 Re: I Need Cash
Intro is some low budget smokin' in the basement
The beat is weak to me, it's like a merry go round with little rapper heads poking out everywhere, the heads like yours on your soundclick. Your brother came alright, he has a slightly white guy voice, if it had more swagger the hook and the lyrics would've been better.
Third guy was decent.
Your verse is the best so far. Delivery could use some work but the presence, lyrics, and rhythm is quality. If you rapped louder and with more aggressive force I'd like listening to your tracks a lot more. People like to hear someone go all out, not skim the surface all the time. An example would be Wayne, sometimes I hear his voice cracking like he just drowned 4 times, was revived, drank 6 gallons of mango juice and went in the mic booth. At other times, like on Go DJ, he became the monster of his territory.
The beat is still bad, so is the hook. "Beat em so fast, tell me where the cash"
Last guy's decent too. Let me know when a rematch is on the horizon, I'll go all out this tiiiiiiiiiiime.
Keep doing you
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