LW#3 Skillosophy(1-0) vs Jack(0-0)

[Con]

8-12

Sign ins due on Thursday, if u dont, we'll take it as a noshow.

DUE SATURDAY at 11:59 pm, CENTRAL..lets see if this changes anything.
if u vote fast, then we can begin earlier.. unless im at work so it'll
take longer sometimes.

excuses we wont accept anymore:

'i got fucked up!', 'i wasnt on a computer!', 'he didnt sign in!',
'i forgot', 'thought i was ontime!'.thats why u read the rules on the top page.

if ya opponent noshows u need to post SOMETHING, a bar will
do or both of u r dq'd BUT! u better have a verse ready incase ya opponent does show!!!
those single bars r only da guarantee that yall showing up..COME READY EVERYTIME.


vote on at least TWO battles in the league afterwards. but it'd b nice if u do
more.
if u dont want to wait..pm or aim us ur verses and we'll gladly post it for u
right on the deadline hour.
u may get an extension only if its an emergency and u aint got shit done.
and it better be good.





read the fukin rules.

[$k!LLo$oPhY]

checc...

lets do da damn thang...im only droppin 8..but if you wanna do more..be my guest..

holla..

[Jack]

-run-

[Jack]

*says he's rusty,thats why hes not ill any more or up to par like he was/its an excuse,Con says in his rules excuses are no longer accepetd*



Brains splattered,veins shattered,face scattered,thats what sickness is
Show u a bloody matter when i leave ya Head Leakin like syphillis
Leave ya ligaments across nations,touching more people than preechers
When your threw out the globe,like wastful geography teachers!
Jack sleepin on top bunks ta prove i stay above the Rest
Yu could perform doggy style and wouldnt be Hands Down the best
Pull ya Death Card like the inivitable came wit ya visa,& murder u bro
U Stay Catchin The Reepers Interest,but Stumble on Debt Throw/Death Row
Kid stayed makin up storys & lies,U never was Ill!& oh did i mention?
He'd rather not show his face like muslim women,kuz Excuses r no longer accepted*
He stay on Top A Dick,he represents what faggots are
Kuz we all know Skills Posted Over Head like his avatar
Rookies uppin you like u somethin ta fear,but how u causin a buzz?
When u got more Room 2 Improve Than tim allen does
In an instant jack'll slaughter u,no Questions about it im serious
Kuz like the purpose of tampons nigga,im stoppin you..Period.!

*voted on Fluent vs Crit


damn dont tell me your gonna no show

[$k!LLo$oPhY]

yo my internet was fuccin trippin..i havent been able to post since like the 4th...but fucc it..regardless if you except this or not...

quik keystyle...


im bout to play "Jack" better then Robin Williams!, you fuccin wit $k!LLo$oPhY?//
not even probably, you gotta-be at least on my level to even bother-me!//
you not-a-"G", and neither is ya crew, but i dont need to remind-yall!//
cuz between you niggas, you got "one stripe" like the pool game "nine-ball"!//
claimin' you killin $k!LL, but couldnt dish-out-the-slaughter!//
now ya verse got Marco yellin' "fish-outta-water"!//
J likes to sneek in his sisters room, and see how well he can fit-in-her-skirts!//
it's a fact-jack you rap-wacc, so save me the trouble and get-in-the-hurse!//
you spit-it-the-worst!, $k!LL got you colliding-wit-death!//
send this magazine to your lungs till your subscribing-for-breath!//
be careful now Jack!, dont make the wrong-decision!//
or i'll cut you in half vertically to practice my long-division!//
with palm-precision, punches got you shakin like bomb-collisions!//
you wanna play with the "big boys", better get mom's-permission!//
the time-is-up, your rhymin-succs, better hope they auction-minutes//
8 bars, and $k!LL son'd Jack quik like drive-thru adoption-clinics!//

blah..

http://www.rapflava.com/forums/lw-cl...=1#post1133969 (LW Click(9-2) vs Elushun(2-0))

[Jack]

^^^^^^^^i'll be having a second link in a minute

[Dopar...]

u dont needa post links in here man..
he knows wether u voted or not...

Brains splattered,veins shattered,face scattered,thats what sickness is
Show u a bloody matter when i leave ya Head Leakin like syphillis
^decent

Leave ya ligaments across nations,touching more people than preechers
When your threw out the globe,like wastful geography teachers!
^wack

Jack sleepin on top bunks ta prove i stay above the Rest
Yu could perform doggy style and wouldnt be Hands Down the best
^no

Pull ya Death Card like the inivitable came wit ya visa,& murder u bro
U Stay Catchin The Reepers Interest,but Stumble on Debt Throw/Death Row
^ehh

Kid stayed makin up storys & lies,U never was Ill!& oh did i mention?
He'd rather not show his face like muslim women,kuz Excuses r no longer accepted*
^dope

He stay on Top A Dick,he represents what faggots are
Kuz we all know Skills Posted Over Head like his avatar
^played and ehh even if it wasnt

Rookies uppin you like u somethin ta fear,but how u causin a buzz?
When u got more Room 2 Improve Than tim allen does
^lol

In an instant jack'll slaughter u,no Questions about it im serious
Kuz like the purpose of tampons nigga,im stoppin you..Period.!
^played to fuck..

Vs.

im bout to play "Jack" better then Robin Williams!, you fuccin wit $k!LLo$oPhY?//
not even probably, you gotta-be at least on my level to even bother-me!//
^Flow=Dope..punch=wack

you not-a-"G", and neither is ya crew, but i dont need to remind-yall!//
cuz between you niggas, you got "one stripe" like the pool game "nine-ball"!//
^no..

claimin' you killin $k!LL, but couldnt dish-out-the-slaughter!//
now ya verse got Marco yellin' "fish-outta-water"!//
^Macro?...i bet this is bitten

J likes to sneek in his sisters room, and see how well he can fit-in-her-skirts!//
it's a fact-jack you rap-wacc, so save me the trouble and get-in-the-hurse!//
^no

you spit-it-the-worst!, $k!LL got you colliding-wit-death!//
send this magazine to your lungs till your subscribing-for-breath!//
^decent

be careful now Jack!, dont make the wrong-decision!//
or i'll cut you in half vertically to practice my long-division!//
^played

with palm-precision, punches got you shakin like bomb-collisions!//
you wanna play with the "big boys", better get mom's-permission!//
^wack

the time-is-up, your rhymin-succs, better hope they auction-minutes//
8 bars, and $k!LL son'd Jack quik like drive-thru adoption-clinics!//
^played...

V=Jack
less played..

stay up to both

[Pembroke]

Jacque

Brains splattered,veins shattered,face scattered,thats what sickness is
Show u a bloody matter when i leave ya Head Leakin like syphillis

- Eh

Leave ya ligaments across nations,touching more people than preechers
When your threw out the globe,like wastful geography teachers!

- Threw out the globe... ugh..

Jack sleepin on top bunks ta prove i stay above the Rest
Yu could perform doggy style and wouldnt be Hands Down the best

- Not really

Pull ya Death Card like the inivitable came wit ya visa,& murder u bro
U Stay Catchin The Reepers Interest,but Stumble on Debt Throw/Death Row

- Forced

Kid stayed makin up storys & lies,U never was Ill!& oh did i mention?
He'd rather not show his face like muslim women,kuz Excuses r no longer accepted*

- Weak, set-up ruined the decent Punch

He stay on Top A Dick,he represents what faggots are
Kuz we all know Skills Posted Over Head like his avatar

- K, avatar punches are gay but this works

Rookies uppin you like u somethin ta fear,but how u causin a buzz?
When u got more Room 2 Improve Than tim allen does

- Decent

In an instant jack'll slaughter u,no Questions about it im serious
Kuz like the purpose of tampons nigga,im stoppin you..Period.!

- Played..

Skill

im bout to play "Jack" better then Robin Williams!, you fuccin wit $k!LLo$oPhY?//
not even probably, you gotta-be at least on my level to even bother-me!//

- First line was cool.. rest is Blah

you not-a-"G", and neither is ya crew, but i dont need to remind-yall!//
cuz between you niggas, you got "one stripe" like the pool game "nine-ball"!//

- Wording ruined it

claimin' you killin $k!LL, but couldnt dish-out-the-slaughter!//
now ya verse got Marco yellin' "fish-outta-water"!//

- Okay

J likes to sneek in his sisters room, and see how well he can fit-in-her-skirts!//
it's a fact-jack you rap-wacc, so save me the trouble and get-in-the-hurse!//

- Okay

you spit-it-the-worst!, $k!LL got you colliding-wit-death!//
send this magazine to your lungs till your subscribing-for-breath!//

- No

be careful now Jack!, dont make the wrong-decision!//
or i'll cut you in half vertically to practice my long-division!//

- Not bad

with palm-precision, punches got you shakin like bomb-collisions!//
you wanna play with the "big boys", better get mom's-permission!//

- Weak

the time-is-up, your rhymin-succs, better hope they auction-minutes//
8 bars, and $k!LL son'd Jack quik like drive-thru adoption-clinics!//

- Too simple

v/ $killosophy

Better verse.. both didn't really come original.. Jack's punches were either badly worded or weak punchlines, and Skill had the flow and decent contents to hold it down.. Jack, remember what I told you in the PM..
Stay up

[Jack]

threw out the globe as in through out...leaven him through out the globe..damn and i was feelin that line..lol..

1-1

[$k!LLo$oPhY]

1-1...

uppin...and ison...i dont bite...maybe you hurd a similar line..but i dont need to bite...anyway...good lookin on the vote..

holla..

[Criticize]

skills long division line was decent,
jacks time allen line was cool.

overall i gota give this to jack the reason is, although some of his wordplay and mets didnt seem to connect as well as they could have. he had the basics down and through more O.K punches, also had the best bar of the battle.

skill you gota work on your mets and wordplay coz some of your punches have nothing and are just to basic come with that creative steezzz.

vote- jack

[$k!LLo$oPhY]

2-1..

uppin..

[Fluent]

Jack

Brains splattered,veins shattered,face scattered,thats what sickness is
Show u a bloody matter when i leave ya Head Leakin like syphillis
Too basic
Leave ya ligaments across nations,touching more people than preechers
When your threw out the globe,like wastful geography teachers!
Weak
Jack sleepin on top bunks ta prove i stay above the Rest
Yu could perform doggy style and wouldnt be Hands Down the best
Weak
Pull ya Death Card like the inivitable came wit ya visa,& murder u bro
U Stay Catchin The Reepers Interest,but Stumble on Debt Throw/Death Row
Forced
Kid stayed makin up storys & lies,U never was Ill!& oh did i mention?
He'd rather not show his face like muslim women,kuz Excuses r no longer accepted*
Played
He stay on Top A Dick,he represents what faggots are
Kuz we all know Skills Posted Over Head like his avatar
Played
Rookies uppin you like u somethin ta fear,but how u causin a buzz?
When u got more Room 2 Improve Than tim allen does
Weak
In an instant jack'll slaughter u,no Questions about it im serious
Kuz like the purpose of tampons nigga,im stoppin you..Period.!
Played

Skillosophy

im bout to play "Jack" better then Robin Williams!, you fuccin wit $k!LLo$oPhY?//
not even probably, you gotta-be at least on my level to even bother-me!//
Wack
you not-a-"G", and neither is ya crew, but i dont need to remind-yall!//
cuz between you niggas, you got "one stripe" like the pool game "nine-ball"!//
Not bad
claimin' you killin $k!LL, but couldnt dish-out-the-slaughter!//
now ya verse got Marco yellin' "fish-outta-water"!//
Wack
J likes to sneek in his sisters room, and see how well he can fit-in-her-skirts!//
it's a fact-jack you rap-wacc, so save me the trouble and get-in-the-hurse!//
Wack
you spit-it-the-worst!, $k!LL got you colliding-wit-death!//
send this magazine to your lungs till your subscribing-for-breath!//
Cool
be careful now Jack!, dont make the wrong-decision!//
or i'll cut you in half vertically to practice my long-division!//
Decent
with palm-precision, punches got you shakin like bomb-collisions!//
you wanna play with the "big boys", better get mom's-permission!//
Wack
the time-is-up, your rhymin-succs, better hope they auction-minutes//
8 bars, and $k!LL son'd Jack quik like drive-thru adoption-clinics!//
Played

Vote: Skillosophy

[$k!LLo$oPhY]

good loookin on the vote...2-2..

uppin..

[$k!LLo$oPhY]

uppin...