Hw1 ((Think)) Vs Mr Ed

[Criticize]

due thur. checks in prior.

12 bars

norm rules apply

[DOPE ART]

im glad as shit u ddint set this due today.
my birthday weekend has been fucking insane.

anywho, check.

[Mr. Ed™]

yerp..

yo ya fuckin location says Rapflava.. LMAAOOO..



I guess it's time to pound the SHIT outta the next geek..
..Oh, wait..
If i do that you then won't have any lines for next week..
This match-up's really embarrassin, iddn't it..? Funny too..
How this shit suits me perfect, but imma bury YOU in it..
Dis dude swore he wuz'a warrior - that's ironic, but trife..
'Cuz i ain't never Xena' more bitchy style in my life..
/\I gotcha shit down to a tea..
Along wit a kettle and water..
To help ya ass build up some steam..
I'm tellin him losin is not to be fun..
But boy ya head is hard as a brick..
So imma hafta chop it like one..
I kno you never got niggas hatin on you..
Ya flows a'broad..
..N maybe that's why the shit gets away from you too..
Is Dope Really that stong - ha, not even wit a fluke..
'Cuz even if we band together i could beat him wit a flute..
Beatin Eddie's tougher than my new black shoes..
/\That's the way the ball bounces..
..In other words, i'll teabag you..
I lay wood like carpenters on ya female..
Are things still fuzzy..?
..Well you can watch ME use HER as I hammer out the details..
For those who criticize my flow - kiss my ass..
But this week it is choppy - by the way i cut him in half..
We can do a collab that's clever..
..I'll spread ya image 'til it resembles a collage..
..Now that's doin Art together..
You never Think - so that second name seems to makes no sense..
But fuck it..
Change that shit to Thought - 'cuz your now past tense you fuckin faggot..

[DOPE ART]

*speaking "with a forked tounge" is the same as lying.

spit wack, i'll deny you then to the point where u cant try to grin
run ya mouth and My 'stabs' give u the 'forked tounge' like lying men

Hmmmm.....

i'll piss on ya decaying body, put up a toast in ya hearst
when i say 'youll drop i dont mean posting your verse
i'll stone you bastids. take all ya bitche and bone there asses
The only time you 'Special (,) Ed' is if your taking slower classes
i discard lames that never obtained a hard flame to scare names
you couldnt come out as 'numero UNO' if you was playing card games
call me a vigilante god, i murder siners. you never where the winner
watch me 'rip your heart out ya ass' like preparing turkey dinners
ya dads a fucking whack. "father like son" kid u livin a statement
'you fall to the bottom of the pack' just as if ciggerettes breakin
you can handle the truth? please, i let the fables rock crews
really a dealer? ill slap u off 'D-Block/The Block like Jada dropped u
i neglect you haters, i see whay u mad. thinkin u a rejected saviour
start a lable and ill make u see more red ink/red inc. then correctin papers
fuck what you write kid, i crumble pens. u really aint ready to rumble friend
u spaced out, then my punches bring you 'down to earth' like humble men
i'll rip the terrors. fuck if you got semis and shit, i'll just clip then flare ya.
when asked who's the best you'll never hear " 'edit'/Ed-It" unless fixing errors
ilike u had dirt toes the way i'll quickly disown ya feat/feet(s).
face the fucking facts, you 'stink to high heaven' like homeless preists

Once more

i say im sick. you too/U2 cause u 'stuck in the moment'
my punches 'break ya verse down bar by bar' like i was votin

[Plot]

ED
I guess it's time to pound the SHIT outta the next geek..
..Oh, wait..
If i do that you then won't have any lines for next week..
~Ehh. wasnt feeling the rhyme, (next & next) & didnt punch really well at all.
This match-up's really embarrassin, iddn't it..? Funny too..
How this shit suits me perfect, but imma bury YOU in it..
~nah, wording/structure/punch is all fucked up to me.
Dis dude swore he wuz'a warrior - that's ironic, but trife..
'Cuz i ain't never Xena' more bitchy style in my life..
~meh, pretty weak wp
/\I gotcha shit down to a tea..
Along wit a kettle and water..To help ya ass build up some steam..
~?? how this a witty punch???
I'm tellin him losin is not to be fun..
But boy ya head is hard as a brick..So imma hafta chop it like one..
~chop a brick?
I kno you never got niggas hatin on you..
Ya flows a'broad....N maybe that's why the shit gets away from you too..
~ok. still not liking the structure
Is Dope Really that stong - ha, not even wit a fluke..
'Cuz even if we band together i could beat him wit a flute..
~ehhh, needed a bigger push
Beatin Eddie's tougher than my new black shoes..
/\That's the way the ball bounces....In other words, i'll teabag you..
~lol, gay but funny
I lay wood like carpenters on ya female..
Are things still fuzzy..?..Well you can watch ME use HER as I hammer out the details..
~??
For those who criticize my flow - kiss my ass..
But this week it is choppy - by the way i cut him in half..
~nah
We can do a collab that's clever..
..I'll spread ya image 'til it resembles a collage....Now that's doin Art together..
~bad np
You never Think - so that second name seems to makes no sense..
But fuck it..Change that shit to Thought - 'cuz your now past tense you fuckin faggot..
~blah
~very dissapointing.

RAY
spit wack, i'll deny you then to the point where u cant try to grin
run ya mouth and My 'stabs' give u the 'forked tounge' like lying men
~ehh
i'll piss on ya decaying body, put up a toast in ya hearst
when i say 'youll drop i dont mean posting your verse
~yeah, get at him already!
i'll stone you bastids. take all ya bitche and bone there asses
The only time you 'Special (,) Ed' is if your taking slower classes
~NICE!!!!!! (i personally wouldnt have used an 'if'' in the punch)
i discard lames that never obtained a hard flame to scare names
you couldnt come out as 'numero UNO' if you was playing card games
~meh, needed a push, not gonna prop ya multies either
call me a vigilante god, i murder siners. you never where the winner
watch me 'rip your heart out ya ass' like preparing turkey dinners
~heh
ya dads a fucking whack. "father like son" kid u livin a statement
'you fall to the bottom of the pack' just as if ciggerettes breakin
~good concept, bad wording, broken cigarettes would have been the goer
you can handle the truth? please, i let the fables rock crews
really a dealer? ill slap u off 'D-Block/The Block like Jada dropped u
~heh, played
i neglect you haters, i see whay u mad. thinkin u a rejected saviour
start a lable and ill make u see more red ink/red inc. then correctin papers
~ehh, this coulda been good. I dont quite understand it tho
fuck what you write kid, i crumble pens. u really aint ready to rumble friend
u spaced out, then my punches bring you 'down to earth' like humble men
~played
i'll rip the terrors. fuck if you got semis and shit, i'll just clip then flare ya.
when asked who's the best you'll never hear " 'edit'/Ed-It" unless fixing errors
~ehh, ok np
ilike u had dirt toes the way i'll quickly disown ya feat/feet(s).
face the fucking facts, you 'stink to high heaven' like homeless preists
~heh, ok
i say im sick. you too/U2 cause u 'stuck in the moment'
my punches 'break ya verse down bar by bar' like i was votin
~played out.

V-...sigh. RAY

[country boy]

nothing

vs

i'll stone you bastids. take all ya bitche and bone there asses
The only time you 'Special (,) Ed' is if your taking slower classes

ya dads a fucking whack. "father like son" kid u livin a statement
'you fall to the bottom of the pack' just as if ciggerettes breakin

didnt feel like brekin down bars right now, ed came weak as fuq plain is that, dope had some ok ish nothing really spectacular but enough for a win, that first bar i quoted woulda prolly been enough for a win

[Ruck]

no idea why ed is hw.

[Noggah]

call me a vigilante god, i murder siners. you never where the winner
watch me 'rip your heart out ya ass' like preparing turkey dinners

lol


well, dopeart pretty much got this...he was more consistant with better punches...ed, u had some okay stuff, but nothin that was really hard hittin, and those short bars really killed u in this battle...

anyways, vote = dopeart, overall better verse...

[DOPE ART]

wow. i get a title shot. this does indeed please me.

good battle Ed.