noobs: priest(0-0) vs Half wit it(0-0)

[Con]

5-8

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[1/2 Wit It]

Hello.

>_>

he has a hands on approach, i guess that's why he's makin' little noise...
cuz he must be a child physician..we all know Priest is known for touchin' little boys...
i'll punch this guy and he won't raise a single hand...he must rarely auction...
so just watch how i'll leave Priest in the number 2 slot..sorta like Larry Johnson...
no wonder you're Sikkflowz, all yer bars disgusting..incredibly far from the best text...
i peeped one of your verses..it resembled a fusion of forced multies and death threats..*
this turd couldn't apply pressure..so in this battle it's apparent i ain't stressin' shit...
vexin' kids..makin' Priest wanna jump out a window like the final scene in the Exorcist!...
i'll have to ask all the future voters to forgive me..i know that nameplays are played...
a pictures worth a thousand words..he has no image..so theres not much to say...
his whole style's homosexual...i can tell this nigga's gay simply from the way he raps...
so it's obvious that confessin' his sins isn't the only time we find Priest on his kneecaps...


>_>...

*Explanations*
Priest Holmes is a running back for the Kansas City Chiefs..so is Larry Johnson..Larry is gonna take his position soon...>_>
His name used to be Sikkflowz...<_<

That's it, I think. >__>

[priest]

yall can vote me or half, but i came just in time
to throw lipsticks at foreheads to help makeup ya minds
blaze up this dime, im burnin heads
ya punches in a vegetable state since they turnip dead
if I critique this poor fuck's verse, dont say that im bent
I'll give u my two cents just to help pay for the rent
still tryin to prove your nice, stop and accept your cred
cos your proof of being dope probably left him dead
shhhhhhhhhhhh imma can your crap
cos im pasture shit, and manure wack
you deserve to be dead
half wit it playing ketchup, but none a ya verses get red
preservin the net, an my lines are coo
but no1 gives a fuck since ima noob


lol..

[1/2 Wit It]

^lol..dopest verse, I've ever seen on here..seriously. >_>

[priest]

upp

[Con]

upp

[D Dopest]

sweet simple, good wording, good punches...............

blaze up this dime, im burnin heads
ya punches in a vegetable state since they turnip dead

Vote----------> Priest

P.S.
Mr. 1/2 shorten u lines so they have more effect

[Criticize]

has a hands on approach, i guess that's why he's makin' little noise...
cuz he must be a child physician..we all know Priest is known for touchin' little boys...
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yall can vote me or half, but i came just in time
to throw lipsticks at foreheads to help makeup ya minds
blaze up this dime, im burnin heads
ya punches in a vegetable state since they turnip dead
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hmm half.. the first 2 nameplays you used were decent, nothing special but Ok the last name play wasnt. the generals in your verse were seriously lacking like the picture worth a 1000 words could be used to make a good punch but your bar was going no where. you gota work on the generals and keep them firing really hot. coz nameplays get played really quick, and the preist lines you used werent too creative so they didnt connect hard. work on the generals and creativity.

priest your first 2 bars were pretty cool sorta down hill from there, some cool wordplay but some of it wasnt actualy punches. that make up your mind line is cool. but its not a punch its more of a bragging/wordplay open mic piece. so just make sure your bars are actualy punches.
although this battle you had enough to win, but if somebody dropped good punchlines your bars wouldnt have cut it.

vote- priest, better punches.

[priest]

you lose.

[GaZooN]

yo..

I officially got respect for someone in this league.

Priest ran with it.

[C-RoGG]

vote: priest

Favorite Bar:

blaze up this dime, im burnin heads
ya punches in a vegetable state since they turnip dead

The Make-Up Your Mind Line Waz Played..Heard It From Jin.. In AN UnderGround Battle...But Its So Played You Can't Say You Bit It


Last Words:

For A Noob Battle It Waz Really Good..Beter Then Most The LW's Right Now..Priest Came Wit The Upset.. N This Can B For The KO..Both Of You Good Job