Through My Eyes..(Soon 2 Be Audio)

[Grimstyles™]

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This Is A Track On My Up Coming Cd..
Will Post Audio Later On..
For Now, Enjoy The Lyrics..


Through My Eyes(Instrumental)
^If You Wanna Follow Along..

"I Want People To Understand.. I Want People To See, What I Go Through..Look At Life, Through My Eyes.."

Yo..

Verse 1
Come Witness A Story Untold../
Listen Close, It's About To Unfold../
About A Kid, So Bright..So Strong../
Yet..So Right, And So Wrong../
Born To A Great Father & A Great Mother../
Not To Mention His 3 Younger Brothers../
Who Loved Him, Despite His Habbits../
They Dreamed Of Achieving His Status../
Of Academic Greatness..Making His Family Proud../
But Would Often, Chill With The Wrong Crowd../
Small Stature..A Mere, 5 Pounds, 12 Ounces../
You Wouldn't Believe He'd Ammount To This../
It's A Great Story..Just Keep Listening../
Simply Because, It's Just The Beginning../

Hook
Come See Life Through My Eyes..
A Story Of Deception And Lies..
That Should Win The Nobel Prize..
See Life Through My Eyes..

Verse 2
Now Let's Fast-Forward A Couple Years../
He's Still Chilling With The Wrong Peers../
Cash Out Their Ass..They're Big Ballers../
While Our Friend Only Has A Few Dollars../
He Goes And Spends His Money On Vicodin../
Dollar Signs In His Dreams, He's In It To Win../
His Homies Pushing Bud..That's Overkill../
When He's Making More At $3 A Pill../
Had Bundles And Stacks..He's Finally Won../
So He Began Popping His Pills For Fun../
1..2 At Night, Just To Help Him Pass Out../
After Awhile.. His Liver Began To Give Out../
Mom Found Him On The Floor..With Noting To Say../
She Check Him Into The Hospital The Next Day../
Pills Made Him A New Man, Made Him Stand Tall../
But They Also Proved To Be His Downfall../

Hook
Come See Life Through My Eyes..
A Story Of Deception And Lies..
That Should Win The Nobel Prize..
See Life Through My Eyes..

Verse 3
He Came Out Never The Same../
Still Consumed By An Unseen A Pain../
His Parents Had Some Hope../
That He Would Change, But Nope!../
He Was Looking For Ways To Cope../
So One Night, He Picked Up A Knife../
Reluctantly..He Sliced Into His Vein../
The Blood Dripping..He's Relieving His Pain../
He Kept Going..Without Even Trying../
Over Time, His Wrist Had More Cuts Than Diamonds../
Now Addicted, He's Doing It On A Daily Basis../
No More Knicks, Just Bigger And Bigger Abrassions../
Continued Cutting..Unaware He's Half Way To Hell../
I Feel His Pain..I've Been Through It Myself../
Yup! All The Strife And All The Glory../
That's Why I'm Still Living In This Story..
God Damn..!

Hook
Come See Life Through My Eyes..
A Story Of Deception And Lies..
That Should Win The Nobel Prize..
See Life Through My Eyes..

[Kyza Soza.]

this is ok, you tell a cool story, your flow is a lil choppy tho it would really help to incorparate more multies so it flows smoother
for an audio i suppose this is cool, and i cant really comment enough if i aint heared it recorded. but the lyrics arn't too bad
keep at it dude.

[Grimstyles™]

^^Yeah I Know What You Mean..
It's My Accents And Stuff..
But Thanks For The Feed..
I'll Work On The Multis And Such..

[Beyond]

Yeah, I remember I did drop that was titled the same as this a long time ago, lol. I agree with Kyza. Multies would make this read a lot smoother along with some more creative rhyme schemes. Just keep practicing, man, and you'll get there.

[Grimstyles™]

Thanks For The Feed Guys..I Really Appreciate It ^^
I'm Tryin' To Get Back Into The Swing Of Things..
I'll Get There..