Tag: ((FluPlot)) vs. NogKing

[Plot]

16 bars per team due Monday.
Please check & match.

[Fluent]

We'll go easy.

[Noggah]

then u'll lose...

check...

[King M.C]

im here... im going 2 pm nog.....

[Noggah]

heres hopin u dont got enough time to rewrite ya "going easy" verse...


Nog

FluPlot like a 'saddle by itself', cause u both 'a mount/amount ta nothin'...
aside from 2 bitches in a mans game, powder puffin...*
we puttin more twists in plot then M shahmalan... til his postures gone...
and all he can do is kneel down night n day, like muslims during ramadan...
man, we'll send every one of ya "oh!" lines back to the huddle...
cause ya rhymes are all bark n no bite like dogs snapped in a muzzle...
at first u was ridin cons dick, now u two got nothin to speak about???
whats the matter man... didnt he remember to give u a reach around???**
im fluents worst nightmare, a newly created language...
leavin his punches lost in translation more than conversations in Spanglish...
NogKing put an end to you quicker than my wack ass crew kid...
cause this dude wouldnt be worldwide...if he flew int.... (fluent/ int = international)
to women, fuckin fluent is a scary thought...
thats why his head couldnt go in n out of holes if he was a prairie dog...
ima take u out, that way at least u have a chance at makin a spark... (fluent/ flint makes lighters spark)
cause u 'two' wouldnt be 'animals' if u joined noah for 40 days on the arc...

*powder puff = when girls play football
**plot n con beefin, plot was dickridin Con in my battle with him

King

Biohazardous? nah, i wouldnt call this plotting-flu biological warfare..
Thaught we was drilling catastrophically, happens they just 'minor' witout da oil-fields..
'Shady' da way im destroying they earthly habits, consider this threat 'Marshall' law..
Ya glory days are over, so aint rambunctous--Steven Jackson these Marshall Faulks'..
Ur threads lik re-'tails' when ours get auction off, easliy watch us shock da market..
Leave em' wit electrical problems, face it droppin extra lines da only time ya'll get a "bar-gain"..
FluPlot rimes are deteriorating lik old tree trunks, shelter da only use for ya logins..
U'd think this da season to be jolly da where 'Nog' come across ya noggan..
These sidekicks must b psyhics, cuz they just knew this was over before it started..
But u lik fishermen carrying exports, ya deck has been wrongfully carded/carted..
Plot no 1 rip u off, but da way u got 'Con' suppose 2 get mad..
Flu biting aint da only time u seen 'Criticize' all over that ass..
U think it was a scientific outbreak da way im barrying flu..
And plot u just 'moderate', im more than a few steps ahead of u..
Its foolish breakin a leg or two, its apparent u already coming up short..
Its lik u 'straining ya breath' wit this monkey on ya back, we got ya coming up 'horse'..

[Fluent]

Fluent:

For just showing up, what are these fools thinking?
Inject botox in your eyelids but we won't see ya win-King
We'll have ya'll damaged so give up ya cumbersome intent
No prison break but pigs'll fly if they escape punishment (Helicopters?)
Nogking need more time to think up shit nameplays
They want an in-term-mission but it ain't Straight A's
Nog can't hold shit down, his skills just can't amount
You couldn't get a hold on me freezing my bank account
Don't bother to bitch over this cuz ya too weak to rebel
Ya'll wouldn't know the Bay: Six if you had its pH level
Check the verses, it's clear the way you battle is soft
Learn to fix elevators if you want ya skills to have a lift-off
It's laughable to imagine them as better or greater
Cuz they couldn't get curtain calls as interior decorators
Fluplot are expected to take this cuz we got the best writtens
While ya skills ain't valued by your peers like Amish electricians

Plotter:

These cunts aren’t dope, devastated when we hunt them both,
Way they cant get elevated, its lack of chronic said to stunt ya growth.
Use their own twisted logic to blunt their hopes, we maul lames everyday,
& their wrong Con chess/conscious mistake, like losing board-games to HWs.
Did Ray-Ray ghost both ya gems? You’d be better off to Think twice,
Coz FluPlot crush ya rocks underfoot, to illustrate treading on thin ice.
There’ll be no tie in this meeting, our dominions a landslide decision,
Quickly getting ya position on da fence, without any undecided opinions.
Dangerous to challenge, now take a dive or be slain by our talons,
We’re first to tip the scales when its 2 fools lives that hang in the balance.
Get ashamed by our talents, see how quickly we murder rookie ensembles,
& debris after serving them their just deserts, just how their cookies crumbled.
Stomach pains only time their crook w’rumbles, knives’ll fell these rivals,
Blatantly stating that I don’t like Kings chances aint knockin Elvis revivals.
Leave no survivors, but these wacks were far from the right standards,
They’ll only ever make top notch status, left strung from our high branches.

[Plot]

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[Phonix]

And it goes a lil something like this...

Nog

FluPlot like a 'saddle by itself', cause u both 'a mount/amount ta nothin'...
aside from 2 bitches in a mans game, powder puffin...*

1st line is played..2nd is poor

we puttin more twists in plot then M shahmalan... til his postures gone...
and all he can do is kneel down night n day, like muslims during ramadan...

ahh i was gonna use a ramadan punch..ok relevant because the time of yr which is cool..actual punch was alright too man.

man, we'll send every one of ya "oh!" lines back to the huddle...
cause ya rhymes are all bark n no bite like dogs snapped in a muzzle...

Played fam

at first u was ridin cons dick, now u two got nothin to speak about???
whats the matter man... didnt he remember to give u a reach around???**

Nahh

im fluents worst nightmare, a newly created language...
leavin his punches lost in translation more than conversations in Spanglish...

Ok..simile wasn't v.creative though.

NogKing put an end to you quicker than my wack ass crew kid...
cause this dude wouldnt be worldwide...if he flew int.... (fluent/ int = international)

Pretty cool

to women, fuckin fluent is a scary thought...
thats why his head couldnt go in n out of holes if he was a prairie dog...

Ehh played..exact same concept as the ostritch one.

ima take u out, that way at least u have a chance at makin a spark... (fluent/ flint makes lighters spark)
cause u 'two' wouldnt be 'animals' if u joined noah for 40 days on the arc...

Ok

*powder puff = when girls play football
**plot n con beefin, plot was dickridin Con in my battle with him

King

Biohazardous? nah, i wouldnt call this plotting-flu biological warfare..
Thaught we was drilling catastrophically, happens they just 'minor' witout da oil-fields..

Poor.

'Shady' da way im destroying they earthly habits, consider this threat 'Marshall' law..
Ya glory days are over, so aint rambunctous--Steven Jackson these Marshall Faulks'..

Ehh..rhyming is weak too.

Ur threads lik re-'tails' when ours get auction off, easliy watch us shock da market..
Leave em' wit electrical problems, face it droppin extra lines da only time ya'll get a "bar-gain"..

Bargain is firstly pronounced bar-gan so it doesn't work. Also if it did , needed a better flip

FluPlot rimes are deteriorating lik old tree trunks, shelter da only use for ya logins..
U'd think this da season to be jolly da where 'Nog' come across ya noggan..

Wack

These sidekicks must b psyhics, cuz they just knew this was over before it started..
But u lik fishermen carrying exports, ya deck has been wrongfully carded/carted..

Pretty cool.

Plot no 1 rip u off, but da way u got 'Con' suppose 2 get mad..
Flu biting aint da only time u seen 'Criticize' all over that ass..

Lol ight

U think it was a scientific outbreak da way im barrying flu..
And plot u just 'moderate', im more than a few steps ahead of u..

Ok..suppose

Its foolish breakin a leg or two, its apparent u already coming up short..
Its lik u 'straining ya breath' wit this monkey on ya back, we got ya coming up 'horse'

Decent at best.

VS

Fluent:

For just showing up, what are these fools thinking?
Inject botox in your eyelids but we won't see ya win-King

Haha nameplay is basic..hits though

We'll have ya'll damaged so give up ya cumbersome intent
No prison break but pigs'll fly if they escape punishment (Helicopters?)

Nah

Nogking need more time to think up shit nameplays
They want an in-term-mission but it ain't Straight A's

Haha

Nog can't hold shit down, his skills just can't amount
You couldn't get a hold on me freezing my bank account

Ok

Don't bother to bitch over this cuz ya too weak to rebel
Ya'll wouldn't know the Bay: Six if you had its pH level

Basic lines are mad played fam.

Check the verses, it's clear the way you battle is soft
Learn to fix elevators if you want ya skills to have a lift-off

Poor

It's laughable to imagine them as better or greater
Cuz they couldn't get curtain calls as interior decorators

Ok

Fluplot are expected to take this cuz we got the best writtens
While ya skills ain't valued by your peers like Amish electricians

Haha yeah that was cool

Plotter

These cunts aren’t dope, devastated when we hunt them both,
Way they cant get elevated, its lack of chronic said to stunt ya growth.

Poor

Use their own twisted logic to blunt their hopes, we maul lames everyday,
& their wrong Con chess/conscious mistake, like losing board-games to HWs.

Forced

Did Ray-Ray ghost both ya gems? You’d be better off to Think twice,
Coz FluPlot crush ya rocks underfoot, to illustrate treading on thin ice.

Ok

There’ll be no tie in this meeting, our dominions a landslide decision,
Quickly getting ya position on da fence, without any undecided opinions.

Yeah thats cool, had a similar concept in my head

Dangerous to challenge, now take a dive or be slain by our talons,
We’re first to tip the scales when its 2 fools lives that hang in the balance.

Dope delivery..cool punch

Get ashamed by our talents, see how quickly we murder rookie ensembles,
& debris after serving them their just deserts, just how their cookies crumbled.

Played..again cool delivery though

Stomach pains only time their crook w’rumbles, knives’ll fell these rivals,
Blatantly stating that I don’t like Kings chances aint knockin Elvis revivals.

Basic nameplay..punch was ok

Leave no survivors, but these wacks were far from the right standards,
They’ll only ever make top notch status, left strung from our high branches.

Thats cool

Vote - FluPlot

[Fluent]

continue

[Pembroke]

Nog

FluPlot like a 'saddle by itself', cause u both 'a mount/amount ta nothin'...
aside from 2 bitches in a mans game, powder puffin...*

I don't usually like punchlines with explanations.

we puttin more twists in plot then M shahmalan... til his postures gone...
and all he can do is kneel down night n day, like muslims during ramadan...

Concept is kind of a stretch, but it's okay.

man, we'll send every one of ya "oh!" lines back to the huddle...
cause ya rhymes are all bark n no bite like dogs snapped in a muzzle...

Dope rhyming

at first u was ridin cons dick, now u two got nothin to speak about???
whats the matter man... didnt he remember to give u a reach around???**

Hah

im fluents worst nightmare, a newly created language...
leavin his punches lost in translation more than conversations in Spanglish...

Cool idea, never seen the movie though

NogKing put an end to you quicker than my wack ass crew kid...
cause this dude wouldnt be worldwide...if he flew int.... (fluent/ int = international)

Nah

to women, fuckin fluent is a scary thought...
thats why his head couldnt go in n out of holes if he was a prairie dog...

K

ima take u out, that way at least u have a chance at makin a spark... (fluent/ flint makes lighters spark)
cause u 'two' wouldnt be 'animals' if u joined noah for 40 days on the arc...

Too simple

King

Biohazardous? nah, i wouldnt call this plotting-flu biological warfare..
Thaught we was drilling catastrophically, happens they just 'minor' witout da oil-fields..

What?

'Shady' da way im destroying they earthly habits, consider this threat 'Marshall' law..
Ya glory days are over, so aint rambunctous--Steven Jackson these Marshall Faulks'.

Nice flow, but I don't get it.

Ur threads lik re-'tails' when ours get auction off, easliy watch us shock da market..
Leave em' wit electrical problems, face it droppin extra lines da only time ya'll get a "bar-gain"..

Eh, has potential

FluPlot rimes are deteriorating lik old tree trunks, shelter da only use for ya logins..
U'd think this da season to be jolly da where 'Nog' come across ya noggan..

Lots of spelling errors, it's cool, like the christmas image

These sidekicks must b psyhics, cuz they just knew this was over before it started..
But u lik fishermen carrying exports, ya deck has been wrongfully carded/carted..

K

Plot no 1 rip u off, but da way u got 'Con' suppose 2 get mad..
Flu biting aint da only time u seen 'Criticize' all over that ass..

First line is barely in English. Nah

U think it was a scientific outbreak da way im barrying flu..
And plot u just 'moderate', im more than a few steps ahead of u..

Burying* it's alright

Its foolish breakin a leg or two, its apparent u already coming up short..
Its lik u 'straining ya breath' wit this monkey on ya back, we got ya coming up 'horse'..

?

Nog, nice show from you, simple concepts, always a pleasure reading the rhythm. King you have potential.. just tighten the rhyme scheme and follow a basic punchline format. Avoid set-ups like your first bar.

Fluent:

For just showing up, what are these fools thinking?
Inject botox in your eyelids but we won't see ya win-King

Decent

We'll have ya'll damaged so give up ya cumbersome intent
No prison break but pigs'll fly if they escape punishment (Helicopters?)

Huh? Creative, but where did this come from

Nogking need more time to think up shit nameplays
They want an in-term-mission but it ain't Straight A's

Don't like it

Nog can't hold shit down, his skills just can't amount
You couldn't get a hold on me freezing my bank account

Okay

Don't bother to bitch over this cuz ya too weak to rebel
Ya'll wouldn't know the Bay: Six if you had its pH level

Yes, played

Check the verses, it's clear the way you battle is soft
Learn to fix elevators if you want ya skills to have a lift-off

Worst battle bar I can remember reading from you in awhile

It's laughable to imagine them as better or greater
Cuz they couldn't get curtain calls as interior decorators

Interior decorators for _____? Seems incomplete, decent

Fluplot are expected to take this cuz we got the best writtens
While ya skills ain't valued by your peers like Amish electricians

K

Plotter:

These cunts aren’t dope, devastated when we hunt them both,
Way they cant get elevated, its lack of chronic said to stunt ya growth.

Could be smoother

Use their own twisted logic to blunt their hopes, we maul lames everyday,
& their wrong Con chess/conscious mistake, like losing board-games to HWs.

Weak name-punchline, I've noticed your fond of these.. like "Fluent saw me comin' and made a plot to escape like Australian members breaking out of prison"

Did Ray-Ray ghost both ya gems? You’d be better off to Think twice,
Coz FluPlot crush ya rocks underfoot, to illustrate treading on thin ice.

Cool one.

There’ll be no tie in this meeting, our dominions a landslide decision,
Quickly getting ya position on da fence, without any undecided opinions.

Okay, like the perspective

Dangerous to challenge, now take a dive or be slain by our talons,
We’re first to tip the scales when its 2 fools lives that hang in the balance.

Nice.

Get ashamed by our talents, see how quickly we murder rookie ensembles,
& debris after serving them their just deserts, just how their cookies crumbled.

Eh, no

Stomach pains only time their crook w’rumbles, knives’ll fell these rivals,
Blatantly stating that I don’t like Kings chances aint knockin Elvis revivals.

Worst battle bar I can remember seeing from you.

Leave no survivors, but these wacks were far from the right standards,
They’ll only ever make top notch status, left strung from our high branches.

Good close.

Not bad from both of you.. as always, I expect better.

v/ FluPlot

Yup.

[King M.C]

thats 2-0 for them...

[Noggah]

good battle fluent n plot

[Fluent]

someone finish this one..

[S.Caugh]

By just reading the match ud think Nog and King Wouldn't have a chance.But Nogs verse was actually nice.kings was ok just in some parts it was ether forced or didn't rhyme..Now flue and plot had verses 2 be expected.They were both nice.punches were not forced.flow was good
this was a good read.i would break it down bar for bar but thats maad long.if i need to i will.
Goodshit guys.Vote flue and plot

2 good verses 2 1

[Fluent]

Normally that could never be counted but no votes are coming in so I dunno, King MC or Noggah can decide if they want it to count.