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Old 05-27-2008, 07:43 PM   #1 (permalink)
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this is a metaphorical track

The Devil/Satan= a women in this track just so noones confused...

heres who I replied too

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Old 05-28-2008, 01:40 PM   #2 (permalink)
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i checked a few of ur songs after u fed my page. generally like ur style, some good tracks, always a pretty good beat choice. lyrics are pretty good too. mixing between vocals and beat could be a bit better. sometimes ur voice seems to overshadow the beat a bit which makes ur flow seem dodgy altho it really isn't. (quality is better in "not that fair".
the Satan's Love song is cool. like the lyrics a lot. beat is pretty good. flow/delivery could have switched up a bit. maybe try sounding more melancholic for these kind of chilled tracks.
overall good shit tho bro.
would appreciate u feeding another tune on my myspace.
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Old 06-01-2008, 04:54 PM   #3 (permalink)
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thanks brah, ill check'em out again
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Old 06-01-2008, 05:47 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I like the lyrical ability you show. Outside the box thinking, is what its all about.

You don't sound like a Cali dude, so Im guessing you not from there, which means nothing, I just noticed on your page it says your there.

Keep it up, big fella.

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Old 06-01-2008, 09:44 PM   #5 (permalink)
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When i heard you, kinda different flow... wah part of cali u from..??
da beat was perfect with the lyrics... and looks like u put time and effort into your writing... your flow and emotion was proper... production cud get better but its sickk still....keeep floowing
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Old 06-01-2008, 11:57 PM   #6 (permalink)
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thanks yah, I was born and raised in california, Im from alotta places but I rep Perris CA where Ive lived for about 12 years straight

its in tha Inland Empire, Riverside County
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Old 06-09-2008, 09:35 PM   #7 (permalink)
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i like it.. that first song on ya myspace was kill
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^thanks brah, appriciate it!
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Old 06-16-2008, 12:14 AM   #9 (permalink)
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iight lets get it

beat: decent
flow: nice
lyrics: hot
mic p: voice is deep, but smooth
overall: 4.5/5 micz

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Old 06-16-2008, 02:25 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Alright.. **Replying While Listening**
The Beat Comes In Nicely...I'm Feeling The Intro.
The First Verse Is Heat..I'm Really Feelin' It.
The Hook Is Hot Too..
Your Pressence Slipped In The Second Verse..
You Sound Distant From The Mic..Like You're Catching Ya Breath Or Something.
I'm Feelin' The Concept Of This Track, It's Something Fresh..
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fasho homie, my quality sucks so when I get to loud tha mic fuckin dies and I sound like Im far away lol
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Old 06-17-2008, 01:01 PM   #12 (permalink)
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listenin.. beat is aiiiiiight but not illy.. delivery and emotion are were they should be.. jesus its nice to hear someone feelin their shit.. lyrics are ok.. hook was not at all good for me.. i thought it actually made the song worse.. second verse ok but i already miss the first guy lol.. lyrics were alright flow was a bit force but still he managed to manage lmao if that makes sense.. quality is low but whatever.. back to the hook i really feel ok... wow i was feedin miles are marked m bad


satans love.. nice beat but yo sound too hype for this.. still the flow was dead on for the most part some points it wasnt great.. lyrics were enjoyable hook sounds like its messed up with the snare.. next verse picks up where the first left off im still feelin this though even though i think you should mellow just a little on this beat ..

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i like it.. that first song on ya myspace was kill
Co-sign. If "Miles Are Marked" is what Con meant. That track is fire.

As for "Satan's Love", didn't feel it.
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good looks yah

Satan's Love is one of those weird tracks, either you love it or hate it, haha
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I'm liking this.. the beat on the chorus is off though and the chipmunk shit rappers like to use in between the track isn't really working here. The delivery and lyrics are def on point.. mic presence is nice. It ends too abruptly, doesn't feel complete to me.. there's room for a collab partner on this, 7th Crescent'd be a DOPE addition. Ya'll should converse on this.. welcome to RF.

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