 'ex-spo's trash weekly' like 'garbage removal'

cool wordplay

Overal - Some played concepts in there and two i really didnt like, rest was pretty solid.

Vs

Con

tryina brute me? u aint penetrating, blades givin ya back vents
makin sure Mal get da 'Sly's on appearance' like hard rock events(slice)

Needed the explanation for this wouldnt of got this without, good wordplay

lol, if skill category reflected stones u'd b da cheapest mineral
n heavy? more of a 'dead weight/wait' like overcrowded funerals

Hah dope

so after these bootings, ya nasal walls will kno wat my feet meant
from kicks to 'break-in ya bridge' witout a new billiard equipment

Good

none best in, skills on and off, he must be into audiotory testing
coz when it comes to consistency, 'Rill'-lacks easy like resting(relax)

Not feeling how this was directed would of been dope if u said he lacks something else or worded the consistency concept better imo, still cool though

and authority figure? undeserving..u cant even handle snow plows
similar to chronic alkoholiks, u dont have da 'moderate know-hows'

Not feeling this

hey fags, its no schematics with petty quarrels-lovers get dramatic
coz we kno u'd never leave da 'Stock world' like Gordon fanatics

Stock lines dont appeal to me anymore

bye Mal! ur jus walking thru death in a story witout mystery narrators
toture acts'll 'make ya thumbnail a sure smash' like expert image creators

So sick

fact that u cant hack, all previous work gained shit but pure slack
so know, only way u can 'depend on Rhi-verse' is if u turn ur back!

Sick closer

Overall = Picked up so sick towards the end, again a bar i wasnt feeling and i felt a bar could of been reworded for better effect
Imo
Vote - Con - Fairly even battle but con had some sick ass punches towards the end which imo seperated the two verses.

[Malone]

bombs are endless, so im blowin up on street like terrorist acts
n' this beam will have dots over ü like usin the charecter's map

Ehh this concept kinda played out now


Tell me one person thats even said anything remotly close to that..



And for everyone that said my verse was played, they were all in my setups at least i had punches in mine con's was all filler..

so after these bootings, ya nasal walls will kno wat my feet meant
from kicks to 'break-in ya bridge' witout a new billiard equipment

what the fuck is my bridge?

hey fags, its no schematics with petty quarrels-lovers get dramatic
coz we kno u'd never leave da 'Stock world' like Gordon fanatics

the stock world?

tryina brute me? u aint penetrating, blades givin ya back vents
makin sure Mal get da 'Sly's on appearance' like hard rock events(slice)

seriously one of the worst wordplays ive ever heard from you

none best in, skills on and off, he must be into audiotory testing
coz when it comes to consistency, 'Rill'-lacks easy like resting(relax)

i lack easy? maybe you can explain this?


I thought i ko'd your verse cuz it didnt make any sense.. you had 3 good bars and that was it.. the rest was bullshit..

3-0 ko good battle.

[Phonix]

Mal i aint tryna beef or anything im just giving my opinion on the matter....
I said the relax bar of cons needed re-wording
I said the stock world line was bad
and the punch i thought was played of urs to me is all alike to that end con like n n shit like that is all similar to me
You dont have to take my vote
Just imo

[Malone]

no its a ko.. i just love how all these hot lines con had made no sense what so ever... then again nobody understood my punches.. maybee im on a wack level again.. it dont matter con wins..