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07-14-2007, 12:46 PM
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#1 (permalink)
| | "Till its always 4:20."
Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: ancient empire
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Gunshine to the O-State Collabo..oh THAT GRIMMEY!!!....been long in the making....alwayz is when alot of heads in one collab....hopefully you feelin it...if not....eh.....FUCK YOU!!!!....lol......leave feed and i will return...props to Ten i believe for starting this....flow on hooks and my homie dub on last....holla
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Flow Central(hook)
Tendenciez
Aztek
Flow Central
Z Dub SoundClick song info: The Smuggla by Aztekproduktion - Teknological Advancement
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Last edited by Aztek; 07-15-2007 at 08:17 PM.
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07-15-2007, 06:23 PM
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| | Registered User
Join Date: Jun 2007
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Rep Power: 0 | Re: The Smuggla Ft. Flow Central, Tendenciez, & Z Dub
Beat is pretty hot..Hook is hot..Feelin the verse so far..Your delivery is good but you're missing a weeee-bit in emotion..You dont have that persuation in your voice..Lyrically this shit is hot and your flow was spotless though..Dope track..lol..'get to learnin learnin'..nice touch.. | |
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07-17-2007, 08:58 PM
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| | R-Tist
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Houston TX
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Rep Power: 6 | Re: The Smuggla Ft. Flow Central, Tendenciez, & Z Dub
I like the beat. Chorus is tight.
1st verse could use help with the quality, but the verse itself is good.
2nd verse is straight, nothing to complain about.
3rd comes in real smooth. So far this is a solid song. I like the flow of this verse.
4th is a bit louder than the other verses. Its a change of pace for the song, which is always good for a long song.
Good drop
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07-19-2007, 11:59 PM
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| | A-LeGeNd-ReBORN
Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: DirtY-SoutH-FL
Posts: 1,509
Rep Power: 9 | Re: The Smuggla Ft. Flow Central, Tendenciez, & Z Dub
Actually, this was all Flow's idea...i only jumped on. Props to Flow for starting this and seeing it to its finished stage. Uppin for some more feed...my quality will be much improved soon as i get my new set up finished...tho would like to hear more suggestions to flow and lyrics...holla...-oNe-
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07-22-2007, 01:20 PM
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| | ...Tha Son of Lux
Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: North Erin
Posts: 1,159
Rep Power: 4 | Re: The Smuggla Ft. Flow Central, Tendenciez, & Z Dub
Hook is nice, real ish.. Flow is str8 dope man.. Ten got swagger u jus need to perfect your delivery.. Aztek on point n hittin hard keep uppin ur lyrics n master them ablibs!.. haha Flow on the thrid killed it masterd ish.. Z Dub rydein the beat pretty nice.. all yall ill man.. nice song.. tho yall should of made the sound levels of yall verses similar.. like use the same filter n ruffly the same volumes ect -Duce | |
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07-27-2007, 11:09 PM
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| | A-LeGeNd-ReBORN
Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: DirtY-SoutH-FL
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Rep Power: 9 | Re: The Smuggla Ft. Flow Central, Tendenciez, & Z Dub
last bumb*
-oNe-
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08-02-2007, 12:33 PM
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| | ..Swag Lika Motha Phuka..
Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: ..SoCal..Ya Digg..
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Rep Power: 10 | Re: The Smuggla Ft. Flow Central, Tendenciez, & Z Dub
replyin while listenin*****
Flow Central(hook)
Tendenciez
Aztek
Flow Central
Z Dub
^^tha order..ill drop tha feed in..and also will drop feed on beat quality and lyrics and shit u know..aight here we go*****
beat is poppin..:)..aight hook sounds nice..i do lik this shit..good job flow..TEN..aye dogg sounds lik ya verse and adlibs r tha voice and far as sound goes good..but ya shit sounded good..TEK.."fire drill"..damn son u got that grimey shit nice feel to this track..quality sounded really great..i think u really made this track poppin..flow central switchin up tha flow a bit aight then lil daddy do ya thang playboi..lol.."get to learnin..learnin"..nice verse..lyrics and quality dope..z dub this kat is lucky he got tha breakdown beat and shit..i always liked shit lik that in beatz..great verse and quality was good too..wow this turned out to be a really fresh collabo..i didnt really see anything wrong wit this shit..and ya'll did ya thing and shit so props for ya'll 9/10...1
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08-03-2007, 08:26 AM
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| | dope correspondent
Join Date: May 2003 Location: FLA
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thx for the feedback guys | |
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08-03-2007, 09:02 AM
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#9 (permalink)
| | Rede Between The Lines!!
Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Above You
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will feed later guys *will edit with feed*
flow get at me!!!!
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