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05-28-2008, 01:40 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2006
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Rep Power: 3  | Re: "Satan's Love" Sin O solo track, peep and drop links! i checked a few of ur songs after u fed my page. generally like ur style, some good tracks, always a pretty good beat choice. lyrics are pretty good too. mixing between vocals and beat could be a bit better. sometimes ur voice seems to overshadow the beat a bit which makes ur flow seem dodgy altho it really isn't. (quality is better in "not that fair".
the Satan's Love song is cool. like the lyrics a lot. beat is pretty good. flow/delivery could have switched up a bit. maybe try sounding more melancholic for these kind of chilled tracks.
overall good shit tho bro.
would appreciate u feeding another tune on my myspace.
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06-01-2008, 04:54 PM
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| | Verbal Abuse
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Perris, CA
Posts: 53
Rep Power: 1  | Re: "Satan's Love" Sin O solo track, peep and drop links! thanks brah, ill check'em out again |
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06-01-2008, 05:47 PM
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| | My Endorsement
Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 711
Rep Power: 3  | Re: "Satan's Love" Sin O solo track, peep and drop links! I like the lyrical ability you show. Outside the box thinking, is what its all about.
You don't sound like a Cali dude, so Im guessing you not from there, which means nothing, I just noticed on your page it says your there.
Keep it up, big fella.
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06-01-2008, 09:44 PM
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| | Registered User
Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 22
Rep Power: 0  | Re: "Satan's Love" Sin O solo track, peep and drop links! When i heard you, kinda different flow... wah part of cali u from..??
da beat was perfect with the lyrics... and looks like u put time and effort into your writing... your flow and emotion was proper... production cud get better but its sickk still....keeep floowing |
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06-01-2008, 11:57 PM
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| | Verbal Abuse
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Perris, CA
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Rep Power: 1  | Re: "Satan's Love" Sin O solo track, peep and drop links! thanks yah, I was born and raised in california, Im from alotta places but I rep Perris CA where Ive lived for about 12 years straight
its in tha Inland Empire, Riverside County |
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06-09-2008, 09:35 PM
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| | Hear the Tricks..
Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: RGV
Posts: 4,467
Rep Power: 12   | Re: "Satan's Love" Sin O solo track, peep and drop links! i like it.. that first song on ya myspace was kill
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06-10-2008, 02:12 AM
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Join Date: May 2008 Location: Perris, CA
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Rep Power: 1  | Re: "Satan's Love" Sin O solo track, peep and drop links! ^thanks brah, appriciate it! |
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06-16-2008, 12:14 AM
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| | H.eavily I.ll V.eteranZ
Join Date: Feb 2005
Posts: 89
Rep Power: 4  | Re: "Satan's Love" Sin O solo track, peep and drop links! iight lets get it
beat: decent
flow: nice
lyrics: hot
mic p: voice is deep, but smooth
overall: 4.5/5 micz
keep'em comin ~flamez~ |
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06-16-2008, 02:25 AM
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| | Brown Paper Bag!!
Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: SoCal
Posts: 485
Rep Power: 6  | Re: "Satan's Love" Sin O solo track, peep and drop links! Alright.. **Replying While Listening**
The Beat Comes In Nicely...I'm Feeling The Intro.
The First Verse Is Heat..I'm Really Feelin' It.
The Hook Is Hot Too..
Your Pressence Slipped In The Second Verse..
You Sound Distant From The Mic..Like You're Catching Ya Breath Or Something.
I'm Feelin' The Concept Of This Track, It's Something Fresh..
Stay Up..
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06-17-2008, 02:26 AM
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| | Verbal Abuse
Join Date: May 2008 Location: Perris, CA
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Rep Power: 1  | Re: "Satan's Love" Sin O solo track, peep and drop links! fasho homie, my quality sucks so when I get to loud tha mic fuckin dies and I sound like Im far away lol |
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06-17-2008, 01:01 PM
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| | Slaughter Game
Join Date: May 2002 Location: The Hip-Hop Community
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Rep Power: 11   | Re: "Satan's Love" Sin O solo track, peep and drop links! listenin.. beat is aiiiiiight but not illy.. delivery and emotion are were they should be.. jesus its nice to hear someone feelin their shit.. lyrics are ok.. hook was not at all good for me.. i thought it actually made the song worse.. second verse ok but i already miss the first guy lol.. lyrics were alright flow was a bit force but still he managed to manage lmao if that makes sense.. quality is low but whatever.. back to the hook i really feel ok... wow i was feedin miles are marked m bad
satans love.. nice beat but yo sound too hype for this.. still the flow was dead on for the most part some points it wasnt great.. lyrics were enjoyable hook sounds like its messed up with the snare.. next verse picks up where the first left off im still feelin this though even though i think you should mellow just a little on this beat ..
good shit my dude
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06-18-2008, 01:01 AM
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| | Another link in the meme
Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: The Synaptic Combine
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Rep Power: 3   | Re: "Satan's Love" Sin O solo track, peep and drop links! Quote:
Originally Posted by Con i like it.. that first song on ya myspace was kill | Co-sign. If "Miles Are Marked" is what Con meant. That track is fire.
As for "Satan's Love", didn't feel it.
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06-18-2008, 10:23 PM
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Join Date: May 2008 Location: Perris, CA
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Rep Power: 1  | Re: "Satan's Love" Sin O solo track, peep and drop links! good looks yah
Satan's Love is one of those weird tracks, either you love it or hate it, haha |
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06-19-2008, 02:24 PM
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| | Banned
Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: over your head
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| Re: "Satan's Love" Sin O solo track, peep and drop links! I'm liking this.. the beat on the chorus is off though and the chipmunk shit rappers like to use in between the track isn't really working here. The delivery and lyrics are def on point.. mic presence is nice. It ends too abruptly, doesn't feel complete to me.. there's room for a collab partner on this, 7th Crescent'd be a DOPE addition. Ya'll should converse on this.. welcome to RF.
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