Title Chronical Vs Rihvers

[Criticize]

12 bars, norm rules, vote on 3 battles or get docked, no show and get booted dont freepost take ur bullshit to the 'bullshit thread'

[LiL.RiLL]

Shhhh.

[Magix]

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[LiL.RiLL]

Chronikal, grimey jesus


shhhhhhhh

dogz you straight wack, nobody behind, you hear the mods speak?
no homo, but the 'hammer will nail jesus' like 'crucifyin gods seed'
and a rap flava title? i laugh, your just lucky that con came weak
cuz truth is, chron laid like 'the date today' he 'wont be around next week'
see you talk, i speak. most dudes listen cuz rill got smarts
aint 'sharp with feelings', but i'll still 'put a knife on ya heart'!
get ripped apart, when i tear this wildcard outta the race
so if you got a 'stentch of insight,' ill 'blow the nose/knows right outta ya face'
put you outta ya place, jagged shots stagger only too land fully
you a man? then 'change out of those pants' like a highschool bully
you aint that hot, chron been up and down since he knew creation
cuz spar-in fast will 'burn this star to ash' like a hebrew cremation
Chron so impatient, stay ontop, come on man you aint stoppin me
cuz beatin Rill? 'you aint gotta chance' like 'junior monopoly'
im cocky see, but nuff bout me. when i clap you, thats it chron
space to work? this battle you dont have 'much/mush-room' like 'atom bombs'
one smack ya gone, suffocate you with ya fitted, the bill is killin ya
so, 'rill chrome-a-zone in your body' but now you gotta lil ill in ya
and thats more than you had! cuz you aint hip! your clueless dude
so rill leave this 'square through more twists and flips' than rubix cube
whose ya crew? a few biters? terra best stick to the bench
holdin onto con's nuts, like you got the grip on the wrench?
you too busy bein wack, but claimin greatness. you amuse me
so rill end the 'chronikal with one clip' like 'vin diesel's movie

[ChroNikal]

So it's a new week, & a new name, my meaning is minimal,
it's like witnesses fleeing from criminals,
you're 19 on the the net speaking in disrespectful of ways?,
like Gary Coleman, what's seen isn't reflecting your age,
you're merely allowed in my presence of greatness,
when I own your chest cavity and tell you it's vacant,
so then rihvers gets maimed when damage is dealt,
he's like white kids in timeout, can't handle the belt,
get torn with my methods, & my norm is perfection,
but I'll get back to the wack at hand, like rill's form of affection,
he's delusional, as if a bastard had drugged this fiend,
next time you'll get a tidal shot, is when blasted by submarines,
your dispersion of ill in battle shows my purpose within this,
as the antidote for the anti-dope of your version of sickness,
writing skills?, I'll stand by your casket & whistle,
and let you ghost write...YOUR epitaph with a chisel,
he's torn, let me demonstrate, limb for limb tossed,
skills are like rotten organs, not good enough to rip off,
but I move crowds, so if I ever brace hands,
my punch'll give ya skeleton the illest break dance,
make chants & like cervical surgeons using surgical metals,
I ain't gotta know you to rip you on a personal level,
my punches are clever, so they know that what I'm saying's.
truth, like this WAS a Land slide like Rovers hydroplaning...

[4got10]

im cocky see, but nuff bout me. when i clap you, thats it chron
space to work? this battle you dont have 'much/mush-room' like 'atom bombs'
one smack ya gone, suffocate you with ya fitted, the bill is killin ya
so, 'rill chrome-a-zone in your body' but now you gotta lil ill in ya
and thats more than you had! cuz you aint hip! your clueless dude
so rill leave this 'square through more twists and flips' than rubix cube
^ Best of Rih'verz

get torn with my methods, & my norm is perfection,
but I'll get back to the wack at hand, like rill's form of affection,
he's delusional, as if a bastard had drugged this fiend,
next time you'll get a tidal shot, is when blasted by submarines,
writing skills?, I'll stand by your casket & whistle,
and let you ghost write...YOUR epitaph with a chisel,
^ Best of Chron

I can't vote, since me 'n Chron are crew and this is a title match i don't think it'd be far to vote either way regardless of my opinion.

[iLLushun]

Lil Rill...

dogz you straight wack, nobody behind, you hear the mods speak?
no homo, but the 'hammer will nail jesus' like 'crucifyin gods seed'
--*Nice opener*--
and a rap flava title? i laugh, your just lucky that con came weak
cuz truth is, chron laid like 'the date today' he 'wont be around next week'
--*Decent*--
see you talk, i speak. most dudes listen cuz rill got smarts
aint 'sharp with feelings', but i'll still 'put a knife on ya heart'!
--*decent*--
get ripped apart, when i tear this wildcard outta the race
so if you got a 'stentch of insight,' ill 'blow the nose/knows right outta ya face'
--*NICE*--
put you outta ya place, jagged shots stagger only too land fully
you a man? then 'change out of those pants' like a highschool bully
--*decent*--
you aint that hot, chron been up and down since he knew creation
cuz spar-in fast will 'burn this star to ash' like a hebrew cremation
--*nice*--
Chron so impatient, stay ontop, come on man you aint stoppin me
cuz beatin Rill? 'you aint gotta chance' like 'junior monopoly'
--*flipped nice, seen it before tho...*--
im cocky see, but nuff bout me. when i clap you, thats it chron
space to work? this battle you dont have 'much/mush-room' like 'atom bombs'
--*nice*--
one smack ya gone, suffocate you with ya fitted, the bill is killin ya
so, 'rill chrome-a-zone in your body' but now you gotta lil ill in ya
--*nice*--
and thats more than you had! cuz you aint hip! your clueless dude
so rill leave this 'square through more twists and flips' than rubix cube
--*NICE!*--
whose ya crew? a few biters? terra best stick to the bench
holdin onto con's nuts, like you got the grip on the wrench?
--*nice*--
you too busy bein wack, but claimin greatness. you amuse me
so rill end the 'chronikal with one clip' like 'vin diesel's movie
--*Strong closer...*--

Overall not the hardest....but nice...only one bar i didn't really like but you flipped it nice...




Chron...

So it's a new week, & a new name, my meaning is minimal,
it's like witnesses fleeing from criminals,
--*decent opener*--
you're 19 on the the net speaking in disrespectful of ways?,
like Gary Coleman, what's seen isn't reflecting your age,
--*decent*--
you're merely allowed in my presence of greatness,
when I own your chest cavity and tell you it's vacant,
--*nice*--
so then rihvers gets maimed when damage is dealt,
he's like white kids in timeout, can't handle the belt,
--*nice*--
get torn with my methods, & my norm is perfection,
but I'll get back to the wack at hand, like rill's form of affection,
--*decent*--
he's delusional, as if a bastard had drugged this fiend,
next time you'll get a tidal shot, is when blasted by submarines,
--*ehh decent*--
your dispersion of ill in battle shows my purpose within this,
as the antidote for the anti-dope of your version of sickness,
--*NICE*--
writing skills?, I'll stand by your casket & whistle,
and let you ghost write...YOUR epitaph with a chisel,
--*nice*--
he's torn, let me demonstrate, limb for limb tossed,
skills are like rotten organs, not good enough to rip off,
--*nice*--
but I move crowds, so if I ever brace hands,
my punch'll give ya skeleton the illest break dance,
--*decent*--
make chants & like cervical surgeons using surgical metals,
I ain't gotta know you to rip you on a personal level,
--*ok*--
my punches are clever, so they know that what I'm saying's.
truth, like this WAS a Land slide like Rovers hydroplaning...
--*nice closer*--

Overall not your strongest either...some were ok and need rewording..but decent...


Rill...
Decent:3
Nice:9



Chron...
Decent:6
Nice:6


based on wow factor and overall verse..and consistency..i'm voting for...

Vote....LIL RILL

[Pembroke]

rih

dogz you straight wack, nobody behind, you hear the mods speak?
no homo, but the 'hammer will nail jesus' like 'crucifyin gods seed'

- cool

and a rap flava title? i laugh, your just lucky that con came weak
cuz truth is, chron laid like 'the date today' he 'wont be around next week'

- not feel'n

see you talk, i speak. most dudes listen cuz rill got smarts
aint 'sharp with feelings', but i'll still 'put a knife on ya heart'!

- Wack

get ripped apart, when i tear this wildcard outta the race
so if you got a 'stentch of insight,' ill 'blow the nose/knows right outta ya face'

- so your blowing him??

put you outta ya place, jagged shots stagger only too land fully
you a man? then 'change out of those pants' like a highschool bully

- forced rhyme, not feel'n either

you aint that hot, chron been up and down since he knew creation
cuz spar-in fast will 'burn this star to ash' like a hebrew cremation

- my friend a jew, & when his family members die they dont cremate the star, therefore this doesnt make sense

Chron so impatient, stay ontop, come on man you aint stoppin me
cuz beatin Rill? 'you aint gotta chance' like 'junior monopoly'

- ok good, the chance concept from monopoly is played but cool flip ..

im cocky see, but nuff bout me. when i clap you, thats it chron
space to work? this battle you dont have 'much/mush-room' like 'atom bombs'

- the wording doesnt make sense... word it better and it could be hot

one smack ya gone, suffocate you with ya fitted, the bill is killin ya
so, 'rill chrome-a-zone in your body' but now you gotta lil ill in ya

- LOL no that dont sound right

and thats more than you had! cuz you aint hip! your clueless dude
so rill leave this 'square through more twists and flips' than rubix cube

- arent rubix cubes straight lines, but 3d? ... i like dit tho

whose ya crew? a few biters? terra best stick to the bench
holdin onto con's nuts, like you got the grip on the wrench?

- ehh ok

you too busy bein wack, but claimin greatness. you amuse me
so rill end the 'chronikal with one clip' like 'vin diesel's movie

- aight nameplay/closer

not bad of a verse, lot of concepts weren't good and the others were creative, nothin impressive though

Chron

So it's a new week, & a new name, my meaning is minimal,
it's like witnesses fleeing from criminals,

- ??

you're 19 on the the net speaking in disrespectful of ways?,
like Gary Coleman, what's seen isn't reflecting your age,

- pff haha

you're merely allowed in my presence of greatness,
when I own your chest cavity and tell you it's vacant,

- ehh

so then rihvers gets maimed when damage is dealt,
he's like white kids in timeout, can't handle the belt,

- umm

get torn with my methods, & my norm is perfection,
but I'll get back to the wack at hand, like rill's form of affection,

- kinda funny

he's delusional, as if a bastard had drugged this fiend,
next time you'll get a tidal shot, is when blasted by submarines,

- played

your dispersion of ill in battle shows my purpose within this,
as the antidote for the anti-dope of your version of sickness,

- cool

writing skills?, I'll stand by your casket & whistle,
and let you ghost write...YOUR epitaph with a chisel,

- nice flow

he's torn, let me demonstrate, limb for limb tossed,
skills are like rotten organs, not good enough to rip off,

- ok nice...

but I move crowds, so if I ever brace hands,
my punch'll give ya skeleton the illest break dance,

- LOL you crazy

make chants & like cervical surgeons using surgical metals,
I ain't gotta know you to rip you on a personal level,

- ok

my punches are clever, so they know that what I'm saying's.
truth, like this WAS a Land slide like Rovers hydroplaning...

- said like twice in the same line, it wasnt bad though

you have a nice style, flow wasn't a problem, try nameplay punches & you'd do good w/ them... half the verse hit hard, keep it up

v/ ChroniKal
enjoyed it... see the breakdown
Stay ^ both

[Criticize]

and a rap flava title? i laugh, your just lucky that con came weak
cuz truth is, chron laid like 'the date today' he 'wont be around next week'
ok
get ripped apart, when i tear this wildcard outta the race
so if you got a 'stentch of insight,' ill 'blow the nose/knows right outta ya face'

you aint that hot, chron been up and down since he knew creation
cuz spar-in fast will 'burn this star to ash' like a hebrew cremation
Chron so impatient, stay ontop, come on man you aint stoppin me
cuz beatin Rill? 'you aint gotta chance' like 'junior monopoly'
im cocky see, but nuff bout me. when i clap you, thats it chron
space to work? this battle you dont have 'much/mush-room' like 'atom bombs'
and thats more than you had! cuz you aint hip! your clueless dude
so rill leave this 'square through more twists and flips' than rubix cube
ok
____________
Chron-you're 19 on the the net speaking in disrespectful of ways?,
like Gary Coleman, what's seen isn't reflecting your age,
get torn with my methods, & my norm is perfection,
but I'll get back to the wack at hand, like rill's form of affection,
he's delusional, as if a bastard had drugged this fiend,
next time you'll get a tidal shot, is when blasted by submarines,
writing skills?, I'll stand by your casket & whistle,
and let you ghost write...YOUR epitaph with a chisel,
make chants & like cervical surgeons using surgical metals,
I ain't gotta know you to rip you on a personal level,
_______________

overall rihvers got this he had the better punchlines a cpl of nameplays in their that didnt really hit but some nice wordplay and metaphours that brought about some strong punches
chronical started weak wtf at your first bar but toward the end of his 12 hes verse got better and made this battle sorta close, you have a style thats sorta hit and miss and last week you hit against con but u missed here,

vote- rihvers, more good punches


remember starting next week will be the rule you have to hold the belt for 3 weeks to earn number 1 contender spot, so it wont affect this matchup.

[LiL.RiLL]

2-1

[Phor Lyphe]

rih

dogz you straight wack, nobody behind, you hear the mods speak?
no homo, but the 'hammer will nail jesus' like 'crucifyin gods seed'

ive seen a couple of chrons battles and the jesus Crucifying lines played serious but this was ok

and a rap flava title? i laugh, your just lucky that con came weak
cuz truth is, chron laid like 'the date today' he 'wont be around next week'

sic

see you talk, i speak. most dudes listen cuz rill got smarts
aint 'sharp with feelings', but i'll still 'put a knife on ya heart'!

lol nice

get ripped apart, when i tear this wildcard outta the race
so if you got a 'stentch of insight,' ill 'blow the nose/knows right outta ya face'

nice

put you outta ya place, jagged shots stagger only too land fully
you a man? then 'change out of those pants' like a highschool bully

lol nice

you aint that hot, chron been up and down since he knew creation
cuz spar-in fast will 'burn this star to ash' like a hebrew cremation

Ova....

Chron so impatient, stay ontop, come on man you aint stoppin me
cuz beatin Rill? 'you aint gotta chance' like 'junior monopoly'

played

im cocky see, but nuff bout me. when i clap you, thats it chron
space to work? this battle you dont have 'much/mush-room' like 'atom bombs'

and yet another ova...

one smack ya gone, suffocate you with ya fitted, the bill is killin ya
so, 'rill chrome-a-zone in your body' but now you gotta lil ill in ya

worded pretty bad and its braggin

and thats more than you had! cuz you aint hip! your clueless dude
so rill leave this 'square through more twists and flips' than rubix cube

decent

whose ya crew? a few biters? terra best stick to the bench
holdin onto con's nuts, like you got the grip on the wrench?

nice

you too busy bein wack, but claimin greatness. you amuse me
so rill end the 'chronikal with one clip' like 'vin diesel's movie

sic

not the best ive seen from you but far from the worst plus you got 2 ovas from me and thats never happened so sic verse overall

Chron

So it's a new week, & a new name, my meaning is minimal,
it's like witnesses fleeing from criminals,

ehh

you're 19 on the the net speaking in disrespectful of ways?,
like Gary Coleman, what's seen isn't reflecting your age,

ok

you're merely allowed in my presence of greatness,
when I own your chest cavity and tell you it's vacant,
nice

so then rihvers gets maimed when damage is dealt,
he's like white kids in timeout, can't handle the belt,

not big on race jokes but this was coo

get torn with my methods, & my norm is perfection,
but I'll get back to the wack at hand, like rill's form of affection,

- ok your style is different and i respect that

he's delusional, as if a bastard had drugged this fiend,
next time you'll get a tidal shot, is when blasted by submarines,

-ok

your dispersion of ill in battle shows my purpose within this,
as the antidote for the anti-dope of your version of sickness,

- nice

writing skills?, I'll stand by your casket & whistle,
and let you ghost write...YOUR epitaph with a chisel,

- ncie

he's torn, let me demonstrate, limb for limb tossed,
skills are like rotten organs, not good enough to rip off,

- ok nice...

but I move crowds, so if I ever brace hands,
my punch'll give ya skeleton the illest break dance,

- lol ok

make chants & like cervical surgeons using surgical metals,
I ain't gotta know you to rip you on a personal level,

- ehh

my punches are clever, so they know that what I'm saying's.
truth, like this WAS a Land slide like Rovers hydroplaning...

said like twice messed with the punch ehh at best

not a bad verse pretty nice not enough tho

vote - rill

[LiL.RiLL]

bump

[Stockton]

Quotables
Mal
and a rap flava title? i laugh, your just lucky that con came weak
cuz truth is, chron laid like 'the date today' he 'wont be around next week'

get ripped apart, when i tear this wildcard outta the race
so if you got a 'stentch of insight,' ill 'blow the nose/knows right outta ya face'

you too busy bein wack, but claimin greatness. you amuse me
so rill end the 'chronikal with one clip' like 'vin diesel's movie

Chron
he's delusional, as if a bastard had drugged this fiend,
next time you'll get a tidal shot, is when blasted by submarines,

writing skills?, I'll stand by your casket & whistle,
and let you ghost write...YOUR epitaph with a chisel

This was a nice battle, both brought some heat lines, and some filler, but Mal had the best two bars of the battle, so i gotta give it to him

vote-mal

[Con]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! u two, i swear!

[Stockton]

^Ur a joke... take ur beating and die