((StreetCrit)) vs. PowDope

[Plot]

Length to be announced but at the moment Im thinking 15 bars.
So one does 7 & the other does 8, but we'll see what everyone wants.
Please make ya checks & keep it clean.

[DOPE ART]

check.

i just feel sorry for Con and Clit =)

[Criticize]

as do i.

[Criticize]

were ready.
awaiting you guys.

[Kill POWER]

plotter is coo with us droppin a day late... so here it is...




dopeart

I’ll roast you right. SP you low as shit, not even close to light.
My punches connect and drop crit to con like I fed his open mic

Con you talk a big game, but aint no body scared of ya bull
Crit the best? my lines stay infront of C like negative Variables(-C)

You ready to explode? Well, my mac stops combustion
And it’ll also tear Street up worse then blacktop construction

I own on all ya drops. lets get real, kids know Recitals hot
I'll put Chopper out of business without buying out a motor-cycle shop

sit down a peep your own shit Con, your wack herb.
think you got the win? N-O, C like reading ya name backwards

Crit, stop goign on ya rants. where all sick of your bossy strides
have u obliterated, cause it's known Stinging Rays kills all you Ausie Guys

explainatory
dopeart's real name is ray... and a stingray killed croc hunter which is australian like crit is

'POWER'

im writing a love story with unknown affairs the way i twist these characters
crits gay burial, theres been more men in chopper then 'u.s. army air carriers'

i'll put con in hideouts and leave this guy misplaced
crits got a fly life? ok i'll show the death it like butterfly displays(critters)

i increase mine, cons head is space like what you see between lines,
cons career mirrors a city for blind people the way you wont see 'street sign'(ed)

these kids must be strings ina battle beat cuz they come up thin in dissin
yall aint vets, i'll leave con pushin featherweight like 'woman gyms in prison'

i'll buck his knowledge with straps like cons brain stripped
fuck con's lame scripts, he could get a girl pregnant and still not name-flip(con=filipino..flip=filipino)

im like blind and senseless grandmothers when i put slaps to cheeks
power'll put more stitches on this pair of genes then a levi's factory

slap these peeps solo, quick to snap theyre beams slo mo
power'll drop more bare heels on this couple then marriages in 'japanese dojo's'

my pit'll break ya faces like over biting while you chew peaches
cuz con/cize aint seen in text like pretyped 'president bush speeches',(concise...criti(cize))

edited to put in that explaination... plot seen the verses before i edited so he knows nothing was changed...so ask him...

[Think.]

i had a family emergency.
i did have the bars but wasnt on to PM them to Power.
Plot, who had my bars, PMd them to power to be dropped.

Sorry.

[Criticize]

here we go.
6 and 8 bars. hey.

Crit:
i wrote the lesson, thats to dope to question,
u no ul lose! so keep ya "high expectations" to a smoking session/
i hope your stressing; coz il question your writtens-outstandings no option,
il tie n gag power n let bath finish you like drowning while washing/
profoun no stopping; you bitches are nerving factions,
so il ensure your "coughing-fit"(coffin) like elergic reactions/
let me spell it out 4 u! K-0 when i rape you bitches,
i can overthrow you both without baseball pitches/4
u discraceful snitches r a waste of disses so speak brave,
coz il blantantly son-ray(sun) like a fucking heat wave/
powers weak as fuck here let me show dope,
that u 2 newbies will be over-awe'd like a row boat/ (oar)
got no hope, its no wonder your fighting,
forget making the 2nd round
only time we see power surge involves thunder n lighting/
speak of dickryders to soften the blow when im sketching your hurse,
coz i only need 1 bar to split this couple quicker than a messy divorce.

Con:
one's a 5 yr unknown, other's RF's most cheating, so heres ur provision
bein a hospital beds only time we see improvement on Ray's/raise Position

this even a contest? CC'll have children bathe in this gory fest
coz we'll leave Invoice's torn on a spike like junkyard offices

harvestin grown crops, yall shrimp work! n we doin some prawn chops
hell, even yall verses couldnt work-a-ppraise contracting in pawnshops

get sweatin from Vet drops, murda! leavin yall surgin wit hysteria
electric moguls yankin Power off da scene witout heavy flooded areas

setting threads..then this fool battles himself? what the fuck?
then Dope senselessly choose/chews on himself like pizza the hut(spaceballs)

so forget stadium fixins, this is wat u call real dome droppin
as we deprive this pear/pair off air like cancelld fruit home shoppin

dead bitches, if wacness were jems? these kids b made of red jewels
but ass woopin? CC have SubJekt's all over the wall like class schedules

[Plot]

Crit
i wrote the lesson, thats to dope to question,
u no ul lose! so keep ya "high expectations" to a smoking session/
~ok, played concept. well worded with the multie setup tho.
i hope your stressing; coz il question your writtens-outstandings no option,
il tie n gag power n let bath finish you like drowning while washing/
~lol
profoun no stopping; you bitches are nerving factions,
so il ensure your "coughing-fit"(coffin) like elergic reactions/
~liked the fit flip
let me spell it out 4 u! K-0 when i rape you bitches,
i can overthrow you both without baseball pitches/4
~ok
u discraceful snitches r a waste of disses so speak brave,
coz il blantantly son-ray(sun) like a fucking heat wave/
~ok, coulda been beter like. scorching sun ray or something
powers weak as fuck here let me show dope,
that u 2 newbies will be over-awe'd like a row boat/ (oar)
~good, could been better again, like 'a one armed man in a row boat'
got no hope, its no wonder your fighting,
forget making the 2nd round
only time we see power surge involves thunder n lighting/
~just ok
speak of dickryders to soften the blow when im sketching your hurse,
coz i only need 1 bar to split this couple quicker than a messy divorce.
~rhymes a bit off, ok

Con
one's a 5 yr unknown, other's RF's most cheating, so heres ur provision
bein a hospital beds only time we see improvement on Ray's/raise Position
~nice
this even a contest? CC'll have children bathe in this gory fest
coz we'll leave Invoice's torn on a spike like junkyard offices
~nice
harvestin grown crops, yall shrimp work! n we doin some prawn chops
hell, even yall verses couldnt work-a-ppraise contracting in pawnshops
~just ok
get sweatin from Vet drops, murda! leavin yall surgin wit hysteria
electric moguls yankin Power off da scene witout heavy flooded areas
~played concept but liked the wording
setting threads..then this fool battles himself? what the fuck?
then Dope senselessly choose/chews on himself like pizza the hut(spaceballs)
~ehh, bit of a nah there Con
so forget stadium fixins, this is wat u call real dome droppin
as we deprive this pear/pair off air like cancelld fruit home shoppin
~ok
dead bitches, if wacness were jems? these kids b made of red jewels
but ass woopin? CC have SubJekt's all over the wall like class schedules
~dope.

Think
I’ll roast you right. SP you low as shit, not even close to light.
My punches connect and drop crit to con like I fed his open mic
~ok, got the concept off my last battle with him
Con you talk a big game, but aint no body scared of ya bull
Crit the best? my lines stay infront of C like negative Variables(-C)
~pretty good.
You ready to explode? Well, my mac stops combustion
And it’ll also tear Street up worse then blacktop construction
~played concept. ok delivery
I own on all ya drops. lets get real, kids know Recitals hot
I'll put Chopper out of business without buying out a motor-cycle shop
~good wording on my concept again
sit down a peep your own shit Con, your wack herb.
think you got the win? N-O, C like reading ya name backwards
~Thats nice
Crit, stop goign on ya rants. where all sick of your bossy strides
have u obliterated, cause it's known Stinging Rays kills all you Ausie Guys
~wordings a little off, but dope concept.

Power
im writing a love story with unknown affairs the way i twist these characters
crits gay burial, theres been more men in chopper then 'u.s. army air carriers'
~played concept, the 'men in choppers an ok flip'
Pres said to me" Plots going down on Chopper like engine failure"
Stoic said to Con (tag team) "you aint up to the Chopper like amateur cadets" or something.
...So like I said I think Chopper/aircraft is kinda used
i'll put con in hideouts and leave this guy misplaced
crits got a fly life? ok i'll show the death it like butterfly displays(critters)
~wordings off but concept is nice
i increase mine, cons head is space like what you see between lines,
cons career mirrors a city for blind people the way you wont see 'street sign'(ed)
~dope
these kids must be strings ina battle beat cuz they come up thin in dissin
yall aint vets, i'll leave con pushin featherweight like 'woman gyms in prison'
~ehh
i'll buck his knowledge with straps like cons brain stripped
fuck con's lame scripts, he could get a girl pregnant and still not name-flip
~kinda forced, f l i p, f i l i p. nameflip was decent tho
im like blind and senseless grandmothers when i put slaps to cheeks
power'll put more stitches on this pair of genes then a levi's factory
~ok, bit weird with the 'genes'
slap these peeps solo, quick to snap theyre beams slo mo
power'll drop more bare heels on this couple then marriages in 'japanese dojo's'
~ok
my pit'll break ya faces like over biting while you chew peaches
cuz con/cize aint seen in text like pretyped 'president bush speeches',
~dope.

V-ConCrit, just a little fresher in my eyes

[Kill POWER]

respect for vote plotter... and it wasnt filip... its not like i took the "i" out and expected to pull of flip... flip is really a short term for filipino or whatever...... i guess i shoulda went deeper into explaination... lol... and it was supost to be the death of it... i cant edit it now though...

[Think.]

alrighty. glad u guys dropped. nice verses

uppin

[Fluent]

Dopeart

I’ll roast you right. SP you low as shit, not even close to light.
My punches connect and drop crit to con like I fed his open mic
Simple but decent
Con you talk a big game, but aint no body scared of ya bull
Crit the best? my lines stay infront of C like negative Variables(-C)
Weak nameplay
You ready to explode? Well, my mac stops combustion
And it’ll also tear Street up worse then blacktop construction
Simple
I own on all ya drops. lets get real, kids know Recitals hot
I'll put Chopper out of business without buying out a motor-cycle shop
Decent
sit down a peep your own shit Con, your wack herb.
think you got the win? N-O, C like reading ya name backwards
Referring to them as C is weak because no one does but I like the thought on reversing his name so this passes
Crit, stop goign on ya rants. where all sick of your bossy strides
have u obliterated, cause it's known Stinging Rays kills all you Ausie Guys
Bah, you had to flip this into an insult because this was self hype but I assumed you had to try something about Steve Irwin and something with Sting Ray or Stung Ray. The explanation wasn't needed also, people online don't live under a rock.

'POWER'

im writing a love story with unknown affairs the way i twist these characters
crits gay burial, theres been more men in chopper then 'u.s. army air carriers'
Decent
i'll put con in hideouts and leave this guy misplaced
crits got a fly life? ok i'll show the death it like butterfly displays(critters)
Weak
i increase mine, cons head is space like what you see between lines,
cons career mirrors a city for blind people the way you wont see 'street sign'(ed)
Good
these kids must be strings ina battle beat cuz they come up thin in dissin
yall aint vets, i'll leave con pushin featherweight like 'woman gyms in prison'
No
i'll buck his knowledge with straps like cons brain stripped
fuck con's lame scripts, he could get a girl pregnant and still not name-flip(con=filipino..flip=filipino)
Weak
im like blind and senseless grandmothers when i put slaps to cheeks
power'll put more stitches on this pair of genes then a levi's factory
Decent
slap these peeps solo, quick to snap theyre beams slo mo
power'll drop more bare heels on this couple then marriages in 'japanese dojo's'
Decent
my pit'll break ya faces like over biting while you chew peaches
cuz con/cize aint seen in text like pretyped 'president bush speeches',(concise...criti(cize))
Decent

Criticize

i wrote the lesson, thats to dope to question,
u no ul lose! so keep ya "high expectations" to a smoking session/
Good
i hope your stressing; coz il question your writtens-outstandings no option,
il tie n gag power n let bath finish you like drowning while washing/
Decent
profoun no stopping; you bitches are nerving factions,
so il ensure your "coughing-fit"(coffin) like elergic reactions/
Decent
let me spell it out 4 u! K-0 when i rape you bitches,
i can overthrow you both without baseball pitches/4
No
u discraceful snitches r a waste of disses so speak brave,
coz il blantantly son-ray(sun) like a fucking heat wave/
Needs better wording to work
powers weak as fuck here let me show dope,
that u 2 newbies will be over-awe'd like a row boat/ (oar)
No
got no hope, its no wonder your fighting,
forget making the 2nd round
only time we see power surge involves thunder n lighting/
Good
speak of dickryders to soften the blow when im sketching your hurse,
coz i only need 1 bar to split this couple quicker than a messy divorce.
Decent

Con

one's a 5 yr unknown, other's RF's most cheating, so heres ur provision
bein a hospital beds only time we see improvement on Ray's/raise Position
Good
this even a contest? CC'll have children bathe in this gory fest
coz we'll leave Invoice's torn on a spike like junkyard offices
Good
harvestin grown crops, yall shrimp work! n we doin some prawn chops
hell, even yall verses couldnt work-a-ppraise contracting in pawnshops
Weak
get sweatin from Vet drops, murda! leavin yall surgin wit hysteria
electric moguls yankin Power off da scene witout heavy flooded areas
Basic
setting threads..then this fool battles himself? what the fuck?
then Dope senselessly choose/chews on himself like pizza the hut(spaceballs)
Decent
so forget stadium fixins, this is wat u call real dome droppin
as we deprive this pear/pair off air like cancelld fruit home shoppin
Decent
dead bitches, if wacness were jems? these kids b made of red jewels
but ass woopin? CC have SubJekt's all over the wall like class schedules
Decent

Vote: Con & Criticize

[Phonix]

Critty:

i wrote the lesson, thats to dope to question,
u no ul lose! so keep ya "high expectations" to a smoking session/

Played

i hope your stressing; coz il question your writtens-outstandings no option,
il tie n gag power n let bath finish you like drowning while washing/

Ha, alright

profoun no stopping; you bitches are nerving factions,
so il ensure your "coughing-fit"(coffin) like elergic reactions/

Coffin = played to the max for me

let me spell it out 4 u! K-0 when i rape you bitches,
i can overthrow you both without baseball pitches/4

ehh.

u discraceful snitches r a waste of disses so speak brave,
coz il blantantly son-ray(sun) like a fucking heat wave/

played.

powers weak as fuck here let me show dope,
that u 2 newbies will be over-awe'd like a row boat/ (oar)

Dope

got no hope, its no wonder your fighting,
forget making the 2nd round
only time we see power surge involves thunder n lighting/

decent nameplay

speak of dickryders to soften the blow when im sketching your hurse,
coz i only need 1 bar to split this couple quicker than a messy divorce.

Ok


Condred:

one's a 5 yr unknown, other's RF's most cheating, so heres ur provision
bein a hospital beds only time we see improvement on Ray's/raise Position

Ha

this even a contest? CC'll have children bathe in this gory fest
coz we'll leave Invoice's torn on a spike like junkyard offices

Nice, hope this aint gonna be all nameplay though

harvestin grown crops, yall shrimp work! n we doin some prawn chops
hell, even yall verses couldnt work-a-ppraise contracting in pawnshops

ight.

get sweatin from Vet drops, murda! leavin yall surgin wit hysteria
electric moguls yankin Power off da scene witout heavy flooded areas

No.

setting threads..then this fool battles himself? what the fuck?
then Dope senselessly choose/chews on himself like pizza the hut(spaceballs)

better simile needed.

so forget stadium fixins, this is wat u call real dome droppin
as we deprive this pear/pair off air like cancelld fruit home shoppin

played

dead bitches, if wacness were jems? these kids b made of red jewels
but ass woopin? CC have SubJekt's all over the wall like class schedules

Sick

VS


Thinking:

I’ll roast you right. SP you low as shit, not even close to light.
My punches connect and drop crit to con like I fed his open mic

Played

Con you talk a big game, but aint no body scared of ya bull
Crit the best? my lines stay infront of C like negative Variables(-C)

Seen it

You ready to explode? Well, my mac stops combustion
And it’ll also tear Street up worse then blacktop construction

Played

I own on all ya drops. lets get real, kids know Recitals hot
I'll put Chopper out of business without buying out a motor-cycle shop

Played

sit down a peep your own shit Con, your wack herb.
think you got the win? N-O, C like reading ya name backwards

Dope

Crit, stop goign on ya rants. where all sick of your bossy strides
have u obliterated, cause it's known Stinging Rays kills all you Ausie Guys

ehh worst irwin flip i've seen yet


Power Flower:

im writing a love story with unknown affairs the way i twist these characters
crits gay burial, theres been more men in chopper then 'u.s. army air carriers'

Played

i'll put con in hideouts and leave this guy misplaced
crits got a fly life? ok i'll show the death it like butterfly displays(critters)

ight

i increase mine, cons head is space like what you see between lines,
cons career mirrors a city for blind people the way you wont see 'street sign'(ed)

Played

these kids must be strings ina battle beat cuz they come up thin in dissin
yall aint vets, i'll leave con pushin featherweight like 'woman gyms in prison'

Played concept behind it, actual twist was ehhh

i'll buck his knowledge with straps like cons brain stripped
fuck con's lame scripts, he could get a girl pregnant and still not name-flip

Forced if ur doing what i tink u are

im like blind and senseless grandmothers when i put slaps to cheeks
power'll put more stitches on this pair of genes then a levi's factory

played

slap these peeps solo, quick to snap theyre beams slo mo
power'll drop more bare heels on this couple then marriages in 'japanese dojo's'

cool

my pit'll break ya faces like over biting while you chew peaches
cuz con/cize aint seen in text like pretyped 'president bush speeches',

haha nice

Vote - SC

[Kill POWER]

3-0

i guess thats it

[Think.]

thanks for the respectable votes guys.

we woulda made it to atleats next round if we got sum1 else.
anywho, good shit Con/Criticize.

good luck next round

[Pembroke]

dopeart

I’ll roast you right. SP you low as shit, not even close to light.
My punches connect and drop crit to con like I fed his open mic

K

Con you talk a big game, but aint no body scared of ya bull
Crit the best? my lines stay infront of C like negative Variables(-C)

No

You ready to explode? Well, my mac stops combustion
And it’ll also tear Street up worse then blacktop construction

Basic nameplay.

I own on all ya drops. lets get real, kids know Recitals hot
I'll put Chopper out of business without buying out a motor-cycle shop

Bad wording

sit down a peep your own shit Con, your wack herb.
think you got the win? N-O, C like reading ya name backwards

Dumb

Crit, stop goign on ya rants. where all sick of your bossy strides
have u obliterated, cause it's known Stinging Rays kills all you Ausie Guys

It's alright.. Aussie* That'd be like me vs.ing you with a nameplay punch like Sting ray through the heart like the fall of Australian legends! Or something like that. I expected this concept a few days ago. Good effort

'POWER'

im writing a love story with unknown affairs the way i twist these characters
crits gay burial, theres been more men in chopper then 'u.s. army air carriers'

K

i'll put con in hideouts and leave this guy misplaced
crits got a fly life? ok i'll show the death it like butterfly displays(critters)

Don't like it

i increase mine, cons head is space like what you see between lines,
cons career mirrors a city for blind people the way you wont see 'street sign'(ed)

Nice one, but you said Con's name in both lines.

these kids must be strings ina battle beat cuz they come up thin in dissin
yall aint vets, i'll leave con pushin featherweight like 'woman gyms in prison'

Female gyms* Concept doesn't work. Maybe Stork training facilities hahah

i'll buck his knowledge with straps like cons brain stripped
fuck con's lame scripts, he could get a girl pregnant and still not name-flip
(con=filipino..flip=filipino)

Nah

im like blind and senseless grandmothers when i put slaps to cheeks
power'll put more stitches on this pair of genes then a levi's factory

Jeans/genes is played outtt.

slap these peeps solo, quick to snap theyre beams slo mo
power'll drop more bare heels on this couple then marriages in 'japanese dojo's'

Used something like this before. "Drop to your knees faster than Japanese dinners" I think it was. Clogged wording here

my pit'll break ya faces like over biting while you chew peaches
cuz con/cize aint seen in text like pretyped 'president bush speeches',(concise...criti(cize))

Eh

Crit:

i wrote the lesson, thats to dope to question,
u no ul lose! so keep ya "high expectations" to a smoking session/

Okay, setup is sloppy

i hope your stressing; coz il question your writtens-outstandings no option,
il tie n gag power n let bath finish you like drowning while washing/

Pretty bad.

profoun no stopping; you bitches are nerving factions,
so il ensure your "coughing-fit"(coffin) like elergic reactions/

Played, and it's Allergic*

let me spell it out 4 u! K-0 when i rape you bitches,
i can overthrow you both without baseball pitches/4

Kind of

u discraceful snitches r a waste of disses so speak brave,
coz il blantantly son-ray(sun) like a fucking heat wave/

Seen it before, decent

powers weak as fuck here let me show dope,
that u 2 newbies will be over-awe'd like a row boat/ (oar)

Used 'over' 2 bars ago.

got no hope, its no wonder your fighting,
forget making the 2nd round
only time we see power surge involves thunder n lighting/

Good nameplay.

speak of dickryders to soften the blow when im sketching your hurse,
coz i only need 1 bar to split this couple quicker than a messy divorce.

Could have been nice.

Con:

one's a 5 yr unknown, other's RF's most cheating, so heres ur provision
bein a hospital beds only time we see improvement on Ray's/raise Position

Okay

this even a contest? CC'll have children bathe in this gory fest
coz we'll leave Invoice's torn on a spike like junkyard offices

Rhyme just makes it. Decent concept

harvestin grown crops, yall shrimp work! n we doin some prawn chops
hell, even yall verses couldnt work-a-ppraise contracting in pawnshops

Eh, okay

get sweatin from Vet drops, murda! leavin yall surgin wit hysteria
electric moguls yankin Power off da scene witout heavy flooded areas

No, played nameplay anyway you relate it with floods/hurricanes

Setting threads..then this fool battles himself? what the fuck?
then Dope senselessly choose/chews on himself like pizza the hut(spaceballs)

Hahah, could have made a personal about him paying you 30 bucks to write a verse.

so forget stadium fixins, this is wat u call real dome droppin
as we deprive this pear/pair off air like cancelld fruit home shoppin

Dumb

dead bitches, if wacness were jems? these kids b made of red jewels
but ass woopin? CC have SubJekt's all over the wall like class schedules

It's acceptable

v/ StreetCrit

Power, I like your style, just have clearer and more impacting punchlines. Think, abandon the simple wordplays and aim higher. Crit, that was a below average verse from you.. lots of grammatical errors. Did you rush it? Con's was okay, I like the attempts at wordplay in every line. Scratched the surface but made a splash.. and you advance.

Read my short story in the short story section please!
"Peanut Butter and Jelly - The Recipe for Evil"

I got a new one comin' soon.. I'd appreciate it.

Stay up.