L'Weight Contender: ((Verbal)) vs. Spookes

[Plot]

6-8 bars. Due on Sunday
Please check, match, & Pm your opponent

[spookes]

checkin in ,
PM'd Aponnent

[Thesis-]

check should drop tonight

[spookes]

Well, , , Judging From Previous Occassions, I Will Drop AFTER You Have Aint Wasting Another Fuckin Verse Bitch ;)

[Thesis-]

lets go 6?

his moms thought birth was a game and then tried to abort
yea held together wit ducktape the way you get no support.!

that said you know hes fucked up.he has scared himself sensless
sorry im wrong
cause at the beginning of his first sentence he ain have no senses.!

you be blendin in with the wack crew of the sixxx
reason it has three x's in ya sig cuz u on twists dick.!

ya points dont matter dawg thats just ya wack score
im from chicago
so like bears the first week i give that and only '4 more'.!

i live by the sword so shoot.c'mon bitch i'm shinobi
put them through i'll just walk round like im 'holy'.!

so naive an overconfident dawg come see me face to face
in ya sig hide ya face
its a disgrace u slow bitch u cant even walk to my 'pace'.!

*explanations:2nd bar is im saying ever since he could talk he ain have no sense
*last bar his sig has a dude with a mask
blah 15 min key wanted to make sure i got it

[Thesis-]

upping this guy

[spookes]

iight man , i do apologise for the late shit, i havent no showed, but will post verse in a hour,
i have had to move house cos of a lot of shit int he previous house, u will see in the sixx points threads, that i have been having trouble, and struggle to get on the net all the time, and when i do and start to post mah verse, the connection is lost, ( as i go outside and use some one elses wireless lol )

post shortly nigguh

Yo, Verbal, just give~it~up before you get ripped~and~cut, I spit~to~snuff, so quickly~run, before I slit~ya~gut//
Maybe when I knocked you out, you slipped~and~fucked ya head up so bad that now you thinkin your spits~is~tough//
In reality, they more pussy than clits~and~muffs, so I batter~them~raw, shatter~your~jaw with my battling~drawl//
My depths are "empty and cold inside" like "fasting~through~fall", I've mastered~the~call to bring the worst disaster~to~all//
I "can't stand" your rhymes, I'm paraplegic~to~verbal's~ex.. After I "beat this dick" you get a pair~of~Kleenex~and~then it's time to clean~up~this~mess!//
I'm far beyond~my~time, rewind~my~rhyme to see me rap~on~time. If not, it's like Godzilla, my mouth don't match~the~lines!//
Chemically unstable when I react~with~rhymes. Dissolve your body and collapse~ya~mind//
Like pissed prisoners, I'm pounding~bars, your body's found~with~scars.. "beef" with me ends "fucked up", like COWS~IN~BARS!//

well there it is sorry it was late and it has been rushed, due to the fact i am a very busy guy lately , promotion at work and all, and then dont help being in this office looking like a goon for standing there spittin to mah self, and every mother fucker thinking im a right cunt now, and i havent introduced myself to the company yet, how good is that gonna look HAHA

[country boy]

his moms thought birth was a game and then tried to abort
yea held together wit ducktape the way you get no support.!
nah
that said you know hes fucked up.he has scared himself sensless
sorry im wrong
cause at the beginning of his first sentence he ain have no senses.!
no
you be blendin in with the wack crew of the sixxx
reason it has three x's in ya sig cuz u on twists dick.!
ehh
ya points dont matter dawg thats just ya wack score
im from chicago
so like bears the first week i give that and only '4 more'.!
no
i live by the sword so shoot.c'mon bitch i'm shinobi
put them through i'll just walk round like im 'holy'.!
nah
so naive an overconfident dawg come see me face to face
in ya sig hide ya face
its a disgrace u slow bitch u cant even walk to my 'pace'.!
no

Yo, Verbal, just give~it~up before you get ripped~and~cut, I spit~to~snuff, so quickly~run, before I slit~ya~gut//
Maybe when I knocked you out, you slipped~and~fucked ya head up so bad that now you thinkin your spits~is~tough//
ehhh hate strerched lines!
In reality, they more pussy than clits~and~muffs, so I batter~them~raw, shatter~your~jaw with my battling~drawl//
My depths are "empty and cold inside" like "fasting~through~fall", I've mastered~the~call to bring the worst disaster~to~all//
no
I "can't stand" your rhymes, I'm paraplegic~to~verbal's~ex.. After I "beat this dick" you get a pair~of~Kleenex~and~then it's time to clean~up~this~mess!//
I'm far beyond~my~time, rewind~my~rhyme to see me rap~on~time. If not, it's like Godzilla, my mouth don't match~the~lines!//
Chemically unstable when I react~with~rhymes. Dissolve your body and collapse~ya~mind//
Like pissed prisoners, I'm pounding~bars, your body's found~with~scars.. "beef" with me ends "fucked up", like COWS~IN~BARS!//
ehh i dont get alot of these bars? theres some that dont even go together right, i cant figure out how to break down hardly anything, so with that said

v verbal sorry dawg, cant understand spookes shyt

[Plot]

VERBS
his moms thought birth was a game and then tried to abort
yea held together wit ducktape the way you get no support.!
~ehh
that said you know hes fucked up.he has scared himself sensless
sorry im wrong
cause at the beginning of his first sentence he ain have no senses.!
~ok. liked the multies, punch was almost a diluted personal
you be blendin in with the wack crew of the sixxx
reason it has three x's in ya sig cuz u on twists dick.!
~nah
ya points dont matter dawg thats just ya wack score
im from chicago
so like bears the first week i give that and only '4 more'.!
~huh?
i live by the sword so shoot.c'mon bitch i'm shinobi
put them through i'll just walk round like im 'holy'.!
~Ha. weird
so naive an overconfident dawg come see me face to face
in ya sig hide ya face
its a disgrace u slow bitch u cant even walk to my 'pace'.!
~nope.
~tryin show more clever wit or humor

SPOOKY
Yo, Verbal, just give~it~up before you get ripped~and~cut,
I spit~to~snuff, so quickly~run, before I slit~ya~gut//
Maybe when I knocked you out, you slipped~and~fucked...
ya head up so bad that now you thinkin your spits~is~tough//
~stretched multies & weak punch
In reality, they more pussy than clits~and~muffs, so I batter~them~raw,
shatter~your~jaw with my battling~drawl//
My depths are "empty and cold inside" like "fasting~through~fall",
I've mastered~the~call to bring the worst disaster~to~all//
~braggin, bad braggin at that
I "can't stand" your rhymes, I'm paraplegic~to~verbal's~ex..
After I "beat this dick" you get a pair~of~Kleenex
~and~then it's time to clean~up~this~mess!//
~how U gonna give him a handjob if Ur paraplegic?
I'm far beyond~my~time, rewind~my~rhyme to see me rap~on~time.
If not, it's like Godzilla, my mouth don't match~the~lines!//
Chemically unstable when I react~with~rhymes. Dissolve your body and collapse~ya~mind//
~nope, just more mutlies goin nowhere
Like pissed prisoners, I'm pounding~bars, your body's found~with~scars..
"beef" with me ends "fucked up", like COWS~IN~BARS!//
~no no no
~your gettin worse man

V-Verbal.

[Thesis-]

2-0 uppin o and thx for droppin tho spookes its better then a no-show thx man!

ur still gay hehe

[1/2 Wit It]

..verbal..
his moms thought birth was a game and then tried to abort
yea held together wit ducktape the way you get no support.!
coulda been worded better..decent opener.
that said you know hes fucked up.he has scared himself sensless
sorry im wrong
cause at the beginning of his first sentence he ain have no senses.!
not really feeling this.
you be blendin in with the wack crew of the sixxx
reason it has three x's in ya sig cuz u on twists dick.!
haha, not bad.
ya points dont matter dawg thats just ya wack score
im from chicago
so like bears the first week i give that and only '4 more'.!
nah, this was weak imo.
i live by the sword so shoot.c'mon bitch i'm shinobi
put them through i'll just walk round like im 'holy'.!
weak bar, man.
so naive an overconfident dawg come see me face to face
in ya sig hide ya face
its a disgrace u slow bitch u cant even walk to my 'pace'.!
bad closer.

spookes
Yo, Verbal, just give~it~up before you get ripped~and~cut, I spit~to~snuff, so quickly~run, before I slit~ya~gut//
Maybe when I knocked you out, you slipped~and~fucked ya head up so bad that now you thinkin your spits~is~tough//
pretty decent, although stretched.
In reality, they more pussy than clits~and~muffs, so I batter~them~raw, shatter~your~jaw with my battling~drawl//
My depths are "empty and cold inside" like "fasting~through~fall", I've mastered~the~call to bring the worst disaster~to~all//
not really dissing him in this bar..
I "can't stand" your rhymes, I'm paraplegic~to~verbal's~ex.. After I "beat this dick" you get a pair~of~Kleenex~and~then it's time to clean~up~this~mess!//
still not insulting him..
I'm far beyond~my~time, rewind~my~rhyme to see me rap~on~time. If not, it's like Godzilla, my mouth don't match~the~lines!//
Chemically unstable when I react~with~rhymes. Dissolve your body and collapse~ya~mind//
weak bar.
Like pissed prisoners, I'm pounding~bars, your body's found~with~scars.. "beef" with me ends "fucked up", like COWS~IN~BARS!//
eh, decent closer.

Overall Vote: Verbal...both had weak verses, with only like one bar that i liked, but verbal had the better attempts at dissing spookes..it seemed like spookes was just saying random things, and it made his verse seem a big open mic-ish..

[spookes]

iight well like i said im at work at the moment untill the 31st october then i got mah connection back in mah new crib,
well done verbal at least u did show, better than before,
right well next weeks shit will be banging and i will think about what im spittin and puttin in mah lyrixx,
u will see a definate improvment and i will get another shot at that belt nigguh :D