Prime Time w/ Drastic

[Ruck]

Me - 1st
Drastic - 2nd

Prime Time Bitch, We so sick
and like Farve, we throw Bricks

Click that nigga, always reloaded like the matrix movie
Rushed with guns, but im always one to lay bricks smoothly
....Natural Talent, like i aint been discovered yet
breathe then step,Remain to be found, ima undercover vet
this pro's insane, i hold the flame, you ho's is lame
now go to shame, guns and click, yeh they go the same
we always top-a the news, always cockin the two's
we questionable, like always droppin wit clues!
so now we on top, like fullstops, always poppin in spots!
all hot, so when we rock its like we been down on lock
point blank in ur eyes, we something you despise
first prize, on top, aint no further to rise.
..bend rules, take beef serious, we melt fools
..gotta pass it to my duke and step through..

Get EM Nikka...

my super nova slang's known to burn a nigga like a solar flame
tighter than boas, the flow'll fold ya frame and close ya veins
heads already know the name, Drastic, prone to reign
lampin in my throne, gettin dome from dimes,... probin brains
moldin dames, stretchin minds and bodies like its yoga game
unholy gays novacainin anuses for colon pain
i go insane and roast you lames, faggots should be so ashamed
ghostin wack rappers since the days a nigga rode the train
now a nigga's older, less sober with that "over-hang"
my heart is gittin colder, like the winters in the polar plains
rum and cola, numbs this soldier, when i feel my soul is drained
till i muster nuff to wet ya and ya Hail me like some Frozen Rain
Lion-Hearted Leo, since i've grown i've never combed my mane
wild artist hero, slayin foes across the whole terrain
broke the chains while the slow remain becuz they mostly tame
easy to control and hold cuz lost they "thorns" when they "Rose" to fame....

Prime Time Bitch, We so sick
and like Farve, we throw Bricks

http://www.rapflava.com/forums/showthread.php?t=99190 (Keystyle.....)
http://www.rapflava.com/forums/showthread.php?t=98928 (Tha League For Tha Champions)

[Drastic_]

Hehe Now touch me Ya'll...Im bringing my heat now!!!!!!!

[_TeaR_]

damn nice liked it felt it... it was good... keep i up

[FranchisE]

aight this shit was decent
and pretty solid overall..
simple...but i like that bwetter then people
who sit there and force multis...
both verses had flow
both didnt go on and on about nonsense...
and it didnt come out half bad..heres what i was
feeling..

we always top-a the news, always cockin the two's
we questionable, like always droppin wit clues!
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....Natural Talent, like i aint been discovered yet
breathe then step,Remain to be found, ima undercover vet

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nuthin amazing but i was feeling the shit...broke the ice here
for this collab...

drastic came with the flow that reeeally got poppin mid verse...
shit got raw....definetly wrapped his up nice..
heres what i was feeling..

heads already know the name, Drastic, prone to reign
lampin in my throne, gettin dome from dimes,... probin brains
moldin dames, stretchin minds and bodies like its yoga game
unholy gays novacainin anuses for colon pain
i go insane and roast you lames, faggots should be so ashamed
ghostin wack rappers since the days a nigga rode the train
now a nigga's older, less sober with that "over-hang"


that exchange right there is whats really good..
period...nice flow...syllables was right..shit was justtight
i like the project as a whole...id say
7/10

[Ruck]

thanks for the feed.

[Drastic_]

Word thankz yall!!!

[Ruck]

up..

[Fluent]

Not bad, had a couple of decent bars on both sides. Drastic had the better verse I thought, better flow and ideas.

Click

....Natural Talent, like i aint been discovered yet
breathe then step,Remain to be found, ima undercover vet

point blank in ur eyes, we something you despise
first prize, on top, aint no further to rise.

Drastic

moldin dames, stretchin minds and bodies like its yoga game
unholy gays novacainin anuses for colon pain

my heart is gittin colder, like the winters in the polar plains
rum and cola, numbs this soldier, when i feel my soul is drained

Best 2 bars from each.

[SaiparchA]

Alright as the above user showed, those were the best parts of the piece. I really liked them. Drastic's one is better. Overall, botha good tho. I'm not feeling the click's one really because it doesn't really make sense when u go like that... rhymes could've been betta' and if only if you made it a bit more clear, i would've liked it. great work overall. decent shit here. 8/10

[Nitrogen]

Best Bars from each:

CLICK
....Natural Talent, like i aint been discovered yet
breathe then step,Remain to be found, ima undercover vet
we always top-a the news, always cockin the two's
we questionable, like always droppin wit clues!
point blank in ur eyes, we something you despise
first prize, on top, aint no further to rise.

DRASTIC
moldin dames, stretchin minds and bodies like its yoga game
unholy gays novacainin anuses for colon pain
my heart is gittin colder, like the winters in the polar plains
rum and cola, numbs this soldier, when i feel my soul is drained


Good collab fellas, it flowed real smooth and it was an enjoyable read.. keep it up and repay the favor in my piece: Meet My Otherside..

[Drastic_]

Thankz...Upping