HW Plot(8-2) vs Con(1-0)

[Con]

8-10

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[Plot]

Im just goin 8 man

[Con]

k...

drop tomorro plotty

[Plot]

Con
Turn to shit everything U come in contact with, Cons old-hat..
Your battle styles more played to death than Mortal-Kombat!
& if your steppin up to the plate, you’re just a fool testin ya fate..
Ive more doubts in Confucius, than Buddists questoning their faith. (Cons Futures)
Old vet tryin to save a lost rep, but these days your fake at best..
Coz In text battles, Cons become more of a sorry-fuck than make-up sex.
Watch as U fastly plummet, my knifeplay’ll see you smartly punished
Rip up your gullet, coz the quickest way to a mans hearts thru his stomach.
Crippling your keys believe it, crampin your steez like finger seizures..
What U even doin here? Did Shredd punch U so hard your brains amnesia-d?*
Beat U in our last meet & now Ur battling me after a no-show last week?
The only bench-marks Cons been making lately are from his sweaty arse-cheeks.
We aint even on the same page, stupid bastard’ll get beaten shame-faced..
Havin a crack at my title? Closest U’ll come’ll be some shitty name-plays.
So fall back amateur, or Plot’ll flip all your styles back atcha..
This burn showing Congo up in flames like Bushfires across Africa.

*Got got pinkslipt to Shredd uner an alias.

[Con]

forget elimination? fine, knowin plot, skillz built on bad intuition
coz his personals got 'more empty stories' than buildings before demolition
dont lemme spoil it, watchu cookin P? well, kno my kicks'll boil it
leave plot 'bleeding towards the head' like women wit leaks rushin da toilet
kids on broke..failure to survive when his punches r most jokes..
win? could join a Carrera giveaway n Plot wouldnt gain a 'portion/porche-on vote'
got force? Plot only poaches, while spinals train effex wen i blow chests
im makin ya cranium 'collapse/call-laps harsher' than angry track coaches
fuckin da art? nah, these aussies lovin each other keepin each shard
fags, u'd think hes a cardiologist way Plots 'keep Luke-in/look-in his heart'
kid,da roads far, so ready ya writtens for these hoard scars
wit me, Plot'll 'run out of freestyle' like occupyin burning ford cars
lethal injections, take my name in vain? just watch my fists objections
fuc rennovating nursing homes..ill have ya 'center broken into sections!'
my knucks keep building traction so dont think ill miss action
coz bashes left ur 'feeling hurts/hertz' witout da car rental satisfaction

[DaVe E BuRnOuT]

Turn to shit everything U come in contact with, Cons old-hat..
Your battle styles more played to death than Mortal-Kombat!ehh
& if your steppin up to the plate, you’re just a fool testin ya fate..
Ive more doubts in Confucius, than Buddists questoning their faith. (Cons Futures)hot
Old vet tryin to save a lost rep, but these days your fake at best..
Coz In text battles, Cons become more of a sorry-fuck than make-up sex.ohhh lol
Watch as U fastly plummet, my knifeplay’ll see you smartly punished
Rip up your gullet, coz the quickest way to a mans hearts thru his stomach.lol
Crippling your keys believe it, crampin your steez like finger seizures..
What U even doin here? Did Shredd punch U so hard your brains amnesia-d?*ehh
Beat U in our last meet & now Ur battling me after a no-show last week?
The only bench-marks Cons been making lately are from his sweaty arse-cheeks.ehh it was decent
We aint even on the same page, stupid bastard’ll get beaten shame-faced..
Havin a crack at my title? Closest U’ll come’ll be some shitty name-plays.lol
So fall back amateur, or Plot’ll flip all your styles back atcha..
This burn showing Congo up in flames like Bushfires across Africa.ehh


I Like Some bars others i felt were forced n not as good....the make up sex line was prolly the best 1

forget elimination? fine, knowin plot, skillz built on bad intuition
coz his personals got 'more empty stories' than buildings before demolition--Ohh shit
dont lemme spoil it, watchu cookin P? well, kno my kicks'll boil it
leave plot 'bleeding towards the head' like women wit leaks rushin da toilet..lol
kids on broke..failure to survive when his punches r most jokes..
win? could join a Carrera giveaway n Plot wouldnt gain a 'portion/porche-on vote'..nice
got force? Plot only poaches, while spinals train effex wen i blow chests
im makin ya cranium 'collapse/call-laps harsher' than angry track coaches..lol
fuckin da art? nah, these aussies lovin each other keepin each shard
fags, u'd think hes a cardiologist way Plots 'keep Luke-in/look-in his heart' decent
kid,da roads far, so ready ya writtens for these hoard scars
wit me, Plot'll 'run out of freestyle' like occupyin burning ford cars..ehhh
lethal injections, take my name in vain? just watch my fists objections
fuc rennovating nursing homes..ill have ya 'center broken into sections!'lol
my knucks keep building traction so dont think ill miss action
coz bashes left ur 'feeling hurts/hertz' witout da car rental satisfaction..LOL


Con This shit was nice..Only 1 punch that sounded alil fored..but everything else was pritty creative..Word...

Plot u came nice..I was loven the multis but con had the same there..but his punches were just better to me...So vote con..good shit fellas

[Fluent]

Plot

Turn to shit everything U come in contact with, Cons old-hat..
Your battle styles more played to death than Mortal-Kombat!
Decent, kinda played but I like the flip
& if your steppin up to the plate, you’re just a fool testin ya fate..
Ive more doubts in Confucius, than Buddists questoning their faith. (Cons Futures)
Good idea but too forced, it's more like Con-Few-Shus
Old vet tryin to save a lost rep, but these days your fake at best..
Coz In text battles, Cons become more of a sorry-fuck than make-up sex.
Kinda basic
Watch as U fastly plummet, my knifeplay’ll see you smartly punished
Rip up your gullet, coz the quickest way to a mans hearts thru his stomach.
Didn't like it
Crippling your keys believe it, crampin your steez like finger seizures..
What U even doin here? Did Shredd punch U so hard your brains amnesia-d?*
Good
Beat U in our last meet & now Ur battling me after a no-show last week?
The only bench-marks Cons been making lately are from his sweaty arse-cheeks.
Gay
We aint even on the same page, stupid bastard’ll get beaten shame-faced..
Havin a crack at my title? Closest U’ll come’ll be some shitty name-plays.
Seems like it would've been done but I've never heard it
So fall back amateur, or Plot’ll flip all your styles back atcha..
This burn showing Congo up in flames like Bushfires across Africa.
Awesome nameplay, best one you've done I think

Con

forget elimination? fine, knowin plot, skillz built on bad intuition
coz his personals got 'more empty stories' than buildings before demolition
Good
dont lemme spoil it, watchu cookin P? well, kno my kicks'll boil it
leave plot 'bleeding towards the head' like women wit leaks rushin da toilet
Ehh
kids on broke..failure to survive when his punches r most jokes..
win? could join a Carrera giveaway n Plot wouldnt gain a 'portion/porche-on vote'
A giveaway isn't really a vote, more like someone drawn out of a hat, decent idea
got force? Plot only poaches, while spinals train effex wen i blow chests
im makin ya cranium 'collapse/call-laps harsher' than angry track coaches
Good
fuckin da art? nah, these aussies lovin each other keepin each shard
fags, u'd think hes a cardiologist way Plots 'keep Luke-in/look-in his heart'
Forced
kid,da roads far, so ready ya writtens for these hoard scars
wit me, Plot'll 'run out of freestyle' like occupyin burning ford cars
Escaping would've made more sense than occupying, this could've used a little tweaking with the wording
lethal injections, take my name in vain? just watch my fists objections
fuc rennovating nursing homes..ill have ya 'center broken into sections!'
Didn't like it
my knucks keep building traction so dont think ill miss action
coz bashes left ur 'feeling hurts/hertz' witout da car rental satisfaction
Good

Vote: Con

Plot came pretty good, kept it pretty consistent but his only real standout was his finisher and Con had more standouts.

[Pembroke]

Plot

Turn to shit everything U come in contact with, Cons old-hat..
Your battle styles more played to death than Mortal-Kombat!

- Naw, played

& if your steppin up to the plate, you’re just a fool testin ya fate..
Ive more doubts in Confucius, than Buddists questoning their faith. (Cons Futures)

- Nope

Old vet tryin to save a lost rep, but these days your fake at best..
Coz In text battles, Cons become more of a sorry-fuck than make-up sex.

- Played

Watch as U fastly plummet, my knifeplay’ll see you smartly punished
Rip up your gullet, coz the quickest way to a mans hearts thru his stomach.

- Not really going anywhere..

Crippling your keys believe it, crampin your steez like finger seizures..
What U even doin here? Did Shredd punch U so hard your brains amnesia-d?*

- Decent

Beat U in our last meet & now Ur battling me after a no-show last week?
The only bench-marks Cons been making lately are from his sweaty arse-cheeks.

- Dumb

We aint even on the same page, stupid bastard’ll get beaten shame-faced..
Havin a crack at my title? Closest U’ll come’ll be some shitty name-plays.

- Nice

So fall back amateur, or Plot’ll flip all your styles back atcha..
This burn showing Congo up in flames like Bushfires across Africa.

- Okay, weak rhyme fucked it up

Con

forget elimination? fine, knowin plot, skillz built on bad intuition
coz his personals got 'more empty stories' than buildings before demolition

- Kinda..

dont lemme spoil it, watchu cookin P? well, kno my kicks'll boil it
leave plot 'bleeding towards the head' like women wit leaks rushin da toilet

- Nooo..

kids on broke..failure to survive when his punches r most jokes..
win? could join a Carrera giveaway n Plot wouldnt gain a 'portion/porche-on vote'

- 1st line makes you sound Handicap.. concept was wack

got force? Plot only poaches, while spinals train effex wen i blow chests
im makin ya cranium 'collapse/call-laps harsher' than angry track coaches

- No rhyme, weak concept

fuckin da art? nah, these aussies lovin each other keepin each shard
fags, u'd think hes a cardiologist way Plots 'keep Luke-in/look-in his heart'

- I understand, but no..

kid,da roads far, so ready ya writtens for these hoard scars
wit me, Plot'll 'run out of freestyle' like occupyin burning ford cars

- Definitely no..

lethal injections, take my name in vain? just watch my fists objections
fuc rennovating nursing homes..ill have ya 'center broken into sections!'

- ...

my knucks keep building traction so dont think ill miss action
coz bashes left ur 'feeling hurts/hertz' witout da car rental satisfaction

- It's Feelings hurt*.. which means this doesn't work.

v/ Plot

Better verse.. even though he had a few played punchlines, the last two bars took the battle for him.. Con had too many lame wordplays for me to take his verse seriously.. G/L
Stay up

[Criticize]

if your steppin up to the plate, you’re just a fool testin ya fate..
Ive more doubts in Confucius, than Buddists questoning their faith. (Cons Futures)
Old vet tryin to save a lost rep, but these days your fake at best..
Coz In text battles, Cons become more of a sorry-fuck than make-up sex.
Beat U in our last meet & now Ur battling me after a no-show last week?
The only bench-marks Cons been making lately are from his sweaty arse-cheeks.
So fall back amateur, or Plot’ll flip all your styles back atcha..
This burn showing Congo up in flames like Bushfires across Africa.
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Con
coz his personals got 'more empty stories' than buildings before demolition
makin ya cranium 'collapse/call-laps harsher' than angry track coaches
coz bashes left ur 'feeling hurts/hertz' witout da car rental satisfaction
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aiight this was a pretty close battle overall, my fav line from con was the herts line that was nice but i just felt that through your verse a few of your wordplays where a lil stretched and didnt hit as hard as you could have with some lines.
plota had some nice lines to the nameplay and bench mark lines were nice, a few avg lines in there but you get that.

this battle you both had the same amount of good punches, but the rest of plotta's verse hit harder than cons. i.e. con was good and bad. plot was good and ok so yea just a few more better punches edg'd this for plot.

pretty good battle guys

Vote- Plot.

[Con]

2-2..

we need this finished.

[$leepy]

Plot

Turn to shit everything U come in contact with, Cons old-hat..
Your battle styles more played to death than Mortal-Kombat!
played not a good opener
& if your steppin up to the plate, you’re just a fool testin ya fate..
Ive more doubts in Confucius, than Buddists questoning their faith. (Cons Futures)
nah aint feelin it

Old vet tryin to save a lost rep, but these days your fake at best..
Coz In text battles, Cons become more of a sorry-fuck than make-up sex.
ok

Watch as U fastly plummet, my knifeplay’ll see you smartly punished
Rip up your gullet, coz the quickest way to a mans hearts thru his stomach.
nah aint feelin it

Crippling your keys believe it, crampin your steez like finger seizures..
What U even doin here? Did Shredd punch U so hard your brains amnesia-d?*
ok

Beat U in our last meet & now Ur battling me after a no-show last week?
The only bench-marks Cons been making lately are from his sweaty arse-cheeks.
nah aint feelin it again

We aint even on the same page, stupid bastard’ll get beaten shame-faced..
Havin a crack at my title? Closest U’ll come’ll be some shitty name-plays.
i think this is your best bar..nice

So fall back amateur, or Plot’ll flip all your styles back atcha..
This burn showing Congo up in flames like Bushfires across Africa.
decent

Con

forget elimination? fine, knowin plot, skillz built on bad intuition
coz his personals got 'more empty stories' than buildings before demolition
ok

dont lemme spoil it, watchu cookin P? well, kno my kicks'll boil it
leave plot 'bleeding towards the head' like women wit leaks rushin da toilet
nah aint feelin it

kids on broke..failure to survive when his punches r most jokes..
win? could join a Carrera giveaway n Plot wouldnt gain a 'portion/porche-on vote'
ok
got force? Plot only poaches, while spinals train effex wen i blow chests
im makin ya cranium 'collapse/call-laps harsher' than angry track coaches
nah

fuckin da art? nah, these aussies lovin each other keepin each shard
fags, u'd think hes a cardiologist way Plots 'keep Luke-in/look-in his heart'
ok

kid,da roads far, so ready ya writtens for these hoard scars
wit me, Plot'll 'run out of freestyle' like occupyin burning ford cars
nah

lethal injections, take my name in vain? just watch my fists objections
fuc rennovating nursing homes..ill have ya 'center broken into sections!'
nah

my knucks keep building traction so dont think ill miss action
coz bashes left ur 'feeling hurts/hertz' witout da car rental satisfaction
ok i guess

vote-con

he came harder with his verse..plot had one good bar..both could do better..good battle

[Con]

sudden death.

sorry Plot. overtime like a mufucka.