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08-14-2008, 06:56 PM
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| | The Hoodlum Bunch
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| The Referee - Damn It Feels Good To Be Me! |
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08-14-2008, 10:34 PM
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| | Banned
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| Re: The Referee - Damn It Feels Good To Be Me! Hip hop is dead..
Just playing.
The pudgy, innocent Thrax I've come to know has turned hood.. I'm liking your delivery, it's well rounded and sounds hard. A mix of Paul Wall and Lil Flip.. and surprisingly, the chorus works. Only problem: The title says "Feels" and you say "feel" good to be me..
Lyrics = yeah, generic as fuck.. but that's the price to make a club track bop. Nothing out of the ordinary.. you held your own on a pretty average track that's catchy. You should def. get a fast paced rapper to feature in on it.. like a ShotCallers type of emcee to rip the ending verse to shreds.. I'm sure you have somebody from your group in mind already..
DC
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08-15-2008, 07:42 PM
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| | Registered User
Join Date: Aug 2008
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Rep Power: 0  | Re: The Referee - Damn It Feels Good To Be Me! listenin....beat is southern im diggin....so is the flow nice...emotion is on point...lyrics are decent i heard a couple punches.. sounds real commerical..hook is simple buts sounds caughty ...overall 8.5/10 i cud hear it on tha radio stay up |
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08-16-2008, 12:32 PM
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| | "Till its always 4:20."
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Rep Power: 10   | Re: The Referee - Damn It Feels Good To Be Me! lol...same color pickachu...or how ever you spell it.....this beat is perfect for ya flow....you crazy man...this was fresh....i dont think ive ever heard a song wit just you on it....props....some funny lyrics, i think the hook will be alot better when you put whatever addons you gone do...its kinda repetative....other than that its deff a hit single for a mixtape....
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08-18-2008, 12:21 AM
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| | The Hoodlum Bunch
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| Re: The Referee - Damn It Feels Good To Be Me! Thanx for feedback.. i'll reply to any links dropped in here. |
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08-18-2008, 12:25 AM
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| | Registered User
Join Date: Aug 2008
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Rep Power: 0  | Re: The Referee - Damn It Feels Good To Be Me! chorus is cool and haha pembroke feel/s lmao
but flow works,
beats cool
deliv is sick.
lyrics are cool.
chris brown money line was funny.
and a/c jewels line was cool
good shit. |
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08-19-2008, 05:24 AM
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| | ..MoTiVaTiOnAl SpEaKeR...
Join Date: May 2005 Location: Memphis
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Rep Power: 0  | Re: The Referee - Damn It Feels Good To Be Me! This shit was stupid.
I'll listen to your other songs before I call you a wack emcee
I mean, even for a commercial joint, this is a disgrace.
Only good part is "something something paper cup"
I giggled at that line.
But you know, this shit will probably get you a record deal.
Sell out ass nigga
Ok, I listened to another track.
The niggaz you rap with suck.
I see where you get it from.
I really hope you aren't the best Ohio has to offer.
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08-19-2008, 08:16 AM
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| | RRS.
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Rep Power: 9   | Re: The Referee - Damn It Feels Good To Be Me! i think your an idiot^ hoodlum bunch is ill.
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08-19-2008, 08:54 AM
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| | The Hoodlum Bunch
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| Re: The Referee - Damn It Feels Good To Be Me! And hes wack.. but thanx for peeping Memph regardless. |
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08-19-2008, 10:11 PM
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| | ..MoTiVaTiOnAl SpEaKeR...
Join Date: May 2005 Location: Memphis
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Rep Power: 0  | Re: The Referee - Damn It Feels Good To Be Me! lolruck, I'm an idiot cause I stated an opinion?
That makes a whole lot of since.
But honestly, the song was trash...anyway you cut it.
I mean, I'm sure he posted his song on here to see how people felt so he could go back and re-work and come up with something better.
And for you guys to sit here and tell him he's hot cause he had one good line per verse is wrong.
Seriously....
...Just plain wrong...
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08-19-2008, 10:30 PM
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| | RRS.
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Rep Power: 9   | Re: The Referee - Damn It Feels Good To Be Me! yeah im sure he does want to rework his shit if people aint feeling, constructive criticism.. you just bambled on about shit. go cop lets us in vol 1 and call em trash.
"Do I have to be 'Shady' with tha '45' for you to take me 'Sirius'''
and that is ill? pft gtfo.
__________________ my niggas skeme hard beef for the scrilla make the pheens walk with a lean like zombies in thrillaa nigga. use the ak cause i aim to kill n ill clap the fresh prince jus to aim at will |
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08-19-2008, 11:04 PM
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| | The Hoodlum Bunch
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| Re: The Referee - Damn It Feels Good To Be Me! ^Exactly. |
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08-24-2008, 08:26 PM
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| | Slaughter Game
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Rep Power: 11   | Re: The Referee - Damn It Feels Good To Be Me! listenin.. sounding pretty decent, got the commercial flow and delivery down pat.. cool little metaphor shits but they simple.. hook decent but not very exciting actually now its annoying lol.. throw some other lines in there.. second verse pretty nice too same applies from the first verse.. hook comes back in but im really not feeling it now.. i dont know i dont like repeatitive shit i guess.. third verse, i like the cocky braggadocious approach your holding.. just got i guess i little monotonous for me cause i will loosing interest i will download and bump on my speakers when i get back to camp.. sounds like it would be ill with bass but in the headphones it gets old quick.. major ups, your swag is gettin amped now
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08-25-2008, 02:27 AM
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| | grown, and still growing.
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Rep Power: 5  | Re: The Referee - Damn It Feels Good To Be Me! beat is straight, sounds like the typical commercial joint...hook is cool, sounds like some shit them cleveland cats do.
lyrics were alright, they fit the song and did the purpose...im sure there will be some people rockin' to this and that was your aim, so thats whats up. keep doin' your thing bro. |
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08-25-2008, 08:43 AM
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| | The Hoodlum Bunch
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| Re: The Referee - Damn It Feels Good To Be Me! ^Thanx for the feed y'all.. yea I wasnt trying to be overly lyrical on this.. and R.D. I recorded an add on for the chorus so its not as repetative.. but imma return the feed when I get off work tonight. |
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