<<Sin'on'em>> vs Questions

[Con]

5-8 bars
both sign in and due Monday the 26th..
g luck

[Questionz?]

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[Sin.On'em]

check check

[Sin.On'em]

Rusty So Spare Me..This is my Comeback..back from retirment
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You Couldn't See Me, even if you had a 'Magnify-Glass'
Rip Up 'Questions' like 'Newspaper-Ads'
Take out the 'Mag', Cuz My Trigger Finger stays Itchy, Like It's Got 'Crabs'

Due You Really Think You Can Beat Me? RV, You 'Pus-cee'Answer' Me'
Or You'll Have Yourself Hooked Up To An I.V., Come On And Try Me

Slowly Cutting You Up, Till Theres No More' Left'
Take Out Your 'Lungs', Throw Them Back At You So You Can Catch Your 'Breath'

Soon ill Be Taking Out Your 'Spine', So Yeah You Can Say "I Got You Back 2"
You Gangsta? Cuz I Seen Retarted Kids Stay Wit More 'Straps The You'!!

So My First 'Decision' Is To 'Cut You Off' Like a' Circumcision'
You Must B e A 'Muslim' By The Way Your 'On Your Knees' Like its your 'Religon'

As The Cops Pick Me Up, To Send Me 'To Prision'
So Now I Can Plead The 5th, Cuz there Is No More 'Questions'

[Questionz?]

... dog I Hope ya Flow Perish... RapFlava? this Hoe-Cherish
But the Sites Thinking (Fuck SiN) like Fornication Befo Marriage...
... leave (em) with a Black eye bitchin, this rap guys Listenin
But why battle?...When Sins is (Washed up) like Baptise Christian...
...But Ill Pop-out-Things...Thatll Make Sins Hop Out Rings
it aint a Game so u can (Count) [The Best Out] Like Knockout-Kings...*
,,,(T)he (F)uck was you thinking, Cuz You aint potent Dike
(Real Talk]) just battlin you, we'll get less replys then ya (Open Mic)..**
...So Back Up Before... You Battle u gotta Get ya Raps Up
Cuz when i (Light) u Up Sins they gone say its a Unfair (Match-Up)...
...and you Crap But...I can See why you feeling gassed Up
But Watch Questions leave Sins Shit-Scarred like he got his Ass-Cut...

[Questionz?]

Take Out Your 'Lungs', Throw Them Back At You So You Can Catch Your 'Breath'
^^^

wow

[Plot]

Q
... dog I Hope ya Flow Perish... RapFlava? this Hoe-Cherish
But the Sites Thinking (Fuck SiN) like Fornication Befo Marriage...
~np. bit bland
... leave (em) with a Black eye bitchin, this rap guys Listenin
But why battle?...When Sins is (Washed up) like Baptise Christian...
~np. same as above
...But Ill Pop-out-Things...Thatll Make Sins Hop Out Rings
it aint a Game so u can (Count) [The Best Out] Like Knockout-Kings...*
~ok, bit unfocussed
,,,(T)he (F)uck was you thinking, Cuz You aint potent Dike
(Real Talk]) just battlin you, we'll get less replys then ya (Open Mic)..**
~good personal
...So Back Up Before... You Battle u gotta Get ya Raps Up
Cuz when i (Light) u Up Sins they gone say its a Unfair (Match-Up)...
~nah
...and you Crap But...I can See why you feeling gassed Up
But Watch Questions leave Sins Shit-Scarred like he got his Ass-Cut...
~ehh.
~all the ().. make it harder to read. some ok punches. nothing stood out.
dropped off a little to the end, I woulda placed one of the nps at the end.

BJ
You Couldn't See Me, even if you had a 'Magnify-Glass'
Rip Up 'Questions' like 'Newspaper-Ads'
Take out the 'Mag', Cuz My Trigger Finger stays Itchy, Like It's Got 'Crabs'
~ehh, braggin on the punch isnt good, magnfiying glass?
Due You Really Think You Can Beat Me? RV, You 'Pus-cee'Answer' Me'
Or You'll Have Yourself Hooked Up To An I.V., Come On And Try Me
~ehh, this was jus tough talk
Slowly Cutting You Up, Till Theres No More' Left'
Take Out Your 'Lungs', Throw Them Back At You So You Can Catch Your 'Breath'
~thats ill.
Soon ill Be Taking Out Your 'Spine', So Yeah You Can Say "I Got You Back 2"
You Gangsta? Cuz I Seen Retarted Kids Stay Wit More 'Straps The You'!!
~heh, nice
So My First 'Decision' Is To 'Cut You Off' Like a' Circumcision'
You Must B e A 'Muslim' By The Way Your 'On Your Knees' Like its your 'Religon'
~good
As The Cops Pick Me Up, To Send Me 'To Prision'
So Now I Can Plead The 5th, Cuz there Is No More 'Questions'
~ok np
~started out slow, picked it up by the end.

V-Sin.

[Questionz?]

Im not the type to complain about votes
but wow yall do crew votes and Ill find the link to that line

[Malone]

???
... dog I Hope ya Flow Perish... RapFlava? this Hoe-Cherish
But the Sites Thinking (Fuck SiN) like Fornication Befo Marriage...
PLAYED
... leave (em) with a Black eye bitchin, this rap guys Listenin
But why battle?...When Sins is (Washed up) like Baptise Christian...
PLAYED
...But Ill Pop-out-Things...Thatll Make Sins Hop Out Rings
it aint a Game so u can (Count) [The Best Out] Like Knockout-Kings...*
TERRIBLE
,,,(T)he (F)uck was you thinking, Cuz You aint potent Dike
(Real Talk]) just battlin you, we'll get less replys then ya (Open Mic)..**
Ok
...So Back Up Before... You Battle u gotta Get ya Raps Up
Cuz when i (Light) u Up Sins they gone say its a Unfair (Match-Up)...
BAD
...and you Crap But...I can See why you feeling gassed Up
But Watch Questions leave Sins Shit-Scarred like he got his Ass-Cut...
SHIT SCARRED? LOL NO!

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BLACK JACK
You Couldn't See Me, even if you had a 'Magnify-Glass'
Rip Up 'Questions' like 'Newspaper-Ads'
Take out the 'Mag', Cuz My Trigger Finger stays Itchy, Like It's Got 'Crabs'
TERRIBLE
Due You Really Think You Can Beat Me? RV, You 'Pus-cee'Answer' Me'
Or You'll Have Yourself Hooked Up To An I.V., Come On And Try Me
NO PUNCH
Slowly Cutting You Up, Till Theres No More' Left'
Take Out Your 'Lungs', Throw Them Back At You So You Can Catch Your 'Breath'
HEARD IT BEFORE
Soon ill Be Taking Out Your 'Spine', So Yeah You Can Say "I Got You Back 2"
You Gangsta? Cuz I Seen Retarted Kids Stay Wit More 'Straps The You'!!
NO
So My First 'Decision' Is To 'Cut You Off' Like a' Circumcision'
You Must B e A 'Muslim' By The Way Your 'On Your Knees' Like its your 'Religon'
HEARD THIS
As The Cops Pick Me Up, To Send Me 'To Prision'
So Now I Can Plead The 5th, Cuz there Is No More 'Questions'
I SAID SOMETHING LIKE THIS, ABOUT TWO DAYS AGO


V - Questionz?, Had The One Bar I Liked..

[*Noiz!]

Ive Seen That Exact Line Also

[Phonix]

JackBlack:


You Couldn't See Me, even if you had a 'Magnify-Glass'
Rip Up 'Questions' like 'Newspaper-Ads'
Take out the 'Mag', Cuz My Trigger Finger stays Itchy, Like It's Got 'Crabs'

Blah

Due You Really Think You Can Beat Me? RV, You 'Pus-cee'Answer' Me'
Or You'll Have Yourself Hooked Up To An I.V., Come On And Try Me

Weak

Slowly Cutting You Up, Till Theres No More' Left'
Take Out Your 'Lungs', Throw Them Back At You So You Can Catch Your 'Breath'

Played the fuck out

Soon ill Be Taking Out Your 'Spine', So Yeah You Can Say "I Got You Back 2"
You Gangsta? Cuz I Seen Retarted Kids Stay Wit More 'Straps The You'!!

Ok

So My First 'Decision' Is To 'Cut You Off' Like a' Circumcision'
You Must B e A 'Muslim' By The Way Your 'On Your Knees' Like its your 'Religon'

LOL

As The Cops Pick Me Up, To Send Me 'To Prision'
So Now I Can Plead The 5th, Cuz there Is No More 'Questions'

Cool


VS

Rhetorical:

dog I Hope ya Flow Perish... RapFlava? this Hoe-Cherish
But the Sites Thinking (Fuck SiN) like Fornication Befo Marriage...

My boi called kardinal sin so yeah herd this lol

... leave (em) with a Black eye bitchin, this rap guys Listenin
But why battle?...When Sins is (Washed up) like Baptise Christian...

Played

...But Ill Pop-out-Things...Thatll Make Sins Hop Out Rings
it aint a Game so u can (Count) [The Best Out] Like Knockout-Kings...*

Ok

,,,(T)he (F)uck was you thinking, Cuz You aint potent Dike
(Real Talk]) just battlin you, we'll get less replys then ya (Open Mic)..**

WOW SOOOOOOOOO PLAYED

...So Back Up Before... You Battle u gotta Get ya Raps Up
Cuz when i (Light) u Up Sins they gone say its a Unfair (Match-Up)...

Weak Wording _ played

...and you Crap But...I can See why you feeling gassed Up
But Watch Questions leave Sins Shit-Scarred like he got his Ass-Cut...

Ehhhhhhh


vote = BJ

[Con]

uppin

[Kaeo.Seru]

V-questionz

reason: his verse was just better although it was a weak battle Q had the stronger verse. BlackJack came with WAY too many played concepts. WAY TOO MANy. Q had sum played lines as well but overall his verse was better. period

[Mister Official]

Sin..


You Couldn't See Me, even if you had a 'Magnify-Glass'
Rip Up 'Questions' like 'Newspaper-Ads'
Take out the 'Mag', Cuz My Trigger Finger stays Itchy, Like It's Got 'Crabs'

No..

Due You Really Think You Can Beat Me? RV, You 'Pus-cee'Answer' Me'
Or You'll Have Yourself Hooked Up To An I.V., Come On And Try Me

Nothin much here..

Slowly Cutting You Up, Till Theres No More' Left'
Take Out Your 'Lungs', Throw Them Back At You So You Can Catch Your 'Breath'

Lol.. nice..

Soon ill Be Taking Out Your 'Spine', So Yeah You Can Say "I Got You Back 2"
You Gangsta? Cuz I Seen Retarted Kids Stay Wit More 'Straps The You'!!

ok..

So My First 'Decision' Is To 'Cut You Off' Like a' Circumcision'
You Must B e A 'Muslim' By The Way Your 'On Your Knees' Like its your 'Religon'

ewww no.

As The Cops Pick Me Up, To Send Me 'To Prision'
So Now I Can Plead The 5th, Cuz there Is No More 'Questions'

aight name play.



Q...

... dog I Hope ya Flow Perish... RapFlava? this Hoe-Cherish
But the Sites Thinking (Fuck SiN) like Fornication Befo Marriage...

coulda been doper.. ok

... leave (em) with a Black eye bitchin, this rap guys Listenin
But why battle?...When Sins is (Washed up) like Baptise Christian...

ehhh..

...But Ill Pop-out-Things...Thatll Make Sins Hop Out Rings
it aint a Game so u can (Count) [The Best Out] Like Knockout-Kings...*

no.

,,(T)he (F)uck was you thinking, Cuz You aint potent Dike
(Real Talk]) just battlin you, we'll get less replys then ya (Open Mic)..**

ok.. ok..

...So Back Up Before... You Battle u gotta Get ya Raps Up
Cuz when i (Light) u Up Sins they gone say its a Unfair (Match-Up)...

played.. played.. played..

...and you Crap But...I can See why you feeling gassed Up
But Watch Questions leave Sins Shit-Scarred like he got his Ass-Cut...

bad closer..


OVERALL: Both had some played and some horrible concepts.. but to me Sin has a smoother harder hitting verse.. the throw lungs/catch your breathe line did it.. hopefully it wasnt bitten.. did seem outta place.. but until proven i guess..

VOTE: SIN

[Con]

3-2 sin..uppin!