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Old 11-18-2006, 04:55 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default New York Interlude-The Best

left feedback for JaeSwift-"Good Morning" and G-Twist-"fresh 2 def".....



got 2 tracks for you faggots....

Whu-"The Best"
'The Best' by ThaWhuVillain - SoundClick song info

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Whu-"New York New York Interlude"
'New York, New York Interlude' by ThaWhuVillain - SoundClick song info

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Old 11-18-2006, 07:16 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Default Re: New York Interlude-The Best

i've always enjoyed your music....so lets see what you still got

THE BEST:

my only real solution is to make yall bleed
..lol i like how you ended your 1st verse

2nd verse....3/4 the way through seems like your losing flow :(

overall I like your lyrics...don't really like ya voice over this beat tho
cool song!


NY Interlude:

nice beat choice, i can see your voice over this beat
yes yes u come in nicely
enjoying the lyrics...good usage of multi's

thought u was from colorado?

anyways this is a much better track than the best
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Old 11-19-2006, 11:12 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Default Re: New York Interlude-The Best

The Best - Funky, syncopated beat and rhythm. The aura of sound it produces reminds me of Cassidy's "I'ma Hustla." The way that your voice adapts to the soundscape is delivered with emphasis on the letter "S" when you refer to plural words to describe yourself and what you've created. "New York New YOrk" brought out the inner ogre.

New York - A low, rolling thunder vocal method - immediately resembling Jedi Mind Tricks in "Violent by Design." After these introductions, I think we all can expect beastly fast-paced delivery (futurustic vehicle chases.) When's the next Inn Deppth/Whu creation? Good luck with your CD.

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Old 11-19-2006, 03:24 PM   #4 (permalink)
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thought u was from colorado?

I am from colorado but my heart is in NY, I love NY....plan on moving there after high school...........



thanks to both of ya'll for the feedback....really appriciate that shit.....STILL UPPIN!

vulgar.....thanks for the feedback, always makes me laugh to see your feedback...hahaha

Uhm.....the next Deppth and Whu shit will be as soon as Nick gets off his lazy ass and records wtih me....I always bug him to record but hes always jackin off or sleepin....bitch ass
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Old 11-19-2006, 03:38 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Default Re: New York Interlude-The Best

listening.......beat is cool.......like your style.....lyrics are cool too....(oh ya listening to best of best).....really likin this cut......never peep'd anything by you before.....stay up....nice ish....if you can return the favor on 'this is my life'.......
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dope beat choice.. im liking the way your kicking it in..digging the grimy delivery.. need to up the vocals.. lyrics are solid..you might try to duplicate your original vocals onto a separate track and adding a delay to bring more fullness to your vocals although they might just be gettign smothered by the beat.. nice track needs vocals brought up tho

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thanks for the feedback......definately appriciate it...still UPPIN! CHECK BOTH TRACKS!
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lol i'm loving this, delivery is gritty ... and that guy just blaze is a G on this beat...
wordplay is str8... flow is polished

overall the best drop i've heard in a minute
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