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Old 04-27-2006, 03:03 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default ''The$e Lasting Dreams'' (audio poetry joint)

''these lasting dreams''
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These Lasting Dreams
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My dreams I cant let them go,...-gripping fists-,...-closed empty-
'THA THINGs THAT EVADED'replaced by,...-tears- scorchin cheeks
-apon tha ground they fall- land and -there roses grow-
thoe i noe through -strength- things full-filled
I still savor -sweet failure- a -gloomy delight- of biting tha dust
has me -heathly- a balanced diet of -discontentment-
an although tha weight of tha pain i try to maintain
-persuasive attempts- to''walk it off''like an athletic sprain
-persistently failed- so now i unveil a -generous smile-
to hide an empty shell -yerning to be filled-
filled,...to tha very limits my body can hold
till tha contents leak out an trickle down engulfing
-mind-,-body-,an -soul- splashing me with tha unambiguous feeling
of -completion- though -i still feel empty for reasons-
reasons,...that most normal people wouldnt understand
is it -normal?- to dream of being on stage?
rather than tha ones in tha stands?
-seemingly out of reach-
i cried an died a million times
thinking of all tha other opportunitys -I let slip by-
and -hindsight- is a mother fucka allowing u to view your mistakes
with an -eagle eye-
but i see now my mistake wasnt reaching for tha -stars-
but setting my -dreams to high- or may-be tha truth lies -in me-
knowing that i -allways settled-,...for outcomes of circumstances
i knew -wasnt tha best- a fact of a matter that will -haunt me-
till tha day i rest,..till my physical form is gone,
till tha slow decay of bones an spleen,...
my name will live on,...in my -lasting dreams-

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Old 04-27-2006, 10:18 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Aye fam like i said this was a real solid piece..you mos def got poetic talent...
Id like to see more where this came from...

Solid piece CORDS...
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I like your voice. Wish the mic was a little bit better, but still this is on some real shit. I really like the my lasting dreams line, that was a great way to finish a thought. Good shit.
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