I'm Back (On My Ignorant Shit)

[RGC]

http://www.rapflava.com/forums/take-...ch-118812.html (Take Them D's off that Bitch)
http://www.rapflava.com/forums/r-i-p...va-118482.html (R.I.P Rapflava)

Wrote this to Nas's "The N" beat.

(chorus)
I'm back on my ignorant shit, gettin lit!
I'm back on my ignorant shit, gettin liks!
I'm back on my ignorant shit, gettin ass!
I'm back on my ignorant shit, raise a glass!

I'm back on my ignorant shit with precision,
Anything else and y'all won't listen,
Missed em with that knowledge, college,
Cuz it ain't pad, a muthafuckas wallet,
Ain't get him a pad, or muthafuckin ballin
I can see satan, muthafuckin callin,
So I'm all in with a 40 ounce, bounce wit it
Don't spill it as you grindin dimes, likted,
The shiny wristed, talk shit kick, pimpness
God as my witness as I spy thru my lenses,
Rollin through sunsets rhymin a sentence
Fuck goin out, I'ma die with an entrance,
Peace and death to the lives that I mention,
And fuck a devil that, lies with intention,
Tho I did that wit cha girl last nite,
I was ready to leave the world last nite
Get it right, I write cuz it passes the time,
I can see the light, the chance is it's lime
God grantin me time to rhyme lines for figures?
Doubt it, maybe for fine dimes and tiggers
I mean, the puddy cat bouncin up n down,
Watch me distant, bouncin wit the crown
Trouncin in the town, it's east van or nuthin,
Each man is nuthin, stop frontin,
Stop bluffin my hand is steady and calysed,
The lone star, my heart embedded in dallas,
Ain't never been, in bed with a challenge,
Bitches! I'm out, y'all go ready my palace

I'm back on my ignorant shit, gettin lit!
I'm back on my ignorant shit, gettin liks!
I'm back on my ignorant shit, gettin ass!
I'm back on my ignorant shit, raise a glass!

[RGC]

uppin.

[Queenspittah]

It was average...nothing really stuck out IMO...

Don't spill it as you grindin dimes, likted,
The shiny wristed, talk shit kick, pimpness
God as my witness as I spy thru my lenses,
Rollin through sunsets rhymin a sentence
Fuck goin out, I'ma die with an entrance,

Hottest lines...^^ n best rhyme scheme throughout the whole peice...I give it a 6.75 outta 10.

[Noggah]

God as my witness as I spy thru my lenses,
Rollin through sunsets rhymin a sentence
Fuck goin out, I'ma die with an entrance,

^^that was about the only part i was really diggin... wasnt feelin the 3 mothafuckas u rhymed with near the beginning, after that ya flow got better... still needs a little work, but that was by far ya strongest point... had a couple metaphors... the one i quoted was damn hot... the rest were subpar or iight... all in all an average verse... nothin really stupendous... aside from that die with an entrance line... that was fuckin fire... keep workin on it n you could probably elevate nicely...

[RGC]

Cool, peciate it, that's what everyone been saying, may just take that part out and put it in another, stronger verse.

thanks for the feed, leave links if you want me to get at a pieces.

[Dirty D]

flow was ok and some of the concepts were decent too but the rymes themselves werent really that strong...it was strait if it was a freestyle...would like to hear it on a beat maybe the delivery would make it go together better

fuck goin out, ima die with an entrance

prolly titest line in the whole piece

stay up dawg

[Queenspittah]

Links...http://www.rapflava.com/forums/royal...ml#post1263038 (Royaltie's Place)