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06-30-2004, 11:45 PM
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| | fishing for compliments.
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/kazemusic.htm
its a little down the page. from the gansta-astronauts [KaZe and fresh G] archive, comes richard of fed-ex. another improv story contrived from intoxication, and deep emotional trauma.
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06-30-2004, 11:51 PM
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| | Plantation Master Phil
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-dies- genuis,
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07-02-2004, 05:04 AM
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| | Cock Diesel
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hahahahahahahahah it kills me how serious you are. god damn hahhahahahaha. i gotta burn some g.astronaut shit on a cd for real.
she ran away with richard's heart and his...pocketbook.
i damn near lost it with that brazilian soccer team ish...
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07-02-2004, 05:11 AM
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i love ur spoken words | |
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07-02-2004, 08:32 AM
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i peeped this earlier.. genius.. easy.. its humurous yet you keep your composure and keep it so serious.. lol.. id bust out trying to say some of that shit.. just how you go about it.. it sounds so dope.. the story is actually captivating.. i was rootin for richard the whole time.. very good imagery.. some of it simple but u still get a picture of it.. i could sit back close my eyes and be in a theatre or sumthing watching a movie of this.. the background music is onpoint.. brings much life to the whole thing.. addlibs are dope.. even just the little "yes's" after things are funny.. its genius.. classic.. i love it..
"scavange what you can of dead white ppl.." lolol *dies* just how its said sounds so dope.. u can almost tell u stopped to think of something out of left field to say.. but it was still so natural liek thats exactly wut would have been done in that situation..
classic.. all the way thru.. addlibs is what got me.. "grrr" "cucaw" lmao!
too much to quote.. start to finish.. solid.. this should go on the mixtape.. lol..
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07-02-2004, 12:57 PM
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| | Rapflava's First Lady
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this was..you are..i dont even know,it was ammusing but some parts i was like "aww poor richard"
your spoken words are one of a kind,never know wat to expect from them.
i loved the addlibs too,they were the best.
story was great..could see richard's journey the whole way through and i got a mix of movie scenes in my head..i donno why but i saw muppets treasure island at one point and then it was straight to tom hanks&his volleyball in castaway..he was a fed-ex man you know..hmm.
anyhow,i loved it.
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07-04-2004, 08:12 PM
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| | Boon-docks.
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god damn i fucking love you, kaze.
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07-08-2004, 03:22 PM
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| | viva usted
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this background music does a lot for this piece
good ending
things almost became too random at times in my opinion but kept the comedy alive
your delivery is awesome
very enjoyable listen
and entertaining storyline
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07-09-2004, 11:52 PM
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| | Illy-Lama
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haha wild man.. the voice in this.. and just some of the shit you say had me dying.. the beat too.. illegal immigrants smh.. ireland dance wtf. potato haha spur lol.. this is killing me. earmuffs jg;kl.. number 1 cool guy number 1 lol good shit
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07-29-2004, 10:21 AM
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| | louderART
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damn meng..you killed this...never woulda thought of sommin like this topically.. words are complex as hell..metaphors, personafication, similes, jus mad good use of literature.. lmao@ some of it tho.. you had me rollin in some spots..n' then really gettin into it in others.. never done a spoken words before in my life.. but this ill... really inspired me ya know.. raw shi meng..
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08-08-2004, 05:36 AM
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| | Damn Good Milshake
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God, u are hilarious man
genius
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08-13-2004, 03:40 PM
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| | p.y.t
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raw as fuck.
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08-14-2004, 03:11 PM
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lmao !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dope is all i can say
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08-17-2004, 02:52 PM
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| | Banned
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Fighter Pilot for Fedex. Hahah.
Dolphins in Time is still my favorite, but this is hilarious.
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08-17-2004, 11:21 PM
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| | you know we trap all day
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i dont get this. the music is ill but the story is aesop rock. i've never understood spoken word. | |
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