The Flow

[RGC]

http://www.rapflava.com/forums/benef...ip-119982.html (Benefit.From.A.Relationship)
http://www.rapflava.com/forums/group...ck-119662.html (Group Therapy: Orangutan Lipstick)

Wrote it to Jay-Z's "H.O.V.A."

Ayo, my Air Force Ones, back on my feet,
Yup, my dope ass flow, back on the beat,
Like crack on the street, I keep keep movin
You keep keep losin, I keep keep doin,
What I did to get here, I rep here,
East van where each man knows death's near,
All I know, everyone's talkin bout crest here
The nicest whitest, I just write it like it, is
Never gonna have a wiz, but a lotta kids,
The original, the author, the father to many,
All while being drunk off of some henny
This shit is a celebration, dope MC congregation,
This shits too easy I flow like I'm on vacation
Flow more vivid than sudaam was hangin,
Plus tighter than the blondes I'm bangin,
Ya shits gettin stagnant, go on n change it
Blame shit on the producer who produced it,
Regardless, you makin wack ass music,
I do's it, I'm just cruisin you try hard losin,
I'ma set up shop, you can buy bars, use it,
Heed it you need it, you leavin ears bleedin,
This is therapy, my demons is breathin,
Greetin greatness, I'm speakin rape shit,
Breakin walls without askin, I'm goin ape shit
I'm like a criminal who's on probation,
Confined to where I live, I live in the basement,
The lower level, rap city, check my rapshody,
Don't do hard drugs, can't find a crack in me
So stop askin me, you ain't passin me,
What you see is my shadow, you still in it,
Kiss the rap game goodbye, I'm stealin it!

[Pembroke]

Took me by surprise with the back and forth, candid type of flow, hence the title. Smooth work here, Rob, can't find any faults in the rhyme scheme, it came together, but not so much as your other open mics because of it's lack of seriousness that the others possess. There were some heaters, and it can be made into audio with no prob as usual.

Blame shit on the producer who produced it,
Regardless, you makin wack ass music,
^I'd love to see you write a diss.. to someone on here or just rap in general. You've got the technique down to write a memorable one. Either that, or something more serious and not just kicking it laid back. You can do it all with the right topic.

Keep that in mind,

Stay up

[Joel VeNoM.]

ncie technique man of course u know already the flow wuz on point...keep at it dawg u nice wit it and stay active....

[IllLiterature]

very smooth easy flowing on the most part.. actually digged the simple kicked back swag on this.. not a whole lot to say.. as a etxt piece its cool.. think it would make a hot audio with the possibility of maybe a couple lines reworded at least in how i was spitting it.. nice drop man

peace

[Nyse]

Like crack on the street, I keep keep movin
You keep keep losin, I keep keep doin,
^I liked this

Heed it you need it, you leavin ears bleedin,
This is therapy, my demons is breathin,
^favorite line

Nice key shit to a beat...would be nice as an audio.. keep doin you RGC, peace

[AVARICE]

yeah, very laid back smooth flow, i like it. at times i thought you kind of relaxed a bit too much on the lyrical output even though this wasn't meant to be a real lyrical piece to begin with but still it was cool.

I'm like a criminal who's on probation,
Confined to where I live, I live in the basement,
The lower level, rap city, check my rapshody,
Don't do hard drugs, can't find a crack in me
^^ that's cool. good piece overall, ready steady flow and feel about the whole piece, good work.
respect.

[Oliver Twist]

What I did to get here, I rep here,
East van where each man knows death's near,

prolly one of my fav bars rhymeing scheme in this bar was nice....overall this piece was extremely dope....flow was definitley on point...nice punches as well.....man i'd love to hear you on an audio track...do you do audio??...keep doin you....