HW2 Think vs. Crit

[Plot]

10-12 bars due Monday
Please check & match.

[DOPE ART]

check.

lets go 10...

and GOD DAMN @ being due Monday haha
ill get some 10 bars done before then hopefully.

[Criticize]

il be here.

10 sounds fair.

[DOPE ART]

10's not gonna happen for me man..
can we go 8 or something?

[Criticize]

how about 9.

[DOPE ART]

i dont think i can do 9, but ill try.

worst comes to worst ill throw a bar in thats like "i can rap, you are crap"

[Criticize]

lets do it.

[DOPE ART]

honestly, i either need an extension or for the bar limit to be dropped to 3...

schools been hitting hard man.

[Criticize]

you could always just give me the no-show, and spend your time on important matters such as school and life.

[country boy]

Originally Posted by DOPE ART

i dont think i can do 9, but ill try.

worst comes to worst ill throw a bar in thats like "i can rap, you are crap"

well i belive its a noshow and honestly you prolly would thro sum shyt in there like that

[DOPE ART]

* a shuffle is a way you move side to side, basketball players know what i mean. it's also shuffling cards, any one thats not an idiiot knows what i mean
*Mr. Jackson has the alias Legend
*Orbit is a type of chewing gum
*Count De Monte Cristo is a book...Coutn is a rich/royal person, but it's also COUNT like numbers

fuck around and you'll catch the 1-2 like snap back steelers...(football team)
Say im slow but I'll 'hit Crit on the shuffle' like Quik black jack dealers

lock it up and get ya door kicked with more shit than a whore spits
Hits connect and i'll put ya 'face on the canvas' like a personal portait

i'll blaze the stones, rant and rave with the bars that slay your throne
your punches couldn't hurt to-marrow/Tommorow if they grazed my bones

Crit hard!? he claims ride or die but yet he has me hand him the bus slip
get mouthy and my knuckles'll hit deface/the-face like vigilante vandalism justice

your a stupid bumsayin that you movin guns my punches give chop the bluest gums
say im not strong and i'll throw crit outa/out a orbit like i gave him chewing gum

im hot with fists though. i love girls, but i drop to whip hoes
Watch me put Chop 'down for the count' like he worshiped Monte Cristo

sick of this "punch shit" when Criticize just KEEPS smackin
Crit wanted to be among Legend(s) on the board so he beefed with C.Jackson

i woulda dropped 3 more but i got no time man, sorry.

[Criticize]

heres 10 mins brother.




your a known biter u reject! we know what you do,
iv got a receipe 4 disaster and the ingredients too/
il have your record resembling that kid tirants,
so ur gona see me 'gun ray' like sci fi violence/
so biting could work but then again you might stutter,
coz dopars playing a stero-type like chris tucker/
im a canabilistic playa im always devouring shorties,
u dropped more bars in the tag tourney- now thats a power shortage/
you stay on my dick im'ing me hanging of my nut sack,
il throw you in the firing line quicker than employee cutbacks/
your on track for a beating where death will slaughter and kiss you,
dopar thought sticking to his guns required super glu and his water pistol/
the illness i breath have fighting fists ready to punch flows,
comtemplating sucicide?
when i have you looking for the easy route(root) like drunk hoes/

[Mr. Ed™]

Dope..
fuck around and you'll catch the 1-2 like snap back steelers...(football team)
Say im slow but I'll 'hit Crit on the shuffle' like Quik black jack dealers
..ok..
lock it up and get ya door kicked with more shit than a whore spits
Hits connect and i'll put ya 'face on the canvas' like a personal portait
..neh..
i'll blaze the stones, rant and rave with the bars that slay your throne
your punches couldn't hurt to-marrow/Tommorow if they grazed my bones
..ight..
Crit hard!? he claims ride or die but yet he has me hand him the bus slip
get mouthy and my knuckles'll hit deface/the-face like vigilante vandalism justice
..neh..
your a stupid bumsayin that you movin guns my punches give chop the bluest gums
say im not strong and i'll throw crit outa/out a orbit like i gave him chewing gum
..decent..
im hot with fists though. i love girls, but i drop to whip hoes
Watch me put Chop 'down for the count' like he worshiped Monte Cristo
..played, decent flip tho..
sick of this "punch shit" when Criticize just KEEPS smackin
Crit wanted to be among Legend(s) on the board so he beefed with C.Jackson
..naw..

vs.

Crit..
your a known biter u reject! we know what you do,
iv got a receipe 4 disaster and the ingredients too/
..filled..
il have your record resembling that kid tirants,
so ur gona see me 'gun ray' like sci fi violence/
..ehh..
so biting could work but then again you might stutter,
coz dopars playing a stero-type like chris tucker/
..naw..
im a canabilistic playa im always devouring shorties,
u dropped more bars in the tag tourney- now thats a power shortage/
..naw..
you stay on my dick im'ing me hanging of my nut sack,
il throw you in the firing line quicker than employee cutbacks/
..decent..
your on track for a beating where death will slaughter and kiss you,
dopar thought sticking to his guns required super glu and his water pistol/
..lol..
the illness i breath have fighting fists ready to punch flows,
comtemplating sucicide?
when i have you looking for the easy route(root) like drunk hoes/
..i don't get it, sorry..

vote.. Dope Art..
good potential, jus stop with that "/" shit.. if you don't think we are gonna get a wordplay, jus think of something else IMO..

Crit ya styles decent but not good enough to compliment all those weak ass concepts, that's prolly why i didn't enjoy ya verse, like the power shortage line.. its kinda old so you would have to be a real creative type of person to flip it into a haymaker..

best battle ive seen..

[DOPE ART]

best battle ive seen..

really? ok then...

1-0 my way, uppin.

[country boy]

fuck around and you'll catch the 1-2 like snap back steelers...(football team)
Say im slow but I'll 'hit Crit on the shuffle' like Quik black jack dealers
nah
lock it up and get ya door kicked with more shit than a whore spits
Hits connect and i'll put ya 'face on the canvas' like a personal portait
ok
i'll blaze the stones, rant and rave with the bars that slay your throne
your punches couldn't hurt to-marrow/Tommorow if they grazed my bones
meh
Crit hard!? he claims ride or die but yet he has me hand him the bus slip
get mouthy and my knuckles'll hit deface/the-face like vigilante vandalism justice
ok
your a stupid bumsayin that you movin guns my punches give chop the bluest gums
say im not strong and i'll throw crit outa/out a orbit like i gave him chewing gum
meh
im hot with fists though. i love girls, but i drop to whip hoes
Watch me put Chop 'down for the count' like he worshiped Monte Cristo
lol but ok
sick of this "punch shit" when Criticize just KEEPS smackin
Crit wanted to be among Legend(s) on the board so he beefed with C.Jackson
lol tru but filler

vs

your a known biter u reject! we know what you do,
iv got a receipe 4 disaster and the ingredients too/
no
il have your record resembling that kid tirants,
so ur gona see me 'gun ray' like sci fi violence/
ok
so biting could work but then again you might stutter,
coz dopars playing a stero-type like chris tucker/
nah
im a canabilistic playa im always devouring shorties,
u dropped more bars in the tag tourney- now thats a power shortage/
lol ok
you stay on my dick im'ing me hanging of my nut sack,
il throw you in the firing line quicker than employee cutbacks/
meh
your on track for a beating where death will slaughter and kiss you,
dopar thought sticking to his guns required super glu and his water pistol/
lol ok
the illness i breath have fighting fists ready to punch flows,
comtemplating sucicide?
when i have you looking for the easy route(root) like drunk hoes/
nah

overall imma have to say tie, reason both came pretty weak it was about even in each cat so therefore my vote goes to both