Hw2 Crit Vs ((Power))

[Criticize]

due thur. checks in prior.

12 bars

norm rules apply

[Kill POWER]

a maid in the "it" section of a horror musuem the way i'll dust off this clown
when they say sky's the limit for acheivement crit must be the cloud
deading ya life, sendin the knifes into your wounds lame
POWER'll have crit feeding off I.C.U like baby food peek a boo games
showing the crimson tide with punches as blood flows from your nose
power'll have crit sticking to tying up small beef like rodeo shows
put a dead note on crits busy life i hope he got message waiting
crit'll be stuck missing punches professionally like black belt demonstrations
i dub bibles, you aint iller then your oponents your sub rivals
leave crits mind on delay on delay like bullfight subtitles.
im against queer eye for the straite guy so punches leave this homo tackled
POWER'll put pop rocks in ecstacy making your E go crackle/ego crackle
chops in hells kitchen slicing when the blade is rusty
leave crit empty handed worse then 2 marriages and 2 divorces simultaneously
your not enough to solve the puzzle your not even a skill clue
im a math problem you cant solve because this sum body will kill you.
the closest he gets to punching sick(green) is mitting lettuce
power'll leave crit elbow deep in death like necrofeliacs with a fisting fetish
i stab and kill, slice me up so you can take a slab of ill
powers punching crits blind side the way i take a jab at skill

[Criticize]

Check It out man heres that new fucking exclusive, world premiere.

let me explain INN depth is known as Nick (Vs Inn.)
P.O.W prisoner of war
Ayre...where your money goes when you die, im sure you kids seen the simpsons episode

When i take the cleaver 2 battle its horror forsure,
you best take a leaf out of my book like a florist brochure
i could beat you on my worst day when smashing utilities,
il leave this casual-tee in a package like fashion deliveries
fuck softening the blow heres the beating you strife,
u wont survive, once da "verses inn" nick could eat you alive
you spit garbage you weak fuck il deminish-ya,
and leave p.o.w in shame like iraqi prisoners
im tweaking it mild, my fists still keeping it wild,
il strangle you
until your "praying for ayre(air) like seeking a child/

power dun belong in the hws thats what im telling em,
shit il pick you a part and dismantle your skeleton
so on my ko list your staying accountible man,
il beat power in his prime-- no mathamatical pun
tearing this bitch with arrows a prestigous assult,
afta this bout il "send power to god" like a "religious cult"
your lifes in danger son i suggest you seek caution,
power thought Steakin his claim on the title was a meat auction
when the voters come in your runs over this sentance is true,
coz your "outlooks bleak" like the memphasis view


heres 10 bars, im getting it back you heard.
(in parts this week, wait til next week.)

[Thesis-]

POWER!

a maid in the "it" section of a horror musuem the way i'll dust off this clown
when they say sky's the limit for acheivement crit must be the cloud
~umm you didnt really diss him...thats a pretty high acheivment out my window right now
deading ya life, sendin the knifes into your wounds lame
POWER'll have crit feeding off I.C.U like baby food peek a boo games
~lol nice
showing the crimson tide with punches as blood flows from your nose
power'll have crit sticking to tying up small beef like rodeo shows
~nice
put a dead note on crits busy life i hope he got message waiting
crit'll be stuck missing punches professionally like black belt demonstrations
~dope
i dub bibles, you aint iller then your oponents your sub rivals
leave crits mind on delay on delay like bullfight subtitles.
~ehh?no
im against queer eye for the straite guy so punches leave this homo tackled
POWER'll put pop rocks in ecstacy making your E go crackle/ego crackle
~damn!nice wordplay
chops in hells kitchen slicing when the blade is rusty
leave crit empty handed worse then 2 marriages and 2 divorces simultaneously
~no you forced that lil to much
your not enough to solve the puzzle your not even a skill clue
im a math problem you cant solve because this sum body will kill you.
~good
the closest he gets to punching sick(green) is mitting lettuce
power'll leave crit elbow deep in death like necrofeliacs with a fisting fetish
~DAMN!
i stab and kill, slice me up so you can take a slab of ill
powers punching crits blind side the way i take a jab at skill
~nice

CRIT!

When i take the cleaver 2 battle its horror forsure,
you best take a leaf out of my book like a florist brochure
~nice
i could beat you on my worst day when smashing utilities,
il leave this casual-tee in a package like fashion deliveries
~decent
fuck softening the blow heres the beating you strife,
u wont survive, once da "verses inn" nick could eat you alive
~dope!
you spit garbage you weak fuck il deminish-ya,
and leave p.o.w in shame like iraqi prisoners
~good
im tweaking it mild, my fists still keeping it wild,
il strangle you
until your "praying for ayre(air) like seeking a child/
~sick!but i thought it's spelled heir?

power dun belong in the hws thats what im telling em,
shit il pick you a part and dismantle your skeleton
~ok
so on my ko list your staying accountible man,
il beat power in his prime-- no mathamatical pun
~blah!
tearing this bitch with arrows a prestigous assult,
afta this bout il "send power to god" like a "religious cult"
~nice!
your lifes in danger son i suggest you seek caution,
power thought Steakin his claim on the title was a meat auction
~SHIMMY!
when the voters come in your runs over this sentance is true,
coz your "outlooks bleak" like the memphasis view
~*dies*~nice bar

Overall-I think that crit took this one he had more punches and was reaaaal consistant
Tough battle though i didnt know POWER was good like that

V-Crit

return the fav on my and pharms battle

[Noggah]

POWER


a maid in the "it" section of a horror musuem the way i'll dust off this clown
when they say sky's the limit for acheivement crit must be the cloud

first is ok...second is uppin him...

deading ya life, sendin the knifes into your wounds lame
POWER'll have crit feeding off I.C.U like baby food peek a boo games

feeding off intensive care unit??? doesnt make sense, but was a good concept...

showing the crimson tide with punches as blood flows from your nose
power'll have crit sticking to tying up small beef like rodeo shows

ok...

put a dead note on crits busy life i hope he got message waiting
crit'll be stuck missing punches professionally like black belt demonstrations

iight

i dub bibles, you aint iller then your oponents your sub rivals
leave crits mind on delay on delay like bullfight subtitles.

i think u mean bullfight announcers??? anyways, wasnt really that hard hitting...


im against queer eye for the straite guy so punches leave this homo tackled
POWER'll put pop rocks in ecstacy making your E go crackle/ego crackle

haha, nice

chops in hells kitchen slicing when the blade is rusty
leave crit empty handed worse then 2 marriages and 2 divorces simultaneously

not really feelin it...

your not enough to solve the puzzle your not even a skill clue
im a math problem you cant solve because this sum body will kill you.

eh...

the closest he gets to punching sick(green) is mitting lettuce
power'll leave crit elbow deep in death like necrofeliacs with a fisting fetish**

hahahah, this was sick nazty and all of the above...

i stab and kill, slice me up so you can take a slab of ill
powers punching crits blind side the way i take a jab at skill

ok, shouldve ended it harder...







CRITICIZE

When i take the cleaver 2 battle its horror forsure,
you best take a leaf out of my book like a florist brochure

nice...

i could beat you on my worst day when smashing utilities,
il leave this casual-tee in a package like fashion deliveries

played...

fuck softening the blow heres the beating you strife,
u wont survive, once da "verses inn" nick could eat you alive

this was iight, but has he actually battled inn depth n lost?? woulda made this punch better...

you spit garbage you weak fuck il deminish-ya,
and leave p.o.w in shame like iraqi prisoners

is this not played yet?? cause it was like the first kind of punch i thought of when seein powers name... nice i guess...

im tweaking it mild, my fists still keeping it wild,
il strangle you
until your "praying for ayre(air) like seeking a child/

nice...

power dun belong in the hws thats what im telling em,
shit il pick you a part and dismantle your skeleton

filler...

so on my ko list your staying accountible man,
il beat power in his prime-- no mathamatical pun

doesnt rhyme... ok punch i suppose... nothing major...

tearing this bitch with arrows a prestigous assult,
afta this bout il "send power to god" like a "religious cult"**

haha, nice...

your lifes in danger son i suggest you seek caution,
power thought Steakin his claim on the title was a meat auction

played...

when the voters come in your runs over this sentance is true,
coz your "outlooks bleak" like the memphasis view

nice...





Overall... i think this battle was pretty even...id say both only had about one REALLY hard hitting punch with the ** by it, but in the long run, i think Power came a little more consistant and slightly more original...

Vote = power

[Plot]

uppp

[J.Night]

POWER

a maid in the "it" section of a horror musuem the way i'll dust off this clown
when they say sky's the limit for acheivement crit must be the cloud
^^^
OK

deading ya life, sendin the knifes into your wounds lame
POWER'll have crit feeding off I.C.U like baby food peek a boo games
^^^
OK

showing the crimson tide with punches as blood flows from your nose
power'll have crit sticking to tying up small beef like rodeo shows
^^^
OK

put a dead note on crits busy life i hope he got message waiting
crit'll be stuck missing punches professionally like black belt demonstrations
^^^
OK

i dub bibles, you aint iller then your oponents your sub rivals
leave crits mind on delay on delay like bullfight subtitles.
^^^
ok

im against queer eye for the straite guy so punches leave this homo tackled
POWER'll put pop rocks in ecstacy making your E go crackle/ego crackle
^^^
1st wasn't coo. 2nd was creative

chops in hells kitchen slicing when the blade is rusty
leave crit empty handed worse then 2 marriages and 2 divorces simultaneously
^^^
off rhyme

your not enough to solve the puzzle your not even a skill clue
im a math problem you cant solve because this sum body will kill you.
^^^
2nd was coo

the closest he gets to punching sick(green) is mitting lettuce
power'll leave crit elbow deep in death like necrofeliacs with a fisting fetish
^^^
haha

i stab and kill, slice me up so you can take a slab of ill
powers punching crits blind side the way i take a jab at skill
^^^
ok. decent verse. most punches were average. 2 good ones i enjoyed

crit

When i take the cleaver 2 battle its horror forsure,
you best take a leaf out of my book like a florist brochure
^^^
ok

i could beat you on my worst day when smashing utilities,
il leave this casual-tee in a package like fashion deliveries
^^^
2nd was coo

fuck softening the blow heres the beating you strife,
u wont survive, once da "verses inn" nick could eat you alive
^^^
ok W/P

you spit garbage you weak fuck il deminish-ya,
and leave p.o.w in shame like iraqi prisoners
^^^
I already used a P.O.W. punch against him recently. not cool

im tweaking it mild, my fists still keeping it wild,
il strangle you
until your "praying for ayre(air) like seeking a child/
^^^
boasting


power dun belong in the hws thats what im telling em,
shit il pick you a part and dismantle your skeleton
^^^
filler

so on my ko list your staying accountible man,
il beat power in his prime-- no mathamatical pun
tearing this bitch with arrows a prestigous assult,
afta this bout il "send power to god" like a "religious cult"
^^^
last line was ok at best. rest was filler

your lifes in danger son i suggest you seek caution,
power thought Steakin his claim on the title was a meat auction
^^^
OK

when the voters come in your runs over this sentance is true,
coz your "outlooks bleak" like the memphasis view
^^^
ok

your verse was ok crit. alot of filler lines. some okay ones. had more bragging in it

v/ power.

[Criticize]

^ that cant count, your breakdown shows you dont know the difference between bragging and a punch.

[1/2 Wit It]

POWER:
a maid in the "it" section of a horror musuem the way i'll dust off this clown
when they say sky's the limit for acheivement crit must be the cloud
pretty clever opener...
deading ya life, sendin the knifes into your wounds lame
POWER'll have crit feeding off I.C.U like baby food peek a boo games
haha..very slick punch..
showing the crimson tide with punches as blood flows from your nose
power'll have crit sticking to tying up small beef like rodeo shows
not bad, man...very hot start so far..
put a dead note on crits busy life i hope he got message waiting
crit'll be stuck missing punches professionally like black belt demonstrations
eh, this was decent..
i dub bibles, you aint iller then your oponents your sub rivals
leave crits mind on delay on delay like bullfight subtitles.
nah, not feeling this..
im against queer eye for the straite guy so punches leave this homo tackled
POWER'll put pop rocks in ecstacy making your E go crackle/ego crackle
this was decent at best...
chops in hells kitchen slicing when the blade is rusty
leave crit empty handed worse then 2 marriages and 2 divorces simultaneously
seemed a bit force..decent..
your not enough to solve the puzzle your not even a skill clue
im a math problem you cant solve because this sum body will kill you.
your weakest bar so far..
the closest he gets to punching sick(green) is mitting lettuce
power'll leave crit elbow deep in death like necrofeliacs with a fisting fetish
creative..good bar..
i stab and kill, slice me up so you can take a slab of ill
powers punching crits blind side the way i take a jab at skill
nah..weak closer..

Criticize:
When i take the cleaver 2 battle its horror forsure,
you best take a leaf out of my book like a florist brochure
really creative..nice opener..
i could beat you on my worst day when smashing utilities,
il leave this casual-tee in a package like fashion deliveries
played concept..seen too many similar punches..
fuck softening the blow heres the beating you strife,
u wont survive, once da "verses inn" nick could eat you alive
not feeling this one..seemed kinda forced..
you spit garbage you weak fuck il deminish-ya,
and leave p.o.w in shame like iraqi prisoners
first line was wack..second line was decent..
im tweaking it mild, my fists still keeping it wild,
il strangle you
until your "praying for ayre(air) like seeking a child/
ha..that was pretty nice..

power dun belong in the hws thats what im telling em,
shit il pick you a part and dismantle your skeleton
no..not feeling this..
so on my ko list your staying accountible man,
il beat power in his prime-- no mathamatical pun
doesn't really rhyme...weak punch anyways..
tearing this bitch with arrows a prestigous assult,
afta this bout il "send power to god" like a "religious cult"
lol..nicest bar in your verse in my opinion..
your lifes in danger son i suggest you seek caution,
power thought Steakin his claim on the title was a meat auction
damn..that's also nice..
when the voters come in your runs over this sentance is true,
coz your "outlooks bleak" like the memphasis view
cool closer..

Overall Vote: Tie I'm voting tie..My reason is...The way I saw it, Power came on strong at the beginning of his verse, with tight punches n whatnot..Then fell off towards the end of his verse with a few forced punches and bad concepts..While Criticize had a good opener, but for the most part, his beginning was a bit weak, with played punches n whatnot..But his verse came on strong towards the end..I think like the last 3 bars were dope..So yeah, I vote Tie..take it or leave it.

[Pembroke]

Voting later, don't close it.

[Aero]

Power

a maid in the "it" section of a horror musuem the way i'll dust off this clown
when they say sky's the limit for acheivement crit must be the cloud
^ Nahh.. That means he's the max
deading ya life, sendin the knifes into your wounds lame
POWER'll have crit feeding off I.C.U like baby food peek a boo games
^ this was good.. I think it could've been worded to make it better
showing the crimson tide with punches as blood flows from your nose
power'll have crit sticking to tying up small beef like rodeo shows
^ beef wp is playyyyed
put a dead note on crits busy life i hope he got message waiting
crit'll be stuck missing punches professionally like black belt demonstrations
^okay
i dub bibles, you aint iller then your oponents your sub rivals
leave crits mind on delay on delay like bullfight subtitles.
^setup line not good. lol @ on delay, on delay..
im against queer eye for the straite guy so punches leave this homo tackled
POWER'll put pop rocks in ecstacy making your E go crackle/ego crackle
^ basic wp
chops in hells kitchen slicing when the blade is rusty
leave crit empty handed worse then 2 marriages and 2 divorces simultaneously
^ I'll pretend this didn't happen
your not enough to solve the puzzle your not even a skill clue
im a math problem you cant solve because this sum body will kill you.
^ math/sum= played & you didn't flip it well
the closest he gets to punching sick(green) is mitting lettuce
power'll leave crit elbow deep in death like necrofeliacs with a fisting fetish
^ lol @ the imagery.. this was a hot line
i stab and kill, slice me up so you can take a slab of ill
powers punching crits blind side the way i take a jab at skill
^okay

You like saying "Power will do this" sound like the Incredible Hulk "POWER SMASH!"

Criticize

When i take the cleaver 2 battle its horror forsure,
you best take a leaf out of my book like a florist brochure
^ basic idiom play.. coo
i could beat you on my worst day when smashing utilities,
il leave this casual-tee in a package like fashion deliveries
^ casual-tee wp is played
fuck softening the blow heres the beating you strife,
u wont survive, once da "verses inn" nick could eat you alive
^ good idea
you spit garbage you weak fuck il deminish-ya,
and leave p.o.w in shame like iraqi prisoners
^ decent
im tweaking it mild, my fists still keeping it wild,
il strangle you
until your "praying for ayre(air) like seeking a child/
^ the spelling on heir was horrible.. punch was ok

power dun belong in the hws thats what im telling em,
shit il pick you a part and dismantle your skeleton
^...
so on my ko list your staying accountible man,
il beat power in his prime-- no mathamatical pun
^ didn't rhyme.. good idea tho
tearing this bitch with arrows a prestigous assult,
afta this bout il "send power to god" like a "religious cult"
^okay
your lifes in danger son i suggest you seek caution,
power thought Steakin his claim on the title was a meat auction
^ decent
when the voters come in your runs over this sentance is true,
coz your "outlooks bleak" like the memphasis view
^ bleek/memhis wp is playyed

Delivery: Tie ( Decent @ both ends.. Setup lines were okay @ best)
Personals: Criticize
Punches: Power
Creativity: Tie
Consistency: Criticize
Originality: Power (both had a lot of played stuff tho)

Rationale: There's no real clear winner. Both had their share of played stuff and a few decent lines. I'm going to have to go w/ Power since he took the punches category..

[GaZooN]

a maid in the "it" section of a horror musuem the way i'll dust off this clown
when they say sky's the limit for acheivement crit must be the cloud
-meh
deading ya life, sendin the knifes into your wounds lame
POWER'll have crit feeding off I.C.U like baby food peek a boo games
-dope
showing the crimson tide with punches as blood flows from your nose
power'll have crit sticking to tying up small beef like rodeo shows
-decent
put a dead note on crits busy life i hope he got message waiting
crit'll be stuck missing punches professionally like black belt demonstrations
-forced rhyme, meh line
i dub bibles, you aint iller then your oponents your sub rivals
leave crits mind on delay on delay like bullfight subtitles.
-wAk
im against queer eye for the straite guy so punches leave this homo tackled
POWER'll put pop rocks in ecstacy making your E go crackle/ego crackle
-weAk
chops in hells kitchen slicing when the blade is rusty
leave crit empty handed worse then 2 marriages and 2 divorces simultaneously
-wow, that wAS reaLly forced.
your not enough to solve the puzzle your not even a skill clue
im a math problem you cant solve because this sum body will kill you.
-plAyed AS hell
the closest he gets to punching sick(green) is mitting lettuce
power'll leave crit elbow deep in death like necrofeliacs with a fisting fetish
-ill
i stab and kill, slice me up so you can take a slab of ill
powers punching crits blind side the way i take a jab at skill
-weAk




When i take the cleaver 2 battle its horror forsure,
you best take a leaf out of my book like a florist brochure
-decent
i could beat you on my worst day when smashing utilities,
il leave this casual-tee in a package like fashion deliveries
-decent
fuck softening the blow heres the beating you strife,
u wont survive, once da "verses inn" nick could eat you alive
-decent
you spit garbage you weak fuck il deminish-ya,
and leave p.o.w in shame like iraqi prisoners
-lol
im tweaking it mild, my fists still keeping it wild,
il strangle you
until your "praying for ayre(air) like seeking a child/
-eh.. decent
power dun belong in the hws thats what im telling em,
shit il pick you a part and dismantle your skeleton
-filler
so on my ko list your staying accountible man,
il beat power in his prime-- no mathamatical pun
-no rhyme.
tearing this bitch with arrows a prestigous assult,
afta this bout il "send power to god" like a "religious cult"
-wAk
your lifes in danger son i suggest you seek caution,
power thought Steakin his claim on the title was a meat auction
-weak
when the voters come in your runs over this sentance is true,
coz your "outlooks bleak" like the memphasis view
-plAyed


v- power.. had stronger lines.

[Criticize]

3-1

1 more?

[Phonix]

Power:

a maid in the "it" section of a horror musuem the way i'll dust off this clown
when they say sky's the limit for acheivement crit must be the cloud

Worded completly wrong lol

deading ya life, sendin the knifes into your wounds lame
POWER'll have crit feeding off I.C.U like baby food peek a boo games

I.C.U concept was Sick..thought it was slightly hindered from the addition of "baby food" into it..wasnt as fluid of transaction as it could of been. Still would of worked if u had just said peek a boo games because then there's the link between the game gives feedback and that could of been ur feeding off association.

showing the crimson tide with punches as blood flows from your nose
power'll have crit sticking to tying up small beef like rodeo shows

Played

put a dead note on crits busy life i hope he got message waiting
crit'll be stuck missing punches professionally like black belt demonstrations

Hah..i thought that was pretty hot.

i dub bibles, you aint iller then your oponents your sub rivals
leave crits mind on delay on delay like bullfight subtitles.

haha

im against queer eye for the straite guy so punches leave this homo tackled
POWER'll put pop rocks in ecstacy making your E go crackle/ego crackle

E-go was alright but the fact all drug lines are played brought something away from it. E/Ecstasy punches are used all the time and it makes it impossible to have a fresh flip on it because E used in that way will always hinder an idea.

chops in hells kitchen slicing when the blade is rusty
leave crit empty handed worse then 2 marriages and 2 divorces simultaneously

Lol you have an essence of homosexuality in your verses sometimes. Not feeling.

your not enough to solve the puzzle your not even a skill clue
im a math problem you cant solve because this sum body will kill you.

Played

the closest he gets to punching sick(green) is mitting lettuce
power'll leave crit elbow deep in death like necrofeliacs with a fisting fetish

Dope..reminded me of your home sick zombies punch for some reason.

i stab and kill, slice me up so you can take a slab of ill
powers punching crits blind side the way i take a jab at skill

Not feeling.


Criticize:

When i take the cleaver 2 battle its horror forsure,
you best take a leaf out of my book like a florist brochure

Decent opener.

i could beat you on my worst day when smashing utilities,
il leave this casual-tee in a package like fashion deliveries

Plotter said something similar to this around a month ago. On that basis i'm saying the concept is now played.

fuck softening the blow heres the beating you strife,
u wont survive, once da "verses inn" nick could eat you alive

Ehh basic on behalf of playing off A. Nicks alias and B. Using members names to help you punch.

you spit garbage you weak fuck il deminish-ya,
and leave p.o.w in shame like iraqi prisoners

Seen P.o.w nameplays before..decent flip.

im tweaking it mild, my fists still keeping it wild,
il strangle you
until your "praying for ayre(air) like seeking a child/

Dope.

power dun belong in the hws thats what im telling em,
shit il pick you a part and dismantle your skeleton

Dismantle your skeleton ruined it...could of been sick imo..

"i'll pick you a part like cast agencies"

so on my ko list your staying accountible man,
il beat power in his prime-- no mathamatical pun

Niceish

tearing this bitch with arrows a prestigous assult,
afta this bout il "send power to god" like a "religious cult"

Blah basic nameplay..punch was ok i suppose..why do you base most of your verse around nameplays or alot of it anyway. I dunno it seems that stage has passed now..get some real personals in fam..

your lifes in danger son i suggest you seek caution,
power thought Steakin his claim on the title was a meat auction

Played..flip was alright.

when the voters come in your runs over this sentance is true,
coz your "outlooks bleak" like the memphasis view

Played.


Vote - POWER