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Old 06-17-2003, 06:45 PM   #1 (permalink)
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10 bars max
3-0=ko
5win
n e time up by 3=ko
verses due by tonight unless we rearange sumthin
no hate votes, dick riden ho's. and no ass kissin...
only explained votes.
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Old 06-17-2003, 09:30 PM   #2 (permalink)
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iight Ice man ... checkin in
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"DeAr",
.......~Icy-Veins~.......
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Icy Compared to "Thread Shredders" The Way His Teeth are
"Killin-Machines", Like If I Was "Sketchin ya Kidneys with Bullets" the way my TIPS "Fill-In-ya-Spleen"//1
Rotate Ya Vertabre And Make Ya Back Flip, Crush Ya Temple Till Ya Start Havin’ ‘Relapses’, 'Detach-Six, Of Ya Bones Till Ya Joints Fall Off Their 'Axis'//2
Slap Ya 'Lung-Sack' Wit, A 'Basket', Full Of Crushed Asprin, Till He ‘Collapses’...the Worst-Tension-Buries..Im Known to "Stock Up Graves" and "Emburse-Cemetaries"/
This Faggot Known to "Travel more (W)Hole(y)" then World-
Wide "Church-Missionaries"//3
Like An "Impeached-President", ICY's Gettin Nuttin In This Section But "Voted-Out"./
SkRiPtZ Gonna Act As An "Old-Waiter", This Kids Gettin "Slowly-Served-Out"/4
~Icy Veins~ The "Reincarnated-Micheal-Watts", His Flows "Fucked-Up", This Dudes Gettin "Screwed"/
Im Fueled, Look Through The "Eyes-Of-Mine", Get A Real Taste Of How It Is In The "Winners-View"//5
i got a "hot-blood-flow" that'll "warmth ya veins" and even melt you/
"Devour-This-Kids-Verse" And Conclude, Your Bars Are Gettin "More-Stripped" Than A "Mardi-Graw" Dejavu!//6 (lmao)
Lone-Rider, The Icy Has No Crew, So Let-Me Spectate And Portray This Kid As A 'Straight-Jacket', The Way Hes 'Beggin-To-Lose'/
im leaven him black-n-blue like abusive husbands to wives would do//7
im 'dissectin' this kidd like usin 'frogs for high school experiments' in science/
Taken A 'Torch To Runners' To Acclaim To You Leavin 'Burning Tracks', So Lets End This And 'Get-You-Off' This Site Like 'Net-Cum-Pliance'//( ouch)8


"~BrEaTh EaZy~"
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Yo skriptz your verses are wrote up worse than jlo flicks...
Your lines wouldn't attrach these kids even if harry potter was written into the skriptz/1
To kids thinkin they ill i spread the disease and turn ill to fatality like sars...
But really dawg ya pipelines been cut cause you just posting weak bars/2
But skriptz all you can do is hope i don't run up and steal ya deal...*
What i've cooked up for you will compare you to diciples when you taste ya last meal/3
You might as well call me the doc cause imma offset ya lil illness...
And like a physiologist imma bring ya thinkin back to realness/4
But like long distance telemarketers you are calling out way too many people...**
Stop talkn' cause i'm fittin to pullout knives where you'd think this was blade sequal/5
I'm about to torment knowledge with tounge lashings that keep reoccuring in ya head...***
And have you thinkin to yaself what have i done to make this dude say what he said/6
But anyway you can't hang with me like a fuckin strap on...
Rapflavas got me upagainst a nigga thats unknowing to pussy like a unused tampon/7
Got me pardoning you lines as i side step ya supposed ill skriptz...
As i drown out your self esstem and lines as you spit like i'm fightin ya lipz/8
But scriptz can't pick up a nguyen**** even if he pimped vietnimese hos...
Scriptz don't expect a fair fight with icy cause it throw puches and like luda some bows/
icy is well known for being able to grasp and freeze what yall call sickness...
But skriptz's sickness only shows up once and awhile like the monster of lockness/9

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*. Check above avy
**. Check Callout section in vets and newbies kids got a hell of a call log
***.His yahoo name is Tormented Knowledge
****. Nguyen is vietnimese pronouciation for WIN
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*Extends hand* .... Good battle duke
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** socks him in the face **

lol Nah jus playin Props^....
now kIDDS vote up!
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Old 06-17-2003, 11:15 PM   #8 (permalink)
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WAKE THE FUCK UP
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Old 06-17-2003, 11:44 PM   #9 (permalink)
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u fukkin little faggots vote
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Old 06-17-2003, 11:45 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Aiight.. Breakdown.
Ill Skriptz.
Flow was just a lil choppy, you had some nice punches in there though.
Quote:
Lone-Rider, The Icy Has No Crew, So Let-Me Spectate And Portray This Kid As A 'Straight-Jacket', The Way Hes 'Beggin-To-Lose'/
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I liked that line.. Your verse was decent, and creative.

Icy Veins.
Your verse was really simplistic.. Not many hot multis or punches.. Only attempts at them. I don't have any quotable lines or bars either..
Sooo....
Ill Skriptz took it in almost every category.
No diss to Veins, Keep Writin.
Vote - Skriptz.
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Old 06-17-2003, 11:48 PM   #11 (permalink)
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good lookin 1-0 finally my way
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Old 06-17-2003, 11:58 PM   #12 (permalink)
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breakdown

punches: Tie
multis: <-Ill-SkRiPtz->
wordplay: <-Ill-SkRiPtz->
complexity: <-Ill-SkRiPtz->
flow: Tie
personals: ~Icy Vienz~ (not many, but more then skriptz)
opener: Tie
closer: ~Icy Vienz~

favourite lines :

~Icy Vienz~....

I'm about to torment knowledge with tounge lashings that keep reoccuring in ya head...
And have you thinkin to yaself what have i done to make this dude say what he said

Got me pardoning you lines as i side step ya supposed ill skriptz...
As i drown out your self esstem and lines as you spit like i'm fightin ya lipz
.................................................. ....................................


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Icy Compared to "Thread Shredders" The Way His Teeth are
"Killin-Machines", Like If I Was "Sketchin ya Kidneys with Bullets" the way my TIPS "Fill-In-ya-Spleen"//

Lone-Rider, The Icy Has No Crew, So Let-Me Spectate And Portray This Kid As A 'Straight-Jacket', The Way Hes 'Beggin-To-Lose'/
im leaven him black-n-blue like abusive husbands to wives would do


overall vote : <-Ill-SkRiPtz->

why?......

he had better wordplay and multi's, thats pretty much what got him the win, everything else was neck and neck....
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koo 2-0 My Way....

upPin fA maH K0
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Old 06-18-2003, 02:15 AM   #14 (permalink)
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Vote=ill skriptz

Way Harder Punches...They Were More Direct And Harder...Wordplay Wasnt Bad...Multies Were Pretty Good...Pretty Good FLow...Overall A Pretty Good Verse...Good Battle...


Icy Compared to "Thread Shredders" The Way His Teeth are
"Killin-Machines", Like If I Was "Sketchin ya Kidneys with Bullets" the way my TIPS "Fill-In-ya-Spleen"//1
Rotate Ya Vertabre And Make Ya Back Flip, Crush Ya Temple Till Ya Start Havin’ ‘Relapses’, 'Detach-Six, Of Ya Bones Till Ya Joints Fall Off Their 'Axis'//


^^^Pretty Tight shit...
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KO another vet in the bo0ks

~BReAtH EaZy~
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