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12-01-2006, 09:40 AM
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| | vintage lyrical rasta'
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__________________ We plan our lives according to a dream that came to us in our childhood, and we find that life alters our plans. And yet, at the end, from a rare height, we also see that our dream was our fate. It's just that providence had other ideas as to how we would get there. Destiny plans a different route, or turns the dream around, as if it were a riddle, and fulfills the dream in ways we couldn't have expected.
Last edited by Essay Real; 12-11-2006 at 03:06 AM.
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12-01-2006, 09:55 AM
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| | ...Im Geezy
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ok i thought this was the doctors advocate beat just then omg if it was
Anyways Sick beat still i think ya vocals coulda been upped a bit more flow Is Sickness i like your emotion you put in to some of your bars. aint got n quotes but this was a dope lissen.
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12-01-2006, 09:55 AM
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| | God.Mode
Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Your Brain
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Ill Shit, Man... Love The Sample. Same As The Start Of Doctors Advocate... This Beat Is Fuckin Hot...
Real Shit, Quality N All That Was Fine... Flows Hot... Good Shit Bro
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12-01-2006, 11:35 AM
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| | dope correspondent
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"d4L done, tradie it in for krs 1"- haha sick fam
hook is tight, type of shit i listen to while tokin with a shorty...
lyrics on point, emotion is cool, vocals seemed a little quiet to me too...but i liked this...
nice drop fam...... | |
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12-01-2006, 09:06 PM
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| | ...Im Geezy
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re-up this man so i can lissen again | |
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12-04-2006, 12:24 AM
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| | vintage lyrical rasta'
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updated.
__________________ We plan our lives according to a dream that came to us in our childhood, and we find that life alters our plans. And yet, at the end, from a rare height, we also see that our dream was our fate. It's just that providence had other ideas as to how we would get there. Destiny plans a different route, or turns the dream around, as if it were a riddle, and fulfills the dream in ways we couldn't have expected.
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12-05-2006, 11:51 AM
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| | BARACKstar
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beats good, sample is perfect for this beat
whoa emotion is deep!
ending of your first verse is dope...
damn the second verse is fucking nice, the story is real~
....good flow on this Justin, and loving yuh message at the ending, keep it trilly ;]~
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12-06-2006, 03:26 PM
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| | R-Tist
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I'm diggin it. As always you murdered the track. That kick drum is kind of hard on the track. I think I played it on lo fi, but I wont stop it to start it over. Good drop. real shit
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12-06-2006, 04:49 PM
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| | RF's Most Hated
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I Like This Shyt....This Shyt Go Hard....I Cant Say Shyt Else | |
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12-06-2006, 09:23 PM
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| | Mike Strangle
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classic | |
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12-08-2006, 11:50 PM
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| | Save yourself
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Realism - quality music. With the lyricism altered along the edges, it might be the urban JaeSwift version of Aesop Rock's "Lucy." If I had an electronic device that could transfer this song from here to there, it would be done. Rise.
Keep doing you
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12-09-2006, 01:23 PM
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| | Life Of A Savage
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damb i was lookin for that instramental...
beat is dope
lyrics on piont some real shit
somthin id listen to alot
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12-09-2006, 02:56 PM
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| | Master of Ruggedness
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yea very dope fuckin beat man. who made it? flows are sick lyrics are dope emotion is les dope as fuck sir. nice fuckin job fer sure. this better make that soundclick site and if it doesnt i say hang the fuckin moderators! MUAH HAHAHAHA! keep'em comin man. ez | |
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12-10-2006, 04:01 PM
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| | there you go
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Really liked this song. Done with your dunks yet?
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12-10-2006, 07:38 PM
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| | KBM
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ill as hell essay, u sound perfect on this track man | |
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