Take Them D's off that Bitch

[Dirty D]

http://www.rapflava.com/forums/r-i-p...va-118482.html (R.I.P Rapflava)
http://www.rapflava.com/forums/easts...le-118744.html (Eastside Freestyle)

see that whip ya lost that, dirty d done got that/
dropped that off in tha shop so they can chop that/
take them d's off that bitch, so they can chop that//
take them d's off that bitch, so they can chop that//2x

now dirty d ridin dirty 30 got tha trunk low/
40 in tha console, 50 in tha drum roll//
chopper in tha back seat, ready if it goes down/
hit my nigga up say im headed up his road now//
mac 11 and a 4 pound, we both amped up/
if ya ho at ya house now ya both stamped up//
ill even shoot tha dog, yea im cold, and what?/
ya doin good in ya hood and i want that cut//
so tha pistols loaded up and tha ks on stand by/
fuck that im bringin this leave tha 40 in tha ride//
now we come up to tha side, we know where to creep/
my nigga jays been casin ya place for a week//
now we inside, grab tha dope and tha rolls/
and im sprayin up errythang look like it got a pulse//
Joksta lets roll bruh, "we cant leave homie"/
thats when i saw ya candy apple cut wit ds on it//

see that whip ya lost that, dirty d done got that/
dropped that off in tha shop so they can chop that/
take them d's off that bitch, so they can chop that//
take them d's off that bitch, so they can chop that// 1x

[critan]

good post, nice storyline

[RGC]

Yeah it was cliche, but I liked it. Hook was dope, would be good in audio, had a good flow and a good amount of rhymes (internals and such) ketp it interesting. Some multi's here and there, yea, I liked this shit thought it was cool, keep it up.

[Dirty D]

thanks for tha feed