| Spoken Word For the poets with a voice. | 
01-29-2007, 02:10 PM
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| | viva usted
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|  Nebulus Clouds
Phade on the guitar
Av on the vocals
enjoy. Nebulus Clouds
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01-29-2007, 04:12 PM
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this was hot. guitar sounded nice.. and you sounded good over it AV.. some words sounded kinda.. forced.. if that makes sense.. but besides that it was great. once you get a little more comfortable then it'll sound better.. or maybe if i get more comfortable since i haven't heard a spoken word kinda track in a while. nice collab guys | |
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01-29-2007, 07:02 PM
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| | Save yourself
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Sounds of soul from the future. The central phrase matched the musical backround and acted as a droplet. This is looking to be a great series of spoken words with the krylon guitarist's leadership. I'm going to do Banana Manana this week. Thanks for the listen to both.
Keep doing you
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01-30-2007, 07:05 AM
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| | Beyond Redemption
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This was cool, i liked the whole feel about it. Good work
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01-30-2007, 03:51 PM
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good shit.....cool to see sick collabs like this.....guitar was perfect with your voice,emotion, and subject......there was a few parts it seemed like you stumbled.....why did you continue if this was so?......lyrics were nice and you got me emersed in the track....i can dig it
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02-04-2007, 08:28 AM
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| | broken pockets
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I thought this came out pretty sweet. Good job Av.
thanks for listening
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02-09-2007, 08:33 AM
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| | Foulchild
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You're like 'Bronze Nazareth' but he's a little deeper. I liked It man, spoken word Is something I can really sit back and listen to. Nice guitar, nice vocals they meshed very well.
I hardly ever look forward to open mics from anyone, because It's just the same thing we're used to. But spoken word...yeah I can look forward to such thing. Inspiring people. | |
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02-17-2007, 12:41 PM
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| | Truth be Told
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first thing i've checke din here
only spoken word stuff i'd heard before was saul williams
liked the whole vibe on this, reminded me off the spoken word track on the roots , things fall apart for some reason even though the content aint the same | |
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03-06-2007, 05:49 AM
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| | vintage lyrical rasta'
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okay phade .
its our turn . whip out chur' gee.tar .
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04-08-2007, 06:57 AM
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| | broken pockets
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thanks for feed. watch this space for more
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04-23-2007, 01:58 PM
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guitar was nice | |
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04-23-2007, 10:22 PM
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| | Fresh Air
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dis shit is fuckin sick!!!
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04-25-2007, 11:26 PM
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This was beautiful.... keep posting stuff like this. | |
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05-20-2007, 02:36 AM
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Thats some deep ish. | |
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06-02-2007, 07:12 PM
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| | p.y.t
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<3
"it's more important that she find a way home
and that she find a home in me
in we
in peace"
i really like this.
i like how you started, setting the mellow atmosphere with your crisp voice and the subtle guitar music. & the way you worked with the music, it really complimented your poem/voice
have to say this is a favorite of mine. | |
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