Spontanius Vs Fgt/10

[Criticize]

6-8 bars, norm rules vote on 3 battles or get docked, no show and get booted dont freepost take the bullshit to the bullshit thread.

[4got10]

Step down kid, like an infant crawlin outta high-chair....
I'd never let this clown win, Bozo 'Spon' - thinkin that i'd fight fair....
..
.
Ya grind bare -Klutch- is slippin Like kids watery games....
Spit sauder in sprays Liquid Hot Bars coats-All ya bones like otter remains....
Hotter than flames I'm puttin 'Spon' Back in his 'plains'....
Swingin graves Watch me 'Bat Shadow' Harder than Horny College dames....
Hold it Look at this click the section with our names....
Damn son I knew u acted girly but u proved it with 'Undisclosed' in frames....
Blast w/ more black powder than ground up tar in kegs....
Man if you lookin for wack, U'll find this Schizo Klutch lamer then FDR's legs....
My heavy bars r golden, what would u be holdin?....
Ur holdin a dead mans hand 'n ya doin dirty laundry lady cuz i'll leave u foldin....
Steams scoldin, Mindless i burnt this vegetable bad....
See kid im puttin more 'hook lines' in your gross taste like a detestable shad.... (fish)
Pushin weight on track Its nordic when my line flexes....
Put to shame its like a mischievious child gettin back in the end he 'Eggs -it"s....

[Mo LoCke]

..iight..
I gotta slight mean intent an might scheme
to make ‘Mario take a dirt Nap’, ur success is a ‘Pipe Dream’!!
u wanna fight me?! plz…I flow like a fresh spring
while u get ‘Beat to the Floor’ like a ‘Step Team’!!
I met my inner demon so I know wut scary seems
leave u laid out bleed’n with ‘More Shakes’ than fuck’n ‘Dairy Queen’!!
I light green up im dope, u get smoked with a look cus’
I took ur buzz, now imma ‘Hand u a L’ like I ‘Push Drugs’!!
proof that he took slugz, ull see crutches hes lean’n on
imma put this ‘Pussy on the Ground’ like a bitch ‘Getn her Eagle On’!!
see, be gone fag! I could beat u in less than talk
watch me ‘Walk All over ur Lines’ like a fuck’n ‘Pedestrian Cross’!!

[4got10]

fuckin a quit sleepin people

[Veracious]

Step down kid, like an infant crawlin outta high-chair....
I'd never let this clown win, Bozo 'Spon' - thinkin that i'd fight fair....
ok opener
Ya grind bare -Klutch- is slippin Like kids watery games....
Spit sauder in sprays Liquid Hot Bars coats-All ya bones like otter remains....
decent
Hotter than flames I'm puttin 'Spon' Back in his 'plains'....
Swingin graves Watch me 'Bat Shadow' Harder than Horny College dames....
lol nice
Hold it Look at this click the section with our names....
Damn son I knew u acted girly but u proved it with 'Undisclosed' in frames....
not feeling this
Blast w/ more black powder than ground up tar in kegs....
Man if you lookin for wack, U'll find this Schizo Klutch lamer then FDR's legs....
lol cool
My heavy bars r golden, what would u be holdin?....
Ur holdin a dead mans hand 'n ya doin dirty laundry lady cuz i'll leave u foldin....
cool
Steams scoldin, Mindless i burnt this vegetable bad....
See kid im puttin more 'hook lines' in your gross taste like a detestable shad.... (fish)
nice
Pushin weight on track Its nordic when my line flexes....
Put to shame its like a mischievious child gettin back in the end he 'Eggs -it"s....
cool closer

Vs

..iight..
I gotta slight mean intent an might scheme
to make ‘Mario take a dirt Nap’, ur success is a ‘Pipe Dream’!!
cool
u wanna fight me?! plz…I flow like a fresh spring
while u get ‘Beat to the Floor’ like a ‘Step Team’!!
ok..ive heard this concept
I met my inner demon so I know wut scary seems
leave u laid out bleed’n with ‘More Shakes’ than fuck’n ‘Dairy Queen’!!
good
I light green up im dope, u get smoked with a look cus’
I took ur buzz, now imma ‘Hand u a L’ like I ‘Push Drugs’!!
good
proof that he took slugz, ull see crutches hes lean’n on
imma put this ‘Pussy on the Ground’ like a bitch ‘Getn her Eagle On’!!
wasnt feelin it
see, be gone fag! I could beat u in less than talk
watch me ‘Walk All over ur Lines’ like a fuck’n ‘Pedestrian Cross’!!
played
both came mediocre..could have came harder
but fgt stayed more consistant...im just being honest

so vote - fgt

[Str!kNe!n]

^Damn bout time a vote rolls around lol.... Thnx Veracious....

1-0 ?

[Malone]

4got10:
Step down kid, like an infant crawlin outta high-chair....
I'd never let this clown win, Bozo 'Spon' - thinkin that i'd fight fair....
noooo
Ya grind bare -Klutch- is slippin Like kids watery games....
Spit sauder in sprays Liquid Hot Bars coats-All ya bones like otter remains....
nah
Hotter than flames I'm puttin 'Spon' Back in his 'plains'....
Swingin graves Watch me 'Bat Shadow' Harder than Horny College dames....
wtf?
Hold it Look at this click the section with our names....
Damn son I knew u acted girly but u proved it with 'Undisclosed' in frames....
nah
Blast w/ more black powder than ground up tar in kegs....
Man if you lookin for wack, U'll find this Schizo Klutch lamer then FDR's legs....
nah
My heavy bars r golden, what would u be holdin?....
Ur holdin a dead mans hand 'n ya doin dirty laundry lady cuz i'll leave u foldin....
terrible
Steams scoldin, Mindless i burnt this vegetable bad....
See kid im puttin more 'hook lines' in your gross taste like a detestable shad.... (fish)
no
Pushin weight on track Its nordic when my line flexes....
Put to shame its like a mischievious child gettin back in the end he 'Eggs -it"s....
wtf am i missing something?

Klutch:
..iight..
I gotta slight mean intent an might scheme
to make ‘Mario take a dirt Nap’, ur success is a ‘Pipe Dream’!!
wording terrible
u wanna fight me?! plz…I flow like a fresh spring
while u get ‘Beat to the Floor’ like a ‘Step Team’!!
Cool
I met my inner demon so I know wut scary seems
leave u laid out bleed’n with ‘More Shakes’ than fuck’n ‘Dairy Queen’!!
no
I light green up im dope, u get smoked with a look cus’
I took ur buzz, now imma ‘Hand u a L’ like I ‘Push Drugs’!!
no
proof that he took slugz, ull see crutches hes lean’n on
imma put this ‘Pussy on the Ground’ like a bitch ‘Getn her Eagle On’!!
wtf no
see, be gone fag! I could beat u in less than talk
watch me ‘Walk All over ur Lines’ like a fuck’n ‘Pedestrian Cross’!!
ok


v - SpoN, just better had the best punch in the battle with the step team bar. And was just more consistent.

[Str!kNe!n]

^OMG u call yourself a VETERAN and don't get "Batting Shadow harder than Horny college DAMES?!?!?" pshhh, whatever fuckin homo

1-1 < ONLY if u accept Veracious' vote

[Malone]

First off just cause you have problems with stock doesnt mean you have to come at me crooked. i got the bar, i didnt like it bottom line period. you dont like my vote dont accept it. but i know a good bars when i see them. i just wont vote in your battles anymore if you can accept the constructive criticism

[Str!kNe!n]

^Ur vote i don't care about, but i could NOT see how a vet didn't get it is all :) Stock, Fuck him he's a faggot homez. i don't care if the cunt thinks he's "king of punchlines" or not, he's still a wastoid with no life to me

[KlutCh.]

stop free postin...1-1 uppZ!

[Plot]

4
Step down kid, like an infant crawlin outta high-chair....
I'd never let this clown win, Bozo 'Spon' - thinkin that i'd fight fair....
~Ok, is that a play on 'fair/clown'
Ya grind bare -Klutch- is slippin Like kids watery games....
Spit sauder in sprays Liquid Hot Bars coats-All ya bones like otter remains....
~ehh, coat needed more, confusing
Hotter than flames I'm puttin 'Spon' Back in his 'plains'....
Swingin graves Watch me 'Bat Shadow' Harder than Horny College dames....
~? does this mean like, masturbating..
Hold it Look at this click the section with our names....
Damn son I knew u acted girly but u proved it with 'Undisclosed' in frames....
~ehhh
Blast w/ more black powder than ground up tar in kegs....
Man if you lookin for wack, U'll find this Schizo Klutch lamer then FDR's legs....
~cool.
My heavy bars r golden, what would u be holdin?....
Ur holdin a dead mans hand 'n ya doin dirty laundry lady cuz i'll leave u foldin....
~eh,ok.
Steams scoldin, Mindless i burnt this vegetable bad....
See kid im puttin more 'hook lines' in your gross taste like a detestable shad.... (fish)
~eh,ok.
Pushin weight on track Its nordic when my line flexes....
Put to shame its like a mischievious child gettin back in the end he 'Eggs -it"s....
~miscevious child/eggs, needs more 4.

K
I gotta slight mean intent an might scheme
to make ‘Mario take a dirt Nap’, ur success is a ‘Pipe Dream’!!
~eh, ok for the personal
u wanna fight me?! plz…I flow like a fresh spring
while u get ‘Beat to the Floor’ like a ‘Step Team’!!
~cool
I met my inner demon so I know wut scary seems
leave u laid out bleed’n with ‘More Shakes’ than fuck’n ‘Dairy Queen’!!
~played
I light green up im dope, u get smoked with a look cus’
I took ur buzz, now imma ‘Hand u a L’ like I ‘Push Drugs’!!
~played
proof that he took slugz, ull see crutches hes lean’n on
imma put this ‘Pussy on the Ground’ like a bitch ‘Getn her Eagle On’!!
~? thats wack
see, be gone fag! I could beat u in less than talk
watch me ‘Walk All over ur Lines’ like a fuck’n ‘Pedestrian Cross’!!
~played

Not the best read..
Im given it to 4 just coz he wasnt as played.

[4got10]

Lol i guess im confusing ur not the only one who said so....

Coats-all Coast-al bones - otter remains.
Bat shadow - Eye shadow, batting eyes....
Eggs-its - Exits also mischievious child eggs shit when he's pissed....

[Lyfe]

Step down kid, like an infant crawlin outta high-chair....
I'd never let this clown win, Bozo 'Spon' - thinkin that i'd fight fair....

nice start
..
.
Ya grind bare -Klutch- is slippin Like kids watery games....
Spit sauder in sprays Liquid Hot Bars coats-All ya bones like otter remains....

ok

Hotter than flames I'm puttin 'Spon' Back in his 'plains'....
Swingin graves Watch me 'Bat Shadow' Harder than Horny College dames....

nice

Hold it Look at this click the section with our names....
Damn son I knew u acted girly but u proved it with 'Undisclosed' in frames....

ok worded kinda wierd
Blast w/ more black powder than ground up tar in kegs....
Man if you lookin for wack, U'll find this Schizo Klutch lamer then FDR's legs....

ehh

My heavy bars r golden, what would u be holdin?....
Ur holdin a dead mans hand 'n ya doin dirty laundry lady cuz i'll leave u foldin....

ok

Steams scoldin, Mindless i burnt this vegetable bad....
See kid im puttin more 'hook lines' in your gross taste like a detestable shad.... (fish)

sic

Pushin weight on track Its nordic when my line flexes....
Put to shame its like a mischievious child gettin back in the end he 'Eggs -it"s....

ok first lines bragging


..iight..
I gotta slight mean intent an might scheme
to make ‘Mario take a dirt Nap’, ur success is a ‘Pipe Dream’!!

ehh
u wanna fight me?! plz…I flow like a fresh spring
while u get ‘Beat to the Floor’ like a ‘Step Team’!!

ok i heard this before but this was ok

I met my inner demon so I know wut scary seems
leave u laid out bleed’n with ‘More Shakes’ than fuck’n ‘Dairy Queen’!!

first lines wtf... seconds straight

I light green up im dope, u get smoked with a look cus’
I took ur buzz, now imma ‘Hand u a L’ like I ‘Push Drugs’!!

the whole -L- -drug- concept is played

proof that he took slugz, ull see crutches hes lean’n on
imma put this ‘Pussy on the Ground’ like a bitch ‘Getn her Eagle On’!!

ehh kinda played

see, be gone fag! I could beat u in less than talk
watch me ‘Walk All over ur Lines’ like a fuck’n ‘Pedestrian Cross’!!

played



overall vote - fgt

for creative punches, klutch i seen you drop harder then this fam ya verse seemed rushed

good battle yall

[Malone]

i prove my point.. no hate 4?