Oh No Freestyle

[Dirty D]

http://www.rapflava.com/forums/im-ba...it-118895.html (I'm Back (On My Ignorant Shit))
http://www.rapflava.com/forums/huh-118718.html (Huh?)

(oh no no-, oh no no-, oh no noooo)

ok, time to get my shit together
cuz nare one of us gone live forever, naw
so tha birds fly, forget tha weather
check tha benz intestines, come sit in leather, ma
im gettin tha cheddar it aint lookin for me
baretta, potted meat ya chest, come cook wit tha beef
if ya lookin for D, just look in in tha streets
cuz basically im in like hooks in tha beats
...face defeat, im winnin, couldnt more if i cheat
...its a race for me to get it, lookin forward to peace
.......jacob piece, linen shorts on a beach
nah, ill still be in tha country wit some bos and some reebs
theres no one like Dirty, yea my styles just me
'off top' for 'no profit' my 'styles' just 'free'
yea...wild in tha streets, even wilder wit freaks
like...play wit yerself wit a mouthfull of me
she came on herself then swallowed tha seed
like she aint had a drink in weeks....well ill be
a monkeys uncle from tha jungle, country hustle
just cut this wit that, ya money doubles
there is no tit for tat, just bloody rumbles
me, im only bloody cuz i cut up my knuckles
brutalize ya body, damn near knock ya soul out it
no doubted, ya should have never flowed bout it
if ya dont know bout it, im so out of my mind
when im walkin around i see myself from behind
yall hate Boy's skills, i see myself in ya rymes
no skateboard still, see myself on tha grind

(Oh no no-, oh no no-, oh no nooooo)

[1/2 Wit It]

First off..

You Said:
nah, ill still be in tha country wit some bos and some reebs

^You talkin bout Girbauds and Reeboks, riiiight?

But yeah, anyways, I felt this piece was ok, nothing special in my eyes..It's a bit simple also, but then again, you did write to a beat and when I write to an instrumental I often have to dumb my rhymes down so they can flow properly..Maybe thats what you did here, too..Anyways, there wasn't really much I liked in there, a few lines..Let me quote em..

You Wrote:
yea...wild in tha streets, even wilder wit freaks
like...play wit yerself wit a mouthfull of me
Haha, just hilarious..

a monkeys uncle from tha jungle, country hustle
just cut this wit that, ya money doubles
there is no tit for tat, just bloody rumbles
me, im only bloody cuz i cut up my knuckles
I also liked this part...Even though it really seems like some shit Cam`Ron would say..I still appreciated the smooth flow..

Yeah, thats all I really got to say, decent read..keep at it, bruh.

[ouija818]

i like it altought iam more into punch lines bro
This is some thing you would go main stream with
i like i would definetally bump shit like this in my car

[rhymephest]

it was nice some shit i ain't care for like about the bitch who came but there was some hot lines like the one about bein so out of ya mind you see yaself from behind but keep droppin

[Dirty D]

thnx for tha feed