HW2 Think vs. ((Power))

[Plot]

8-10 bars due Friday
Please check & play nice,
& please match your opponents length

[Think.]

fuck this TBA shit...

10 bars due on wednesday, agree?

[Kill POWER]

^word... it would be easier if you had rule sticky threads one for each type of match... and obviously close them...and link it in each battle... tba bothers me... plus that would be easier for everyone...

[DOPE ART]

*he lives with his Mom still
*POW Centers are Police Office Wreck Centers which is what they have in low-class neghboor hood's for children to hang out, watch TV, play games, ect.

I’ll blast this hater, power claimed ill, later was exposed as a massive faker.
if skill was measured in time, then you'd be then biggest procrastinator

i think that went well...

that’s why no one ever believes this twerp, original? ya sprees is dirt
Power thinks he has me trapped? I’ll 'punch-out' like leaving work

it's like u bitting the newer DC members, your drops is PURE('s) shit!
the best? you could try and play tag and STILL never get told "your it"

without snapping your shit CD I’ll have your faking sounds bent
Powers broke as shit, he couldn't raise the steaks taking down tents

you’re a wigger, thinks he's a gangster and tries spraying good shit
when talking asses, more dudes been in POWs then neighbor hood kids

not even the most unoriginal bitch would EVER bite ya steeze
'all good things come to and end' then he'll go on a non-stop writing spree

you fucking kidding if you believe that your keys and spits are worthy
cause the odds are always against you like wearing 3 digit jerseys

try and walk out then I’ll close the doors, get owned and whored.
'home is where the heart is' then your parents got full control of yours

it's widely known I’m slamin foes, get a mac truck and ram ya home,
I wear gloves and quickly put the cloth on ya lips like chicks with camel toes

once more...

u've always been wack, that’s why I don’t get when they say this whores slippin
do jumpin jacks on ya throat, you'll never see air again(arrogant) like poor districts

[Kill POWER]

have you dying on stage worse then actors that are scriptless
you couldnt have your own diss-pose-ill running a dead body export business
(disposal)
i wont get excited, i'll just treat you like an orgamy folder
power'll have him waving white flags in his battle posts like forfeiting soldiers
after this u'd think he's a random team fan the way he'll have a black and blue face
cuz POWER'll make him desperately take every last line like editors past they're due date
power'll drop blood, dead the red flag chase like i killed bulls
thinks a doctor that strictly delivers babies the way he doesnt skill-pull/scalpel
fake car accidents hit you cuz my blasts wreck dummies
sick to your stomach? when it comes to his skills it must be post total gastrectomy
(usertitle)
your mission must be to end me, you wont be who stands
make ya spine fall in double objectives and still not drop a-cord-in two plan(s)
[acording to plan]
you drink straite from the bottle because you dont stick to shots
i must have some paranoid knuckles the way my punches seem to think alot
the battles not in you like the posting lobby, ima toast this hobby
POWER'll have him crawling into the closest grave like home sick zombies
in breakdowns i see dope under a bar but why? they werent weak throws
think'll take more shots in the neck then pornstars that take it all deepthroat
take your weak verses to school and never be unlockin your locker
think could be grandmas sayin "ive fallen and cant get up" and still not drop of his rocker

[DOPE ART]

uppin.

[Plot]

sigh..
THINK
I’ll blast this hater, power claimed ill, later was exposed as a massive faker.
if skill was measured in time, then you'd be then biggest procrastinator
~good concept. (but not really, if you think about it, wouldnt that make him skillful)
that’s why no one ever believes this twerp, original? ya sprees is dirt
Power thinks he has me trapped? I’ll 'punch-out' like leaving work
~played, well-worded tho.
it's like u bitting the newer DC members, your drops is PURE('s) shit!
the best? you could try and play tag and STILL never get told "your it"
~(bitting/biting sp) ok. coulda been dope if U referred to the tag tourney
without snapping your shit CD I’ll have your faking sounds bent
Powers broke as shit, he couldn't raise the steaks taking down tents
~(steaks/stakes sp) this is good, coulda been doper tho.. ike referring to a circus
in the setup or something for example.
...
you’re a wigger, thinks he's a gangster and tries spraying good shit
when talking asses, more dudes been in POWs then neighbor hood kids
~ehh, works ok with the setup, Im not much one for homo disses unless their sick
not even the most unoriginal bitch would EVER bite ya steeze
'all good things come to and end' then he'll go on a non-stop writing spree
~played, ok wording but no flip here
you fucking kidding if you believe that your keys and spits are worthy
cause the odds are always against you like wearing 3 digit jerseys
~dope. nice flip
try and walk out then I’ll close the doors, get owned and whored.
'home is where the heart is' then your parents got full control of yours
~heh, good personal if the explanation is true
it's widely known I’m slamin foes, get a mac truck and ram ya home,
I wear gloves and quickly put the cloth on ya lips like chicks with camel toes
~good concept, wordings bad tho..'quickly' dosent do anything here..
u've always been wack, that’s why I don’t get when they say this whores slippin
do jumpin jacks on ya throat, you'll never see air again(arrogant) like poor districts
~wordings off, wps on the forced side.
all in all I think you could have worked on this for a few more days to make it fluid & better.

POWER
have you dying on stage worse then actors that are scriptless
you couldnt have your own diss-pose-ill running a dead body export business
~(then than sp) dont get the wp. body-pose? ill-dead? wheres the diss go?
i wont get excited, i'll just treat you like an orgamy folder
power'll have him waving white flags in his battle posts like forfeiting soldiers
~(orgamy? is that origami?) punch is not flipt. dont like
after this u'd think he's a random team fan the way he'll have a black and blue face
cuz POWER'll make him desperately take every last line like editors past they're due date
~dope, liked this, especially the set-up..the barmy armys fresh
power'll drop blood, dead the red flag chase like i killed bulls
thinks a doctor that strictly delivers babies the way he doesnt skill-pull/scalpel
~wps a tad forced. ok
fake car accidents hit you cuz my blasts wreck dummies
sick to your stomach? when it comes to his skills it must be post total gastrectomy
~sp? this is ok at best
your mission must be to end me, you wont be who stands
make ya spine fall in double objectives and still not drop a-cord-in two plan(s)
~thats sick, dope wp & flipt nice
you drink straite from the bottle because you dont stick to shots
i must have some paranoid knuckles the way my punches seem to think alot
~nice np
the battles not in you like the posting lobby, ima toast this hobby
POWER'll have him crawling into the closest grave like home sick zombies
~haha, dunno what a closet-grave is tho, & shouldnt it be homosexual zombies
that concept is fucking out there.
...
in breakdowns i see dope under a bar but why? they werent weak throws
think'll take more shots in the neck then pornstars that take it all deepthroat
~played words, but its a nice flip
take your weak verses to school and never be unlockin your locker
think could be grandmas sayin "ive fallen and cant get up" and still not drop of his rocker
~(of- off sp) this is ok

V-Power, had more flipt content in the end

food for thought..
when Stoic says for example..
"you'll be throwing up blood, like anoerixic vampires"
see how thats flipt..anoerixics throw-up & vampires drink blood
makes it a dope simile.
"have him waving white flags in his battle posts like forfeiting soldiers"
thats exactly what the white flag is for, surrendering,
this is not flipt at all.

[Kill POWER]

^^^uppin... take me off blast plotter

[Phonix]

Think:

I’ll blast this hater, power claimed ill, later was exposed as a massive faker.
if skill was measured in time, then you'd be then biggest procrastinator

Cool meta..good opener

i think that went well...
that’s why no one ever believes this twerp, original? ya sprees is dirt
Power thinks he has me trapped? I’ll 'punch-out' like leaving work

Played

it's like u bitting the newer DC members, your drops is PURE('s) shit!
the best? you could try and play tag and STILL never get told "your it"

Poor

without snapping your shit CD I’ll have your faking sounds bent
Powers broke as shit, he couldn't raise the steaks taking down tents

Played

you’re a wigger, thinks he's a gangster and tries spraying good shit
when talking asses, more dudes been in POWs then neighbor hood kids

Lol ight

not even the most unoriginal bitch would EVER bite ya steeze
'all good things come to and end' then he'll go on a non-stop writing spree

I've used this concept, i prefered my wording :)

you fucking kidding if you believe that your keys and spits are worthy
cause the odds are always against you like wearing 3 digit jerseys

LOL thats a cool flip actually

try and walk out then I’ll close the doors, get owned and whored.
'home is where the heart is' then your parents got full control of yours

Dope

it's widely known I’m slamin foes, get a mac truck and ram ya home,
I wear gloves and quickly put the cloth on ya lips like chicks with camel toes

nah

once more...

u've always been wack, that’s why I don’t get when they say this whores slippin
do jumpin jacks on ya throat, you'll never see air again(arrogant) like poor districts

Forced tomb eeee

VS

Power:

have you dying on stage worse then actors that are scriptless
you couldnt have your own diss-pose-ill running a dead body export business

Ight,

i wont get excited, i'll just treat you like an orgamy folder
power'll have him waving white flags in his battle posts like forfeiting soldiers

Too simple, like plot said, needed flippin

after this u'd think he's a random team fan the way he'll have a black and blue face
cuz POWER'll make him desperately take every last line like editors past they're due date

Coolio

power'll drop blood, dead the red flag chase like i killed bulls
thinks a doctor that strictly delivers babies the way he doesnt skill-pull/scalpel

Ehh, semi-forced, its a near hit, grazed him..now smash him

fake car accidents hit you cuz my blasts wreck dummies
sick to your stomach? when it comes to his skills it must be post total gastrectomy

And he misses..

your mission must be to end me, you wont be who stands
make ya spine fall in double objectives and still not drop a-cord-in two plan(s)

I've used an a cord dangly line before..liked how this was worded.

you drink straite from the bottle because you dont stick to shots
i must have some paranoid knuckles the way my punches seem to think alot

Dope nameplay

the battles not in you like the posting lobby, ima toast this hobby
POWER'll have him crawling into the closest grave like home sick zombies

SIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICK

...
in breakdowns i see dope under a bar but why? they werent weak throws
think'll take more shots in the neck then pornstars that take it all deepthroat

Pornstar punch..ehh..

take your weak verses to school and never be unlockin your locker
think could be grandmas sayin "ive fallen and cant get up" and still not drop of his rocker

Cool

Vote = Power

fairly even imo, think had a dope personal about home is where the heart is, both had some good stuff, some poor stuff and some played stuff, it came down to one bar..and that was by power:

the battles not in you like the posting lobby, ima toast this hobby
POWER'll have him crawling into the closest grave like home sick zombies


Vote - Power

[DOPE ART]

2-0 Powers way.

and Plot, thanks for that last bit. but stoic's bar was actually incorect.

Belimcs throw up. Anerexics just drink water ather then eating lol.
i see what you mean though.

[Fluent]

Dope Art

I’ll blast this hater, power claimed ill, later was exposed as a massive faker.
if skill was measured in time, then you'd be then biggest procrastinator
Boring
that’s why no one ever believes this twerp, original? ya sprees is dirt
Power thinks he has me trapped? I’ll 'punch-out' like leaving work
Simple
it's like u bitting the newer DC members, your drops is PURE('s) shit!
the best? you could try and play tag and STILL never get told "your it"
Simple
without snapping your shit CD I’ll have your faking sounds bent
Powers broke as shit, he couldn't raise the steaks taking down tents
Ok
you’re a wigger, thinks he's a gangster and tries spraying good shit
when talking asses, more dudes been in POWs then neighbor hood kids
Ok
not even the most unoriginal bitch would EVER bite ya steeze
'all good things come to and end' then he'll go on a non-stop writing spree
Not bad
you fucking kidding if you believe that your keys and spits are worthy
cause the odds are always against you like wearing 3 digit jerseys
Ok
try and walk out then I’ll close the doors, get owned and whored.
'home is where the heart is' then your parents got full control of yours
No
it's widely known I’m slamin foes, get a mac truck and ram ya home,
I wear gloves and quickly put the cloth on ya lips like chicks with camel toes
Good
u've always been wack, that’s why I don’t get when they say this whores slippin
do jumpin jacks on ya throat, you'll never see air again(arrogant) like poor districts
Forced, no -Ant sound in again

POWER

have you dying on stage worse then actors that are scriptless
you couldnt have your own diss-pose-ill running a dead body export business
Kinda reaching but ok
i wont get excited, i'll just treat you like an orgamy folder
power'll have him waving white flags in his battle posts like forfeiting soldiers
Basic
after this u'd think he's a random team fan the way he'll have a black and blue face
cuz POWER'll make him desperately take every last line like editors past they're due date
Ok
power'll drop blood, dead the red flag chase like i killed bulls
thinks a doctor that strictly delivers babies the way he doesnt skill-pull/scalpel
Forced
fake car accidents hit you cuz my blasts wreck dummies
sick to your stomach? when it comes to his skills it must be post total gastrectomy
Ok
your mission must be to end me, you wont be who stands
make ya spine fall in double objectives and still not drop a-cord-in two plan(s)
Ok
you drink straite from the bottle because you dont stick to shots
i must have some paranoid knuckles the way my punches seem to think alot
No
the battles not in you like the posting lobby, ima toast this hobby
POWER'll have him crawling into the closest grave like home sick zombies
Sick
in breakdowns i see dope under a bar but why? they werent weak throws
think'll take more shots in the neck then pornstars that take it all deepthroat
NO.
take your weak verses to school and never be unlockin your locker
think could be grandmas sayin "ive fallen and cant get up" and still not drop of his rocker
Corny

Vote: POWER

Basically a tossup, just liked power's best bar a little more and his ideas were more entertaining/creative.

[DOPE ART]

Power you have defeated me =)

good job, nice verse, yad yada.

[STRONGARM]

yeah.. late again but basically the same vote. Dope, you had some played lines.. flipped but played. And your first bar like Plot said actually was praise towards power.. if his skill is measured in time.. and he's a procrastinator.. that means he's SKILLED.. you should have used something that doesn't have a lot of time associated with it...

Juggernaut momentum this coward's nothing to stop art
If skill was measured in time then Power's a fucking Pop Tart..!

Power, again the skill is there but the wording is off as usual. Mostly because EVERYTHING you write is keyed and not proof read. You don't seem to care though so it's pointless to stress this ( even though I do about all your pieces..! 8-| ) .

[Plot]

4-0 Ko

[DOPE ART]

rub it on some more why dont you =(